for RWBY: AZURE LIFE12/11/2021 c7 
1ISuckM8
Here's some lovely "Creative Criticism", take it with a grain of salt.
The biggest problem that I had while reading this story was the grammar, there are multiple grammar mistakes/errors in every chapter, the story's summary alone has multiple mistakes. I'm gonna give you the benefit of the doubt and say "Maybe English isn't his first language."
The plot is a bit more original than your average RWBY story, though it's still quite early to judge it.
So, conclusion? It's salvageable, get Grammarly, spend extra time editing your chapters, or find a beta-reader.
1ISuckM8Here's some lovely "Creative Criticism", take it with a grain of salt.
The biggest problem that I had while reading this story was the grammar, there are multiple grammar mistakes/errors in every chapter, the story's summary alone has multiple mistakes. I'm gonna give you the benefit of the doubt and say "Maybe English isn't his first language."
The plot is a bit more original than your average RWBY story, though it's still quite early to judge it.
So, conclusion? It's salvageable, get Grammarly, spend extra time editing your chapters, or find a beta-reader.