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6/7 c7 Chryseum
It started off good, but now it just feels like constant trash crack, the jokes are fine but you keep adding more ridiculous stuff that only exists in crack novels. It's a pity as this fic had such a good premise...
6/1 c8 Suzululu4moe
A land of void users…. Good thing Colbert isn’t very religious .
6/1 c7 Suzululu4moe
Well at least now ppl can see she isn’t a zero.

It would be interesting to see the reference .
6/1 c5 Suzululu4moe
Hmm most travelled portrait in history .
6/1 c4 Suzululu4moe
Too bad Remus is not alive. Imagine fawkes chucking a big bear at him
6/1 c3 Suzululu4moe
Lol colbert thinking of death is no escape from students. The horror ! Imagine if Karin died and became a portrait as an advisor for the future manticore knights or the tristian army
6/1 c2 Suzululu4moe
Poor Louise the insanity… though she is lucky she didn’t get a cross over with Discwlrld instead . Those unseen university wizards make HP shenanigans look sane.
6/1 c1 Suzululu4moe
Interesting take on fawkes .

Hmm her sister Cattelya would probably love the animals book .
5/14 c9 James Birdsong
Good chapter
5/14 c9 Guest
Man from the sound of things Guiche is luring the young female students to secluded places so this Franz character can have his merry way with them.

I know you asked me to hold off judgement, and that his version of Guiche is going to be different than the canon version. Well I think the canon version is better at this point. I'd take flamboyant Guiche to 2nd degree rapists Guiche any day.
5/14 c9 sparsh
I am a fan coiling dragon series too nice referance
5/14 c9 1keybladelight
Did Tabitha just use the Harry Potter world magic spell and why. Does she interesting in the wizard world.

Hey if the zero of familiar characters were going to hogwarts which house wizard they will be I was hoping for louise to be a gryffindor were the original trio (Harry, Hermione and Ron) when.
5/6 c8 That is Nasty
You're doing [Louise Guiche] dude that is just nasty, did you maybe add it by mistake? It would be better to keep her single, or just pair her with an OC, but not Guiche. Hell you could even write Saito into the story, as a muggleborn whose parents immigrated to England before he was born. Just anything but Guiche, Julio is a better choice, Kirche or Tabitha is a better choice. The only character worse than Guiche is Wardes.
5/6 c8 Guest
Ah so you just so happen to have left several objects lying around Louise room that if touched will automatically transport the user to Hogwarts. I can't help but wonder why you'd do something so careless.
5/6 c8 James Birdsong
Excellent chapter
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