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8/16/2023 c1 9Paths Through Lavender Fields
Aww, I'm really late reading this, but how nice to see someone tackle this deleted scene in writing. We know they filmed Nathan watching Elizabeth come back into town on Newton with that soft, proud look on his face, but for reasons we won't go into here, they chose not to air the scene, so it's great to see someone's take on the before, during, and after of that scene. Love that you had Nathan hunting down and saddling up another horse to go after them! Ooh, I would have loved to have seen that play out! Also loved that Nathan asked her to go for a horseback ride and she accepted wordlessly. (Cat got her tongue this time, huh? ;) Now, if she just could have run after him, caught him by the arm, and bravely asked him to set a day and time for said ride . . . ! ;) Great one shot, and I like your friend's "Stealing a Mountie's horse now, Elizabeth" line! It opened up a flirty-sweet little moment between them that I smiled my way through.
8/12/2023 c1 Karen Martin
I love that missing scene between Nathan and Eizabeth_NICE!
10/28/2022 c1 dpmancill
Good job. Would love to see more chapters to this story. Take care of yourself and please keep writing.
7/9/2022 c1 Guest
Hopefully you'll continue to write many more Nathan and Elizabeth encounters/adventures. These fanfics are the only things keeping the true epic story alive and are very much anticipated by the readers, especially by this reader. Take care of yourself and please keep writing.
3/12/2021 c1 Michaela
I loved this! It feels as if it actually could have happened between the scenes that we saw!
3/7/2021 c1 Guest
Great writing!
3/7/2021 c1 SaSeLi777
Hey! I liked it all! I’m glad you gave us a glimpse of Nathan‘s reaction, both as a potential rescuer, and as someone who was proud of Elizabeth’s rescue!

Interesting take that Ali may have egged on Robert’s interaction with Sargent!

AND... very good set up for the reason Elizabeth was by the pond for those last three minutes of S8 E2!

Great job!
3/7/2021 c1 5DMP21
I want to thank everyone who has taken the time to read this, and review this. Your lovely feedback means so very much to me, more than I can say!
3/7/2021 c1 Guest
Nice writing! We needed closure for the scene of Elizabeth catching Sergeant and Robert and returning to town. Thank you for writing it for us.
3/7/2021 c1 Guest
Oh boy thanks for sharing, they need to re-write to include this essay. This was so inspiring and so on point. Not only did I read I imagined it at the same time. So so good.
3/7/2021 c1 Rene
Enjoyed your writing. That’s one scene I would have liked to see on the show.
3/7/2021 c1 Nathan fan
I thoroughly enjoyed your flushing out of this scene! It was a crime that they cut it from the episode and we didn't get to see the resolution, but your version is delightful and very much the way I would have liked for it to play out. Well done!
3/7/2021 c1 Rockchelle99
Absolutely loved this one-shot! I couldn’t even tell this was your first time writing for public view! I can’t wait to read more of your stories. You have a great read of the characters personalities & portrayed them perfectly! So well done!
3/7/2021 c1 Guest
Ok girl this was great! Now we’re expecting a full story Well done
3/7/2021 c1 7Elle018
Oh, I am thrilled by this! I love, love, love that you’ve filled the gap with this missing scene for us. I am so glad I can imagine it this way now. Thank you for writing and sharing! I hope to read more like this from you.
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