for Flowers for Twilight4/10/2021 c1 Draughtjunkman
beautiful story. Very well written and entertaining. Your characters are very believable. Your prose is nice as well. overall I have only praise.
I always thought enterprise was missing a time loop and I agree, twilight was always one of my favorite episodes as well.
My favorite time loop is from stargate SG1 "Window of opportunity" the episode is simply hilarious and they really took advantage of the opportunity such an episode presented.
Thank you for writing this wonderful piece.
beautiful story. Very well written and entertaining. Your characters are very believable. Your prose is nice as well. overall I have only praise.
I always thought enterprise was missing a time loop and I agree, twilight was always one of my favorite episodes as well.
My favorite time loop is from stargate SG1 "Window of opportunity" the episode is simply hilarious and they really took advantage of the opportunity such an episode presented.
Thank you for writing this wonderful piece.
3/24/2021 c1 
69cojack
I enjoyed this story very much, although I have one big issue with it. As in Groundhog Day, I can accept that Phil and Archer might become so desperate with the endless looping that they might lose hope and contemplate suicide. I don't think, however, Archer would do anything that would endanger anyone else on the crew (analogous to Phil not killing or harming anyone in Punxsutawney, with the exception of the groundhog himself). Along those same lines, I also don't like the notion of Archer and/or T'Pol becoming violent because of a mind meld gone wrong. I did like the allusions to both Groundhog Day and Edge of Tomorrow, both excellent movies, and otherwise very well written.
69cojackI enjoyed this story very much, although I have one big issue with it. As in Groundhog Day, I can accept that Phil and Archer might become so desperate with the endless looping that they might lose hope and contemplate suicide. I don't think, however, Archer would do anything that would endanger anyone else on the crew (analogous to Phil not killing or harming anyone in Punxsutawney, with the exception of the groundhog himself). Along those same lines, I also don't like the notion of Archer and/or T'Pol becoming violent because of a mind meld gone wrong. I did like the allusions to both Groundhog Day and Edge of Tomorrow, both excellent movies, and otherwise very well written.
3/21/2021 c1 47EnlightenedSkye
This was amazing! I love this pairing, and Twilight is also one of my favorite ENT episodes. What really sets Archer and T'Pol apart, I feel, is how their mutual respect at the beginning turns into love over time. At the end of the day, they'll always be there for each other. You can really see it in their interactions here. Beautiful and compelling work!
47EnlightenedSkyeThis was amazing! I love this pairing, and Twilight is also one of my favorite ENT episodes. What really sets Archer and T'Pol apart, I feel, is how their mutual respect at the beginning turns into love over time. At the end of the day, they'll always be there for each other. You can really see it in their interactions here. Beautiful and compelling work!