
5/18 c41 Armiture
I had a good laugh at the first arc when I imagined Lily and Jouster giggling like Beavis and Butthead from the infamous cartoon. I was amused when the new Ironskin spell cleaned Snek's scales with March's explosion.
That said, I'm glad that things went very well for Dragon and I found your latest version of March to be very interesting and disturbing.
A belated thanks for the update.
I had a good laugh at the first arc when I imagined Lily and Jouster giggling like Beavis and Butthead from the infamous cartoon. I was amused when the new Ironskin spell cleaned Snek's scales with March's explosion.
That said, I'm glad that things went very well for Dragon and I found your latest version of March to be very interesting and disturbing.
A belated thanks for the update.
4/25 c41
2Jack Inqu
I'm very happy that Dragon has an adopted family of dragons. :)
Good on Snek for taking care of March; like Jack Slash, she seemed to be a villain that was designed to be as annoying and difficult to take down as possible for the sake of drama and plot.
Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update.

I'm very happy that Dragon has an adopted family of dragons. :)
Good on Snek for taking care of March; like Jack Slash, she seemed to be a villain that was designed to be as annoying and difficult to take down as possible for the sake of drama and plot.
Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update.
4/24 c41
29Kairan1979
Pleased to see March captured before she could do something to Flechette. I wonder what happens to her now.
P.S. There's Purple Girl, there's Purple Hair Girl, and now there's Purple Dart Girl. They should totally team-up.

Pleased to see March captured before she could do something to Flechette. I wonder what happens to her now.
P.S. There's Purple Girl, there's Purple Hair Girl, and now there's Purple Dart Girl. They should totally team-up.
4/24 c41
10Greyff
Mad as a March hare, that one.
Nicely written. And another step away from the brink for Earth Bet.

Mad as a March hare, that one.
Nicely written. And another step away from the brink for Earth Bet.
4/24 c41
202Marcus Rowland
Nice! I'm just re-reading A Darker Path and read Taylor's meeting with March last night - March really doesn't have much fun in your universes...

Nice! I'm just re-reading A Darker Path and read Taylor's meeting with March last night - March really doesn't have much fun in your universes...
4/5 c40 Armiture
I really liked the sense of wonder you gave to Dragon, I'm trying to remember, is she using the human name of Teresa Richter?
Her worry about "those kinds of transformations" reminded me of a gag in the ancient webcomic Sluggy Freelance, where the main characters ended up in a universe with a Voltron like robot and only the female team member went nude during their costume transformation. And her teammates never told her.
Thanks for the update.
I really liked the sense of wonder you gave to Dragon, I'm trying to remember, is she using the human name of Teresa Richter?
Her worry about "those kinds of transformations" reminded me of a gag in the ancient webcomic Sluggy Freelance, where the main characters ended up in a universe with a Voltron like robot and only the female team member went nude during their costume transformation. And her teammates never told her.
Thanks for the update.
4/5 c39 Armiture
I'm glad that Dragon is mentally tougher than the protagonist AI of Zelazny's "For a Breath I Tarry" who fled back to his mainframe after spending a few seconds in a human body he had cloned. I hope she and Spark have a long and happy life together.
That said, pizza and burgers is a great way to celebrate taking down the most dreadful gang in Brockton Bay. I'm also hoping that Squealer and Skidmark are still in Snek's no-eat-place and got some scorpion pepper fumes while contemplating their fate.
Thanks for the update.
I'm glad that Dragon is mentally tougher than the protagonist AI of Zelazny's "For a Breath I Tarry" who fled back to his mainframe after spending a few seconds in a human body he had cloned. I hope she and Spark have a long and happy life together.
That said, pizza and burgers is a great way to celebrate taking down the most dreadful gang in Brockton Bay. I'm also hoping that Squealer and Skidmark are still in Snek's no-eat-place and got some scorpion pepper fumes while contemplating their fate.
Thanks for the update.
4/5 c38 Armiture
I like your idea that Skidmark would be foul-tasting to Snek, thanks for the laughs.
I'm looking forward to Dragon's draconic body reveal.
A belated thanks for the update.
I like your idea that Skidmark would be foul-tasting to Snek, thanks for the laughs.
I'm looking forward to Dragon's draconic body reveal.
A belated thanks for the update.
4/4 c12
2matthewrister
Dewey Cheatem and howe and gripsack pullet and twist attorneys at law both would be good for Goblin lawyers in a Harry Potter fanfiction

Dewey Cheatem and howe and gripsack pullet and twist attorneys at law both would be good for Goblin lawyers in a Harry Potter fanfiction
4/3 c3 matthewrister
reading your fanfiction for the first time and my theory is that snek is a basilisk and he is The Familiar of Salazar Slytherin
reading your fanfiction for the first time and my theory is that snek is a basilisk and he is The Familiar of Salazar Slytherin