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2/28 c18 RDDash
They are just angry that the ministry had found a way to pillage their mansions. They just don't see the value in the Artur Weasley's job that takes care of magical artifacts that goes into muggles hands.
They are just angry that the ministry had found a way to pillage their mansions. They just don't see the value in the Artur Weasley's job that takes care of magical artifacts that goes into muggles hands.
2/25 c62 Peetree's Favourites
Hi Author,
Really enjoying the story overall, great job, there was just a couple of things that left me uncomfortable because I thought they deserved more care/attention.
1. Harry does not seem in character with his 'revenge' on Daphne for her attempted murder, with his manipulating of her sister. Its not that I think the manipulation isn't something Harry would start doing, its that it seems like he's trying to provoke Daphne when she has already proven she would be willing to kill him. But he hasn't actually done anything to neutralize her threat so his response doesn't make sense to me. He has shown righteous fury before, why not now when the truth is on his side? Is he afraid of her? I don't understand his response. Someone betrays him and tries to kill him and he thinks, "I'm gonna manipulate her sister to break down their relationship"?
2. I can't remember the chapter, but when Harry starts corresponding with Voldemort he says to himself something along the lines of, "I'm just doing what's best for me. How can that be wrong?" I understand he's naïve and confused, especially morally, as is the point of the story. But is this statement really gonna go unchallenged? Like surely there's someone in the story who starts to present a steel man argument for basic concepts of self-discipline when it comes to lust, greed, guttony, murder, domination, or any other act which ruins other people's lives for self-gain. I think making Dumbledore a mostly decent character is good starting point, but the strength of your case for the darklords is connected to the strength of your case for the good guys or at least the opposite is true. You can't have a great hero without a great villain or a great calamity. I want to see the conviction with which the "good" guys fight, what keeps them going against Voldemort and Grindewald?
Hi Author,
Really enjoying the story overall, great job, there was just a couple of things that left me uncomfortable because I thought they deserved more care/attention.
1. Harry does not seem in character with his 'revenge' on Daphne for her attempted murder, with his manipulating of her sister. Its not that I think the manipulation isn't something Harry would start doing, its that it seems like he's trying to provoke Daphne when she has already proven she would be willing to kill him. But he hasn't actually done anything to neutralize her threat so his response doesn't make sense to me. He has shown righteous fury before, why not now when the truth is on his side? Is he afraid of her? I don't understand his response. Someone betrays him and tries to kill him and he thinks, "I'm gonna manipulate her sister to break down their relationship"?
2. I can't remember the chapter, but when Harry starts corresponding with Voldemort he says to himself something along the lines of, "I'm just doing what's best for me. How can that be wrong?" I understand he's naïve and confused, especially morally, as is the point of the story. But is this statement really gonna go unchallenged? Like surely there's someone in the story who starts to present a steel man argument for basic concepts of self-discipline when it comes to lust, greed, guttony, murder, domination, or any other act which ruins other people's lives for self-gain. I think making Dumbledore a mostly decent character is good starting point, but the strength of your case for the darklords is connected to the strength of your case for the good guys or at least the opposite is true. You can't have a great hero without a great villain or a great calamity. I want to see the conviction with which the "good" guys fight, what keeps them going against Voldemort and Grindewald?
2/25 c62 Tony McNucklz
Ah. With the Mentor description I guess it was to be expected, but somehow I thought it would be a bit longer before direct contact.
Ah. With the Mentor description I guess it was to be expected, but somehow I thought it would be a bit longer before direct contact.
2/20 c22 Battlesny
wow, it's like the murder equivalent of a parent making a child smoke an entire pack of cigarettes because they caught them with one.
wow, it's like the murder equivalent of a parent making a child smoke an entire pack of cigarettes because they caught them with one.
2/19 c61 
1Wicked.A
Nice chapter I also read the cut scenes, they were also nice, I like how you portrayed "him" it seemed pretty in character.
1Wicked.ANice chapter I also read the cut scenes, they were also nice, I like how you portrayed "him" it seemed pretty in character.
2/18 c61 Amortal
It was very well written and the length of it was very welcome. I personally always enjoyed longer chapters because they hold more detail. Things are progressing nicely, I look forward to the next chapter.
It was very well written and the length of it was very welcome. I personally always enjoyed longer chapters because they hold more detail. Things are progressing nicely, I look forward to the next chapter.