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10/29 c42 Itayko
Qrow you mf changing the map

And chilling in a tree while jaune fights
10/26 c42 Guest
Finally Pyrrha and Jaune in peace... Finally
10/16 c25 1Diavo
In my head, the line from the child changed to «are you my mummy?»
10/14 c42 felipeferraz90879
Me esta encantando esta historia
10/10 c42 Guest
Keep up the good work
10/4 c42 Guest
Oh hey, nice that Pyrrha had her epiphany about how childishly she was handling things. That note about Mercury, though... big oof incoming.

Raven and Vernal are genuinely foul individuals. The sooner Jaune just cuts Vernal in half or something, the better. Raven's straight delulu if she thinks Jaune's going to agree with her demented ideology enough for it to outweigh any "Fuck you in particular" sentiments.

The mapmakers do a little trolling.
10/2 c42 vincenzobuono2004
the chapter was very interesting, I liked the dynamic between Jaune and Vernal, I am curious to see how the bond between Pyrrha and Jaune will go. I want to see what Jaune will do when he finds out the whole truth about Ozpin. And as Raven said, will Jaune rethink the tribe's proposal?
10/2 c42 Sansman212
YES! PYRRHA AND JAUNE ARE FRIENDS AGAIN! Oh my worries for Pyrrha are now lessened by a very large margin. Just hope Jaune can talk no jutsu Neo into joining the light, seeing as I think she would be WAY more willing to do so than Vernal ever will.
10/2 c42 31Draco711
Awesome chapter! Jaune and Pyrrha finally made up. Now all we need is to get her away from Mercury and all is right with the world. But...I think I see the path you're going with. Pyrrha is going to still die and broken hearted due to Mercury. Pyrrha will still give Jaune that first and last kiss before going off to face Cinder where she will meet her end. Jaune will then be hellbent in killing Cinder and Mercury which will lead him to join the Branwen tribe with Ruby joining to keep her boyfriend from going to far. Jaune's singleminded focus on getting revenge will cause problems in their relationship, may even cause them to separate for a time which would give a reason for Jaune and Vernal to pursue an intimate relationship. Both Ruby and team will follow the same path up to Haven where Jaune will rejoin them with Raven and Vernal. Vernal will die then. After her heart to heart with Yang, revealing she never stopped loving Yang as her mother, Raven will tell Jaune to stay with them. Then, Jaune and Ruby can rebuild their relationship which honestly won't be long. Might be awkward for a couple of chapters but it shows that they never stopped loving one another despite everything that happened and get back together after a heart to heart. How close am I to a home run?
10/2 c42 FatedWait
Nice chap bro
10/1 c42 REYZERO
Dios que gran capitulo, me hubiera encantado que vernal saliera más golpeada de la pelea o que pyrrha, Nora y ren vieran el ataque de Jaunne pero creo que estas guardando eso para mas adelante. También amaría que Jaunne junto con pyrrha y Ruby en una relación pero se lo mucho que quitaría de seriedad a la historia ya que una relación así es difícil de tomar en serio, así que todo bien (Quizas podrías hacer que Ruby y pyrrha interactúen mas en una especie de malentendido y celos por Jaunne y mostrar ciertas inseguridades de rubí de no ser suficientemente buena como novia). Y por último no te apresures a terminar está historia, gustosamente voy a leer 100 o 1000 capitulo de desarrollo de personaje y rebanada de vida antes de la tan esperada pelea de Jaunne y Ruby contra Salem.
10/1 c42 1GhostRonin
I’m in full support of Jaune killing people when pushed over the edge. Canonically, he’s not proud of killing but it’s something he’ll do if necessary. He wanted to kill Cinder with all his heart for killing Pyrrha and went for it by trying to stab her in the face.
10/1 c42 GhostRonin
Why would the tribe be strong? They literally only attack civilians and let Raven or Vernal handle Hunters, not something that’ll make you strong enough to compete against actual competition. They’re not “wasted potential” as that would make it seem like being bullies makes you strong.

Please end this Mercury thing already. It’s aggravating.
10/1 c42 1Astra Starfield
Im laughing at the fact Qrow called Ren a blabber mouth. I have no clue why its so funny but it is.

Amazing chapter btw and beta probably doesn’t get enough of this but thank you aswell for helping in this amazing work. I cant wait to see what will happen next.
10/1 c42 loganhunter2
I love this story and I hate it because I can't get enough
I'm happy this situation helped fix the Pyhrra stuff
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