for Family of the Shield4/3 c100 Axcel Allen
Actually I prefer this route you choose, not diverging too much from canon but changed some things. That's the point of a fanfic, to not follow the canon as it is a "what if" kind of story, so if the fanfic kinda just follows canon then that defeats the purpose.
Actually I prefer this route you choose, not diverging too much from canon but changed some things. That's the point of a fanfic, to not follow the canon as it is a "what if" kind of story, so if the fanfic kinda just follows canon then that defeats the purpose.
3/26 c101 Guest
i really like this story i wanted to recommend you do some thing that connects the shield hero to the planate core and starts fusing them together and at 10% his and his family's soul gets linked to the core and if they die they will be resurrected in the core at 20% make it that he starts to become a god and starts gaining domains but has to train them to and completely fuse with the world to become a god and become the combined races of the world from monsters to demi human to beast to even extinct and keep the human race and become the father of these races and have a well of all souls like transformers and he can go to the world of the wave and when fused with them the two world become one world and when a hero dies or retires there weapons including the cardinal hero one becomes fused with the shield hero and the after life is like dragon ball z
i really like this story i wanted to recommend you do some thing that connects the shield hero to the planate core and starts fusing them together and at 10% his and his family's soul gets linked to the core and if they die they will be resurrected in the core at 20% make it that he starts to become a god and starts gaining domains but has to train them to and completely fuse with the world to become a god and become the combined races of the world from monsters to demi human to beast to even extinct and keep the human race and become the father of these races and have a well of all souls like transformers and he can go to the world of the wave and when fused with them the two world become one world and when a hero dies or retires there weapons including the cardinal hero one becomes fused with the shield hero and the after life is like dragon ball z
3/23 c101 
2HeartGemHolder
Naofumi could have said: My Girlfriend is a Chimera. All of our Children are monsters because of that.
That could have fooled Kizuna for a moment before Naofumi quickly said it was just a joke, lol. Naofumi isn't Laios. Although somewhere in the multiverse, there must be a Naofumi Freaky enough. This was overall a nice chapter, i enjoyed it very much. Looking forward to seeing more in the near future! Ren and Teal are going to be a very strange duo to see, i'm looking forward to it.
2HeartGemHolderNaofumi could have said: My Girlfriend is a Chimera. All of our Children are monsters because of that.
That could have fooled Kizuna for a moment before Naofumi quickly said it was just a joke, lol. Naofumi isn't Laios. Although somewhere in the multiverse, there must be a Naofumi Freaky enough. This was overall a nice chapter, i enjoyed it very much. Looking forward to seeing more in the near future! Ren and Teal are going to be a very strange duo to see, i'm looking forward to it.
3/22 c101 Guest
Fue una grata sorpresa revisar y encontrar un capítulo nuevo, me gustó como se desarrollaron las cosas como iban avanzando, más el rápido aumento de nivel de Naofumi y el nuevo grupo, me sorprendió las nuevas alineaciones, en especial la de Ren y Teal ya quiero ver cómo logran avanzar en dónde estén considerando las repercusiones de la serie maldita de Ren. El paradero de Raphtalia creo que puedo adivinarlo pero el resto del grupo sigue en misterio, solo espero que ninguno se quede solo, algo malo podría pasar de ser así, Me alegra saber que sigues actualizando la historia, cuida tu salud, seguiremos esperando más de esta gran historia.
Fue una grata sorpresa revisar y encontrar un capítulo nuevo, me gustó como se desarrollaron las cosas como iban avanzando, más el rápido aumento de nivel de Naofumi y el nuevo grupo, me sorprendió las nuevas alineaciones, en especial la de Ren y Teal ya quiero ver cómo logran avanzar en dónde estén considerando las repercusiones de la serie maldita de Ren. El paradero de Raphtalia creo que puedo adivinarlo pero el resto del grupo sigue en misterio, solo espero que ninguno se quede solo, algo malo podría pasar de ser así, Me alegra saber que sigues actualizando la historia, cuida tu salud, seguiremos esperando más de esta gran historia.
3/22 c101 3Amit Barabi
I can see the growth difference between this version and Diligence (and Canon). In those versions, one Kappa was enough to almost kill Naofumi. Here, he could handle a few of them thanks to his two powerful party members leveling him up.
Wait, how did Kizuna give them exp? Cardinal Heroes can't gain exp around each other.
Ren and Teal form an interesting group. I am glad he even noticed her. I doubt she could level up alone.
3Amit BarabiI can see the growth difference between this version and Diligence (and Canon). In those versions, one Kappa was enough to almost kill Naofumi. Here, he could handle a few of them thanks to his two powerful party members leveling him up.
Wait, how did Kizuna give them exp? Cardinal Heroes can't gain exp around each other.
Ren and Teal form an interesting group. I am glad he even noticed her. I doubt she could level up alone.
3/1 c100 Mernom
If you want to keep the first 10 chapters for posterity, you could copy the old versions to a new story. That way, you get to keep the cake and eat it too.
If you want to keep the first 10 chapters for posterity, you could copy the old versions to a new story. That way, you get to keep the cake and eat it too.
2/18 c100 1Bananabella
Love it. Absolutely 10/10 characterization, storyline, balance. I adore it and this story and you. 18 billion out of ten. Thank you so much for writing
1BananabellaLove it. Absolutely 10/10 characterization, storyline, balance. I adore it and this story and you. 18 billion out of ten. Thank you so much for writing
2/13 c100 Arrondir
When are u gonna release chapter 101?
When are u gonna release chapter 101?
2/2 c100 Arrondir
Whens the next chapter
Whens the next chapter
1/26 c100 Arrondir
When are u going to update again
When are u going to update again
1/22 c16 7Spedyalarm
Bro Imagine if Fitts comes back as a vassal hero or something. Like just coming back in clutch and absolutly helping the fuck out of the heroes(Nexustitan here)
7SpedyalarmBro Imagine if Fitts comes back as a vassal hero or something. Like just coming back in clutch and absolutly helping the fuck out of the heroes(Nexustitan here)
1/21 c14 Spedyalarm
Hi i'm using my brothers account to read this story at the moment. And you can find me at Nexustitan(Or Nexsustitan on fanfiction) and I actually like stories where the king is pushed back into the role of the Staff hero. Where he actually becomes a good guy again. A Wise king. But hell that's not happening here at least I don't think so
Hi i'm using my brothers account to read this story at the moment. And you can find me at Nexustitan(Or Nexsustitan on fanfiction) and I actually like stories where the king is pushed back into the role of the Staff hero. Where he actually becomes a good guy again. A Wise king. But hell that's not happening here at least I don't think so
1/21 c10 Spedyalarm
Naofumi just wanting to go back to sleep is just a dad thing.
I can just imagine him with sleep bubbles around his head being super confused
Naofumi just wanting to go back to sleep is just a dad thing.
I can just imagine him with sleep bubbles around his head being super confused