for Practice Makes Perfect23h c50 The Dweller of The Deep
good one.
will probably be hard to juggle the fight and plot not dragging on too long these next few chapters
good one.
will probably be hard to juggle the fight and plot not dragging on too long these next few chapters
6/17 c50 Guest
Can't wait to see the rest of the fight and the minefield.
Can't wait to see the rest of the fight and the minefield.
6/18 c50 Belios
I'm really disliking Naruto in this fic. He's thoroughly unpleasant and his wife is even worse.
I'm really disliking Naruto in this fic. He's thoroughly unpleasant and his wife is even worse.
6/17 c50 Guest
Is that team of girls from Vacuo going to try and seduce Jaune once they see how strong he is?
Is that team of girls from Vacuo going to try and seduce Jaune once they see how strong he is?
6/16 c50 
1Ultimatrix bearer
oh boy. Wonder how the whole ren is related to Cinder thing will play out.
KEEP BEING AWESOME!
1Ultimatrix beareroh boy. Wonder how the whole ren is related to Cinder thing will play out.
KEEP BEING AWESOME!
6/16 c50 Cf96
Nice
Nice
6/16 c50 Guest
and the long awaited duel finally happens
and the long awaited duel finally happens