for The Legend of the Olympians4/17/2021 c2 RebelQueen99
Love it, please update soon. don’t change anything, if people have a problem with how it is then that’s a them problem.
Love it, please update soon. don’t change anything, if people have a problem with how it is then that’s a them problem.
4/14/2021 c2 Guest
I previously commented on how you need to nerd them and as I was re-reading I wanted to give some more pointers. I think you should re-write it and make it so that the cold is something they have to get through. New York is cold but the north is more like northern Canada than New York. Maybe reveal lupa but she can’t get involved and dial back their powers.
I previously commented on how you need to nerd them and as I was re-reading I wanted to give some more pointers. I think you should re-write it and make it so that the cold is something they have to get through. New York is cold but the north is more like northern Canada than New York. Maybe reveal lupa but she can’t get involved and dial back their powers.
4/14/2021 c2 Guest
The premise is good, but the story feels rushed. Lupa and Hestia showing themselves feels wrong. You should rewrite a few things.
The premise is good, but the story feels rushed. Lupa and Hestia showing themselves feels wrong. You should rewrite a few things.
4/14/2021 c2 namer1
The story is very interesting and I hope to see more, but I feel like either it is a bit rushed or more the gods are OOC. Even if they are in a new world, they are still secretive and don't like sharing things, even if it's just a bit of information
The story is very interesting and I hope to see more, but I feel like either it is a bit rushed or more the gods are OOC. Even if they are in a new world, they are still secretive and don't like sharing things, even if it's just a bit of information
4/7/2021 c2 the 13th guest
I love this so far, keep up the good work
I love this so far, keep up the good work
4/7/2021 c2 Guest
It seems like you are making it too easy for them. They were welcomed with open arms but northerners are known to be distrusting. And you immediately mention that the westerosi religious structure is a sham. Consider hiding the goddesses and think about how their cultures could clash. Also try and nerf them a bit they would steamroll everyone. Good premise overall!
It seems like you are making it too easy for them. They were welcomed with open arms but northerners are known to be distrusting. And you immediately mention that the westerosi religious structure is a sham. Consider hiding the goddesses and think about how their cultures could clash. Also try and nerf them a bit they would steamroll everyone. Good premise overall!
4/6/2021 c2 Zet666
Genial capitulo vuena la introduccion de algunos personajes. Sea dragon poin sera genial para los olimpicos y tambien sera costa pedregosa. Seria genial renombrar seadragonpion como Territorio Olimpia creando un consejo de Casas basadas en los dioses Olimpicos
Genial capitulo vuena la introduccion de algunos personajes. Sea dragon poin sera genial para los olimpicos y tambien sera costa pedregosa. Seria genial renombrar seadragonpion como Territorio Olimpia creando un consejo de Casas basadas en los dioses Olimpicos
4/6/2021 c2 Guest
This is amazing
This is amazing
4/6/2021 c2 
166buttercup99
Felt a little rushed, and I feel like maybe some more of the mythological beings would be hidden. I still like it though, look forward to next update. Has lots of potential
166buttercup99Felt a little rushed, and I feel like maybe some more of the mythological beings would be hidden. I still like it though, look forward to next update. Has lots of potential
4/6/2021 c2 Lerm
Also at the point where percy splits off to go help you mention that the riders that go with him he didn't recognise except for clarisses brother then later during combat you say that Jason, Clarisse, Renya and Nico are with him and don't mention Clarisses brother. Just a small continuity error that's easily fixable.
Also at the point where percy splits off to go help you mention that the riders that go with him he didn't recognise except for clarisses brother then later during combat you say that Jason, Clarisse, Renya and Nico are with him and don't mention Clarisses brother. Just a small continuity error that's easily fixable.