for Force of Souls10/1 c29 Guest
If this is how strong Tatsuki, Orihime and Ichigo are with their Shikai, I am both curious and looking forward to seeing what their future Bankai will be and how they'll obtain them. Keep up the great work with this story.
If this is how strong Tatsuki, Orihime and Ichigo are with their Shikai, I am both curious and looking forward to seeing what their future Bankai will be and how they'll obtain them. Keep up the great work with this story.
8/27 c29 Oxy27
Love to see Rangiku appreciation! Thought the part about her walking around with her tits out was a bit wild ngl. Wish i was there to see it
Love to see Rangiku appreciation! Thought the part about her walking around with her tits out was a bit wild ngl. Wish i was there to see it
8/19 c21 Oxy27
That was a good chapter for Tatsuki. I just never saw things that way about her not letting anyone in, wanting to carry everything on her own. You did a good job though, like how you worded it.
That was a good chapter for Tatsuki. I just never saw things that way about her not letting anyone in, wanting to carry everything on her own. You did a good job though, like how you worded it.
8/16 c29 ZeroExia
Had to reread this story completely due to the screw up with notifications, it’s finally up and working again… for now anyway.
Had to reread this story completely due to the screw up with notifications, it’s finally up and working again… for now anyway.
8/1 c29 Samuraidynamite
I have an attack idea for Ichigo's new bankai that being kuroana(black hole) were he creates a black hole with the swing of a blade or snap of his finger which allows him to negate energy and ranged based attacks by having it be absorbed by the black hole and get destroyed in a manner similar to what Fuga Kudo/Kamen Rider Wind from Kamen Rider Gotchard does with his black hole powers
I have an attack idea for Ichigo's new bankai that being kuroana(black hole) were he creates a black hole with the swing of a blade or snap of his finger which allows him to negate energy and ranged based attacks by having it be absorbed by the black hole and get destroyed in a manner similar to what Fuga Kudo/Kamen Rider Wind from Kamen Rider Gotchard does with his black hole powers
8/3 c14 Giunta
I like the story but removing the TYBW does cause some problems. Mainly one in particular being Ichigo's mother dying. She only died because her powers were taken just as grand fisher attacked. So if there is no TYBW then that means Yhwach never took her powers and would have been strong enough to beat grand fisher since she was able to stand up to White back in the day. Other then that this is going good so far.
I like the story but removing the TYBW does cause some problems. Mainly one in particular being Ichigo's mother dying. She only died because her powers were taken just as grand fisher attacked. So if there is no TYBW then that means Yhwach never took her powers and would have been strong enough to beat grand fisher since she was able to stand up to White back in the day. Other then that this is going good so far.
7/31 c19 Tree
Ah yes the Captains we all know, especially Captain... Matsumoto? Dang i knew things were different with things like Ywach getting sent to Old Scratch and Uryu getting dunked on by his dad but this is one twist i sure as heck wasn't expecting lol.
Ah yes the Captains we all know, especially Captain... Matsumoto? Dang i knew things were different with things like Ywach getting sent to Old Scratch and Uryu getting dunked on by his dad but this is one twist i sure as heck wasn't expecting lol.
7/31 c29 AnimeFan13579
Well definitely interesting encounter occurred between Orihime Tatsuki and Rangiku. Rangiku is definitely the kind to be more laid back like Shunsui. Overall it may be important to capture the Ryoka but she's not in a big rush at the moment. There's also the matter that after that encounter she now knows details and capabilities of two of the Ryoka. Overall I would assume based on the encounter she would probably rate the two as to be confronted by lieutenant and higher unless of course multiple seated officers team up. Tatsuki would be seen as one that gains power the longer the fight goes on so should be dealt with quickly. Orihime is the issue in a way serving as the shield to let Tatsuki build up power. However her own offensive potential is much greater than her Reiryoku would imply in its "cutting" ability. Neither of them would be seen as a threat to a Captain's Bankai or if the Captain got serious. But the offensive capability puts them more in line with lieutenants on the matter of being able to injure a Captain.
Honestly scary thought would be Kenpachi's encounter with them. Tatsuki basically has a combat style that's generally in line with squad eleven. Sure the fire emitted from her zanpakuto can somewhat refer it to semi kido based. However the fact that it amplifies and builds up her physical capability would be the focusing point. As for Orihime well her ability with "cutting" would likely catch his interest. Hers is definitely able to be regarded as more Kido based but he'd likely want to see if she actually could cut him. Overall though in regards to the squads Orihime falls more in line with Unohana. Which I'd actually imagine it would be funny if Orihime tried to imitate the presence Unohana can project to get her way.
Still the lying and guessing at squad 10 wasn't to bad an idea. I would imagine that they would have been told what squads focused on what. Which would mean that there was less than 13 to pick from. Overall I'd say they would have known of maybe 8 or so they could reasonably pick from.
Well definitely interesting encounter occurred between Orihime Tatsuki and Rangiku. Rangiku is definitely the kind to be more laid back like Shunsui. Overall it may be important to capture the Ryoka but she's not in a big rush at the moment. There's also the matter that after that encounter she now knows details and capabilities of two of the Ryoka. Overall I would assume based on the encounter she would probably rate the two as to be confronted by lieutenant and higher unless of course multiple seated officers team up. Tatsuki would be seen as one that gains power the longer the fight goes on so should be dealt with quickly. Orihime is the issue in a way serving as the shield to let Tatsuki build up power. However her own offensive potential is much greater than her Reiryoku would imply in its "cutting" ability. Neither of them would be seen as a threat to a Captain's Bankai or if the Captain got serious. But the offensive capability puts them more in line with lieutenants on the matter of being able to injure a Captain.
Honestly scary thought would be Kenpachi's encounter with them. Tatsuki basically has a combat style that's generally in line with squad eleven. Sure the fire emitted from her zanpakuto can somewhat refer it to semi kido based. However the fact that it amplifies and builds up her physical capability would be the focusing point. As for Orihime well her ability with "cutting" would likely catch his interest. Hers is definitely able to be regarded as more Kido based but he'd likely want to see if she actually could cut him. Overall though in regards to the squads Orihime falls more in line with Unohana. Which I'd actually imagine it would be funny if Orihime tried to imitate the presence Unohana can project to get her way.
Still the lying and guessing at squad 10 wasn't to bad an idea. I would imagine that they would have been told what squads focused on what. Which would mean that there was less than 13 to pick from. Overall I'd say they would have known of maybe 8 or so they could reasonably pick from.
7/30 c29 
4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Awesome! Loved this! I really feel bad for Momo… she doesn’t know just how bad things will get and how they’ll affect her. As for Orihime and Tatsuki, good work on this going up against Rangiku! Close call. Definitely better though than Kurotsuchi. That would’ve been VERY bad. I’m also LOVING Orihime’s “boosted” abilities that are now all thanks to her and her Zanpakutō! Can’t wait to see more!
4Antex-The Legendary ZoroarkAwesome! Loved this! I really feel bad for Momo… she doesn’t know just how bad things will get and how they’ll affect her. As for Orihime and Tatsuki, good work on this going up against Rangiku! Close call. Definitely better though than Kurotsuchi. That would’ve been VERY bad. I’m also LOVING Orihime’s “boosted” abilities that are now all thanks to her and her Zanpakutō! Can’t wait to see more!
7/30 c29 Guest
Well this was fun. Glad Rangiku has been brought in properly now!
Well this was fun. Glad Rangiku has been brought in properly now!
7/30 c29 djinn
great new chapter.
great new chapter.
7/30 c29 fallendemon248
Whoa orihimes way much more versatile than in the show. Wasn't expecting the girls to run into rangiku but hopefully they eventually get to sit down and become friends
Whoa orihimes way much more versatile than in the show. Wasn't expecting the girls to run into rangiku but hopefully they eventually get to sit down and become friends
7/30 c29 linx007
If you're sticking to the general timeframe of the canon invasion then Aizen's "assassination" being next would be my guess. Here's hoping that SOMEONE picks up the clue ball and points out all the inconsistencies with his "death". I mean really the Ryoka who so far have barely beat Renji and had to run from Rangiku (by the way LOVE the idea of her as a captain) managed to not just overpower and kill a captain but do it with his own blade in the middle of their seat of power without ANYONE noticing so much as a blip of power? It was so sloppy I couldn't believe anyone besides Momo would buy it. Thanks for the update and can't wait for more.
If you're sticking to the general timeframe of the canon invasion then Aizen's "assassination" being next would be my guess. Here's hoping that SOMEONE picks up the clue ball and points out all the inconsistencies with his "death". I mean really the Ryoka who so far have barely beat Renji and had to run from Rangiku (by the way LOVE the idea of her as a captain) managed to not just overpower and kill a captain but do it with his own blade in the middle of their seat of power without ANYONE noticing so much as a blip of power? It was so sloppy I couldn't believe anyone besides Momo would buy it. Thanks for the update and can't wait for more.