
2/7 c56 Mariegrey90
Your writing is absolutely captivating, and your story left a strong impression on me. I truly believe it has amazing potential as a comic, and I’d love to explore the idea of bringing it to life. As a commission-based digital artist with experience in comic collaborations, I’d be excited to work with you. Feel free to reach out to me on Discord (danban1247275) or Twitter ( Mariegrey90).
Your writing is absolutely captivating, and your story left a strong impression on me. I truly believe it has amazing potential as a comic, and I’d love to explore the idea of bringing it to life. As a commission-based digital artist with experience in comic collaborations, I’d be excited to work with you. Feel free to reach out to me on Discord (danban1247275) or Twitter ( Mariegrey90).
1/9 c1
1Sankarea396
No offense but i kinda got bored by the 13th chapter... I mean its great from what i read but like i stop reading once I realized you dont really add anything to asami she's just there... from this point she could have not been written in their relationship as a poly and everything would have still been the same. I really love that the girls actually like each other than just hanging off of Naruto but you don't highlight her characteristics? like she just jumped on Korra and there was no building up their romance like there was with Korra and Naruto. I stopped at chapter 13 so i cant comment for the rest of the book but it doesn't feel like asami is shown? as part of their relationship? nope nvm scratch that she definitely is not an integral part of this seeing as she's been mentioned only 500 times while korra was 2k yeah ikw that shes the main character but like Bolin was mentioned twice as much as Asami!

No offense but i kinda got bored by the 13th chapter... I mean its great from what i read but like i stop reading once I realized you dont really add anything to asami she's just there... from this point she could have not been written in their relationship as a poly and everything would have still been the same. I really love that the girls actually like each other than just hanging off of Naruto but you don't highlight her characteristics? like she just jumped on Korra and there was no building up their romance like there was with Korra and Naruto. I stopped at chapter 13 so i cant comment for the rest of the book but it doesn't feel like asami is shown? as part of their relationship? nope nvm scratch that she definitely is not an integral part of this seeing as she's been mentioned only 500 times while korra was 2k yeah ikw that shes the main character but like Bolin was mentioned twice as much as Asami!
1/4 c56 Borello
really good ending.
really good ending.
12/11/2024 c1 jeannaisley7
Hello I read your story "Avatar Maelstrom" and I really like it ya! I have some cool ideas for you If you don't mind can I share with you?
Hello I read your story "Avatar Maelstrom" and I really like it ya! I have some cool ideas for you If you don't mind can I share with you?
12/7/2024 c56 Guest
This story sucked never make agreements with tyrants and naruto was just pathetic
This story sucked never make agreements with tyrants and naruto was just pathetic
12/7/2024 c56 Guest
Awesome chapter and story.
Awesome chapter and story.
12/6/2024 c56 Controlchaos
Congratulations on finishing another fanfic with this one it makes 6 completed stories what your next new fanfic about or are you concentrate on complaining the stories you already have started
Congratulations on finishing another fanfic with this one it makes 6 completed stories what your next new fanfic about or are you concentrate on complaining the stories you already have started
11/9/2024 c5 Gilgamesh50
I want a three way harem where the gurls arent into girls
Just a normal three way(btw no issue with it but every three way harem has the girls like girls and yeah cool but every ine of them?)
I want a three way harem where the gurls arent into girls
Just a normal three way(btw no issue with it but every three way harem has the girls like girls and yeah cool but every ine of them?)
11/9/2024 c4 Gilgamesh50
And Naruto, the guardian dog, is not an interesting lore for me.
Cool, he's going to protect her, and everyone, including Korra, is going to be in awe of Naruto. That's it; that's the plot of this fic, I feel.
Naruto giving good advice, making great choices, showing power, and being in a harem—that's the plot.
And Naruto, the guardian dog, is not an interesting lore for me.
Cool, he's going to protect her, and everyone, including Korra, is going to be in awe of Naruto. That's it; that's the plot of this fic, I feel.
Naruto giving good advice, making great choices, showing power, and being in a harem—that's the plot.
11/9/2024 c4 Gilgamesh50
Bro, this goes from train to gala, then the army, and going home, waking up every 2 sentences. It feels empty.
Bro, this goes from train to gala, then the army, and going home, waking up every 2 sentences. It feels empty.
11/2/2024 c55 Borello
really good work
really good work
10/30/2024 c55 Mr. E Guest
Is there a possibility of a Naruto X Beast Wars Transformers crossover.
Is there a possibility of a Naruto X Beast Wars Transformers crossover.
10/22/2024 c55 Guest
Awesome chapter yet again man keep it up and update again soon as possible thanks The sooner the better Would be appreciated please and thanks.
Awesome chapter yet again man keep it up and update again soon as possible thanks The sooner the better Would be appreciated please and thanks.