
3/4 c63 The Avid Reader
Great chapter as always.
Great chapter as always.
3/4 c63 Guest
Excellent.
Excellent.
3/4 c63 Guest
It’s nice seeing two thirteen year olds actually act like thirteen year olds.
It’s nice seeing two thirteen year olds actually act like thirteen year olds.
3/4 c63
1Wicked.A
The new chapter is still password protected on your site pls fix it since I want to read it with the deleted scenes

The new chapter is still password protected on your site pls fix it since I want to read it with the deleted scenes
3/4 c63 Sunny JS
This is defo my favourite Harry. I just hope you don't kill off Sirius.
This is defo my favourite Harry. I just hope you don't kill off Sirius.
3/4 c63 Lord TA Black
I haven’t reviewed in a little while but I’m loving book 3. The prose are much, much better and I like the shorter chapters. They just have a snappy flow to them that makes me want to keep reading.
The Grindelwald connections are still probably my favourite part of the story. If only Fantastic Beasts did his backstory half so well. The movies might actually be successful if they had.
I sometimes wish we got to see a bit more of Harry and his friends but when we do see them, it’s great so I don’t really mind.
I especially like the Pansy stuff. It all feels so natural and believable for two people their age and is a breath of fresh air.
Oh, and a question while I’m here.
Will we ever find out why the dementors flee from Harry? It seems like the sort of thing that might never be answered and in a way I think that might be cool, but I’m also really curious.
Love your work as always and can’t wait for the next chapter.
I haven’t reviewed in a little while but I’m loving book 3. The prose are much, much better and I like the shorter chapters. They just have a snappy flow to them that makes me want to keep reading.
The Grindelwald connections are still probably my favourite part of the story. If only Fantastic Beasts did his backstory half so well. The movies might actually be successful if they had.
I sometimes wish we got to see a bit more of Harry and his friends but when we do see them, it’s great so I don’t really mind.
I especially like the Pansy stuff. It all feels so natural and believable for two people their age and is a breath of fresh air.
Oh, and a question while I’m here.
Will we ever find out why the dementors flee from Harry? It seems like the sort of thing that might never be answered and in a way I think that might be cool, but I’m also really curious.
Love your work as always and can’t wait for the next chapter.
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