for The King's Blade3/29/2021 c2 Leedan Zahndrekh
Have you ever written a piece of essay before? Because I can tell you, it isn't easy. It takes time, patience, brainstormin ideas and figuring out coherent sentences when writing it out.
I would like for you, Zahndrekh, to write me a 20k word essay in the next three days for me. Sarcasm.
As it is I know you aren't going to do it and write a response to this message, and frankly I don't care.
What you shouldn't do is tell another person to goddammit suicide bait another person. Sure you can "criticize" a person work but
DON'T SUICIDE BAIT ANOTHER PERSON NOR DO YOU CALL THEM NAMES.
If you are here to just antagonise people, then don't do it here. And be more respectful about it. Thats all.
Have you ever written a piece of essay before? Because I can tell you, it isn't easy. It takes time, patience, brainstormin ideas and figuring out coherent sentences when writing it out.
I would like for you, Zahndrekh, to write me a 20k word essay in the next three days for me. Sarcasm.
As it is I know you aren't going to do it and write a response to this message, and frankly I don't care.
What you shouldn't do is tell another person to goddammit suicide bait another person. Sure you can "criticize" a person work but
DON'T SUICIDE BAIT ANOTHER PERSON NOR DO YOU CALL THEM NAMES.
If you are here to just antagonise people, then don't do it here. And be more respectful about it. Thats all.
3/29/2021 c1 Phantom Thief of Hearts
Those three characters are not the only ones, I guarantee it.
You were very missing other characters like Hakuno (male and female), Waver Velvet, Erice Utsumi, Sieg, Ayaka Sajyou, Kanata Akagi, Manaka Sajyou.
Seriously speaking, I like the idea but I didn't like how it was made, I would personally prefer other Nasuverse characters or other Servants in Queen's Blade ... any other character would be interesting, except Emiya and Shirou (Fate / stay night) but that's my opinion personal.
Emiya's new life is too cliche for my personal taste. And the "Harem" disappoints me, since it doesn't get out of the ordinary when using Claudette and Risty but Nyx is an interesting option.
Thank you for not using that personalityless Gary Stu named Leina / Reina
Your story, Your rules, so I wish you good luck,7th Pride.
Those three characters are not the only ones, I guarantee it.
You were very missing other characters like Hakuno (male and female), Waver Velvet, Erice Utsumi, Sieg, Ayaka Sajyou, Kanata Akagi, Manaka Sajyou.
Seriously speaking, I like the idea but I didn't like how it was made, I would personally prefer other Nasuverse characters or other Servants in Queen's Blade ... any other character would be interesting, except Emiya and Shirou (Fate / stay night) but that's my opinion personal.
Emiya's new life is too cliche for my personal taste. And the "Harem" disappoints me, since it doesn't get out of the ordinary when using Claudette and Risty but Nyx is an interesting option.
Thank you for not using that personalityless Gary Stu named Leina / Reina
Your story, Your rules, so I wish you good luck,7th Pride.
3/29/2021 c2 Guest
Interesting story! Will be waiting for next chapter!
Interesting story! Will be waiting for next chapter!
3/29/2021 c2 Thatguy2047
That Zahn guy geez. Pot calling the kettle black much. While this is not my kind of story either. The writing itself actually isn’t that bad. While again, not my cup of tea. Keep it up to refine your writing !
That Zahn guy geez. Pot calling the kettle black much. While this is not my kind of story either. The writing itself actually isn’t that bad. While again, not my cup of tea. Keep it up to refine your writing !
3/29/2021 c1 Zahndrekh
So Emiya, Shirou and Ritsuka are the only ones with that exaggerated Skill that you and other assholes use for Bullshit ... and what about Hakuno, you really are such an ignorant asshole.
Help humanity and jump off a cliff and stop writing this cancer Fanon This site already has a lot of shit of that no more is needed
So Emiya, Shirou and Ritsuka are the only ones with that exaggerated Skill that you and other assholes use for Bullshit ... and what about Hakuno, you really are such an ignorant asshole.
Help humanity and jump off a cliff and stop writing this cancer Fanon This site already has a lot of shit of that no more is needed