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for Tempest in Teyvat (continued in separate rewrite story on Wattpad)

7/6/2022 c1 shit
holy fucking god mate...this thing is a rewrite of the same shit you did in WattPad mate
11/8/2021 c10 Guest
Dumbass, are you seriously making such a short story with this half assed bullshit? You really don’t want to write do you? Like at all. I’m done. I’m quitting fanfiction. Your the straw that broke the camels back you peppermint cunt.
10/24/2021 c10 Rairi Valelira
So anyone reading this, the author is a lazy liar.
10/24/2021 c5 Rairi Valelira
halfway done and still waiting for it to fkn start
8/1/2021 c2 Guest
Should have just made it uncountabe
7/13/2021 c10 sus
pls tell where would you post it and what is it name so that i can continue reading this becuz i like this very much
7/13/2021 c6 sus
So you just make them use 0.000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000001% of their power?
well that is sad :(
6/14/2021 c10 Princess Liu Hnh
Great move
5/24/2021 c10 10SplitsShot
also, if you are re-writing it, just remove the level system at all.
the level system won't work as it's a fic and not the game
5/19/2021 c3 giantorres0605
More plz
5/15/2021 c9 Guest
Love the story so far! Please update
5/16/2021 c2 Necant
U - unidentified
S - strange
S- slime
R - rimuru
5/9/2021 c6 kerrowe
If they're concerned about children running about they really should have paid more attention to Klee. She goes off on her own all the time too.

Not the greatest but, it's certainly a more for fun sort of fic is how it feels.
5/9/2021 c2 kerrowe
Oh? You're making the game mechanics an actual observed thing huh?
5/6/2021 c8 Frostfur9618
i want dragon vs dragon and silly-churls, billy-chuls, nilly-willy-hilichurls
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