
9/5/2010 c1
36ShinyTogeticFTW
Aww, that's awesome! Just one question: how did that kid beat Misty with a Geodude? Unless the Geodude didn't enter the battle until her last Pokemon was already close to fainting. I guess it was just a throwaway occurence anyway; the gym battle really doesn't have anything to do with the story other than showing that life goes on while Misty is missing Ash, right? I love how you had her receive a letter (as opposed to getting a phone call), that was really cool.

Aww, that's awesome! Just one question: how did that kid beat Misty with a Geodude? Unless the Geodude didn't enter the battle until her last Pokemon was already close to fainting. I guess it was just a throwaway occurence anyway; the gym battle really doesn't have anything to do with the story other than showing that life goes on while Misty is missing Ash, right? I love how you had her receive a letter (as opposed to getting a phone call), that was really cool.
1/5/2009 c1
32pikagurl23
A beautifully written fic, especially for a first attempt! Though the plot is generic, you made it your own and truly brought out Misty's emotions at being separated from Ash. Great job! Now, I'm off to read the rest of your fics!

A beautifully written fic, especially for a first attempt! Though the plot is generic, you made it your own and truly brought out Misty's emotions at being separated from Ash. Great job! Now, I'm off to read the rest of your fics!
6/20/2007 c1
1Dragon Master Paul
it was very good when they left each other in the anime that was it. it was like its over but this gives me hope, all the newer episodes suck b/c they just dont have like a common romance about them that they occasionally had with the old ones.

it was very good when they left each other in the anime that was it. it was like its over but this gives me hope, all the newer episodes suck b/c they just dont have like a common romance about them that they occasionally had with the old ones.
10/26/2006 c1
23d i n o b o t
I like the theme and the concept. I kinda have a hard time believing Ash could write something like that, but all of us pokeshipping writers have to stretch his character because he is indeed that romantically challenged. I like it a lot.

I like the theme and the concept. I kinda have a hard time believing Ash could write something like that, but all of us pokeshipping writers have to stretch his character because he is indeed that romantically challenged. I like it a lot.
9/2/2006 c1 Kitten Kisses
I think it's really good. I thought that part of the letter was a little OOC, but it still flowed well. I imagine Misty would be very lonely all alone all the time like that. I've been housesitting alone all week for a coworker, and I have to say, that when I open up the door to let the dog back in, I get thoughts like "God, what if some random person comes in when I open that door?". Terrible!
Thanks for a great story. I enjoyed reading it. =)
I think it's really good. I thought that part of the letter was a little OOC, but it still flowed well. I imagine Misty would be very lonely all alone all the time like that. I've been housesitting alone all week for a coworker, and I have to say, that when I open up the door to let the dog back in, I get thoughts like "God, what if some random person comes in when I open that door?". Terrible!
Thanks for a great story. I enjoyed reading it. =)
7/22/2006 c1
9RiaSternchen
CUTE *_*
Now all I miss is a sequel in which Ash comes to pick her up or something^^
YEY!

CUTE *_*
Now all I miss is a sequel in which Ash comes to pick her up or something^^
YEY!
11/17/2005 c1
18SweetStories11
OMG! THAT WAS SO AMAZING! seriously wow... i loved it! Awesome job! ^-^
-Monika-

OMG! THAT WAS SO AMAZING! seriously wow... i loved it! Awesome job! ^-^
-Monika-
9/14/2005 c1 Katie
Oh! I loved it! So so cute! i liked it a lot. Please, PLEASE write more! I like your writting stradegy a lot, and I want to read more of it. Please, with a cherry on top?
TTFN
DrunkaHomestar
Oh! I loved it! So so cute! i liked it a lot. Please, PLEASE write more! I like your writting stradegy a lot, and I want to read more of it. Please, with a cherry on top?
TTFN
DrunkaHomestar
8/18/2005 c1
13PinkCamellia
Oh my gosh! That was SOO sweet! I think I feel tears coming to my eyes! Wow! This was only your first fanfic? Wow! That's all I can say. *sniffle* ^^

Oh my gosh! That was SOO sweet! I think I feel tears coming to my eyes! Wow! This was only your first fanfic? Wow! That's all I can say. *sniffle* ^^
5/6/2005 c1 wishfulness
this was such a sweet fic!
i miss misty , she shouldn't have left. i like may but misty's better.
anyways keepup the good wrk
this was such a sweet fic!
i miss misty , she shouldn't have left. i like may but misty's better.
anyways keepup the good wrk