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6/23/2022 c1 warframeDies
Man this is damned cringy for this AU and crossover. : /

Lore-wise and realistically the Gardener wouldn't be this (as typical for Many gictional False 'gods' out there and authors' interpretations for their said-genie-like 'Lord God' versions) singularly too favorite over a single and little bit safe era-living mortal life form like Fuutarou here. Especially in their version of the Pre-Golden Age era. What is the said-Traveling Gardener even puttibg too much focus on this reality even? No offense as She spreads her Life Growth etc Philosophy across ALL of realities dimensions alternate universes that's fine but shouldn't She be preparing the more dire ones like back with Destiny's canon Humanity version and their state as for Her final argument against the Witness' Sword way.

Ahhg sometjing else I want to say more but that's all.

I vote for a rewrite. Any other or yourself again out there and probably put the Quintessential Quintuplets' very safe Pre-Golden Age age into a more dystopian like state something simila like that of TITANOMACH Triumvirate (I forgot the correct title!) 'S situation. Read that Destiny AU story by the way. Its so good Gardener and Her early deployment of Chosen Guardians against the rest of that version's stubborn and Evil early Golden Age Humanity that are under that Triumvirate global government control. Take inspiration. What woild Fuutarou and the quints' reaction to such a life on where they woild now kived but as usual the Gardener teleports in next to prepare them all.
5/25/2022 c11 4HTDirtyDan
Alright so I finished this and gotta say it was pretty good but like update when tho
2/25/2022 c1 Guest
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1/27/2022 c11 somereader
Oh boy. Over a year of stacking up chapters for the story. When you come back this fic is going on a WILD ride.
10/4/2021 c11 1jameszyrel619
update?
8/29/2021 c6 4ntares
Well~ would you look at that, it's not so bad after all, the interactions are much better already, and my heart is warm
8/29/2021 c2 Guest
What? No man, I completely understand that Fuutarou would be different in this, hell I'm already loving his attitude, but not Youtsuba, not like that, what's this possessiveness? Yeah, she loves Fuutarou, but she cares deeply about her sisters too, she would never ever treat them like that
8/29/2021 c2 4ntares
Gosh author, I'm trying to enjoy this, but you are seriously making it difficult, one of the reasons I like QQ so much it's because the MC doesn't gets flustered over almost every single thing like other romcoms out there, and he couldn't care less about what other think of him
8/29/2021 c1 4ntares
The dialogue and interaction doesn't natural at all, the characters look like a bunch of robots talking, and didn't Fuutarou saw his lifetime or whatever? Why does he look like he still doesn't know anything? And what's with him cursing Jesus Christ near the end? They're japanese for fuck sake

Looks like you're gonna force the shit out of everything and not onlly that, you lack common sense too
8/10/2021 c11 me12222
very nice. hope you update soon
6/3/2021 c11 11AllSlayer
Love this fic so much
6/3/2021 c11 Shade
Epic fanfic bro
5/24/2021 c1 Guest
I'm starting to get crazy bc it's almost been a month since he last updated
5/23/2021 c11 1jameszyrel619
update? you have a long break its almost 1 month haha
5/12/2021 c1 OnePunchPlayer
1. I have so many, but I don't even have Ti-...(yes you get the joke. most Guardian-players who writes this get her saying from back then).

by the [ Shard ] ... [ eyes widened Not expecting This to ever happen let alone with the main [ Flower Game(s) ] /omniverse(s) having to secretly [ influence ] this one single Anime-esc [ Flower ] /multiverse ]

Not through an [ Agent ] ? by the [ Sky ] [ Itself ] ? [ Frowns Narrowing eyes at this one character ] I would say this Lore-wise realistically for a bit: 'Why though? What did this pre-Golden Age child Devoted to more in a goodness way?...What did he Brave through to?...What Hard Life Sacrifice did he made for himself?...What Genuine good did he Physically die for, huh?'.

That is all. [ calmly and bluntly Tried to quiet down for now ]

Again, seriously... [ Sighed in Exasperation of this ] What shall this man do in the meantime of Years of this pre-Golden Age era just before (highly likely?) a Certain Spherical [ Agent ] of the [ Light ] will eventually spark this alternative [ Flower's ] version of Anime Humanity's Golden Age? not like he's going to herald a [ Traveler ] or something right? also his 300 Years of lifespan or he's now invisibly being provided by a light Years far [ Traveler ] that he's now near-immortally ageless? a Ghost of his isn't there yet though to make him completely near-undying from inevitable atomizations. etc...

2. why isn't this alternative pre-Golden Age story in the Destiny crossover archive sec tion instead? [ curiously wondering ]
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