for Perfect Half Breed4/1/2021 c2 The Black Kraven
Make the misremembered names a trope for Kai. It will be hilarious plus make it so that he does it deliberately to people like he did just now with Rias by calling her tomato. Good job. Also, idk make a summary so that more ppl can read this gem . Good work tho
Make the misremembered names a trope for Kai. It will be hilarious plus make it so that he does it deliberately to people like he did just now with Rias by calling her tomato. Good job. Also, idk make a summary so that more ppl can read this gem . Good work tho
4/1/2021 c2 
4SharksFan
Hello,
I'm a big fan since 2017, and am really excited to see Perfect Half-Breed back as I really was looking forward to how the original story would play out. Just one question: I see that you are having the Shuzen family and Moka take a backseat this time around and am wondering if they are going to play a role in this version, or are you just focusing on the DxD stuff to keep things streamlined? I really liked Kai and Moka's relationship in the old story, but if you feel that another approach is better, all the power to you.
I hope you keep writing and also update some of your other stories.
4SharksFanHello,
I'm a big fan since 2017, and am really excited to see Perfect Half-Breed back as I really was looking forward to how the original story would play out. Just one question: I see that you are having the Shuzen family and Moka take a backseat this time around and am wondering if they are going to play a role in this version, or are you just focusing on the DxD stuff to keep things streamlined? I really liked Kai and Moka's relationship in the old story, but if you feel that another approach is better, all the power to you.
I hope you keep writing and also update some of your other stories.
4/1/2021 c1 connorrehkopf
This sucks!
could it be possible that you could create a story where Issei is invited to a swim party as a reward and accidentally spills a aphrodisiac on him and all the girls there want to have sex with him? could u do that please that would be awesome
This sucks!
could it be possible that you could create a story where Issei is invited to a swim party as a reward and accidentally spills a aphrodisiac on him and all the girls there want to have sex with him? could u do that please that would be awesome
3/29/2021 c1 altajir95
Very interesting story, with the main character being Issei's adoptive brother, looking forward for the next chapter.
Keep up the good work, and stay healthy.
Very interesting story, with the main character being Issei's adoptive brother, looking forward for the next chapter.
Keep up the good work, and stay healthy.
3/21/2021 c1 Nivek Beldo
Both are going to get killed by raynare and becoming devil ? If yes that is sad and unoriginal
Both are going to get killed by raynare and becoming devil ? If yes that is sad and unoriginal
3/21/2021 c1 3Warscar
this is a kind of stupid funny that just makes you cackle as you read it while it warms the heart with feels. I love it
3Warscarthis is a kind of stupid funny that just makes you cackle as you read it while it warms the heart with feels. I love it
3/21/2021 c1 Warscar
this is a kind of stupid funny that just makes you cackle as you read it while it warms the heart with feels. I love it
this is a kind of stupid funny that just makes you cackle as you read it while it warms the heart with feels. I love it