for The Choices We Make4/23 c45 
1bleachorange
This has been really excellent overall. High praise for the author. I did hit a rough patch with how long they were in Mistral, but other than that I have no criticism for the work.
1bleachorangeThis has been really excellent overall. High praise for the author. I did hit a rough patch with how long they were in Mistral, but other than that I have no criticism for the work.
4/23 c32 bleachorange
In response to the beta note - I dont really see Jaune or Pyrrha as being immature here. They both know what they did, they both wish they didnt, and they both acknowledge feelings dont always listen to logic. While they did wish to pick up where they left off, it just isnt possible right now.
In response to the beta note - I dont really see Jaune or Pyrrha as being immature here. They both know what they did, they both wish they didnt, and they both acknowledge feelings dont always listen to logic. While they did wish to pick up where they left off, it just isnt possible right now.
4/22 c25 bleachorange
The story is good, but Ive been feeling like its kind of lost its point for a while now. Author has literally shanghai'd them when they meant to quickly stop in mistral. A bit was good, more was okay, but I feel my tolerance threshold for random quest of the week has been hit. I really hope our heroes get back to beacon soon, because frankly I think the story isnt benefitting any longer from these 2 as apprentices. Theyve literally been on a world tour at this point, and both had already accomplished the aims of the apprenticeship before they ever landed in mistral.
The story is good, but Ive been feeling like its kind of lost its point for a while now. Author has literally shanghai'd them when they meant to quickly stop in mistral. A bit was good, more was okay, but I feel my tolerance threshold for random quest of the week has been hit. I really hope our heroes get back to beacon soon, because frankly I think the story isnt benefitting any longer from these 2 as apprentices. Theyve literally been on a world tour at this point, and both had already accomplished the aims of the apprenticeship before they ever landed in mistral.
4/22 c1 leena.miana
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Some stories aren’t just meant to be told they’re meant to be seen.
Your story "The Choices We Make" holds something truly exceptional, a vivid world, compelling characters, and a narrative that stays with readers long after the last word. It deserves to be brought to life through striking visuals that capture every nuance.
I’m a commissioned artist with over 4 years of experience transforming powerful narratives into expressive, beautifully illustrated comics. From dynamic panel layouts to emotional storytelling, I specialize in turning your vision into a visual journey that resonates.
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4/21 c32 Mazuro-Ni
Honestly the most disappointing chapter ever. I've wasted 31 chapters just to read the most unsatisfying reconciliation scene ever. Like c'mon man... I would've thought all that time he spent with Qrow would have him be a better person... He had enough time to heal and yet he's still acting like he's been hurt yesterday.
"Emotion are high" what kinda bullcrap is that? When people train, they get to learn discipline. Jaune has had enough time to control his emotions. He had no character development at all...
I don't know what else to say...
Honestly the most disappointing chapter ever. I've wasted 31 chapters just to read the most unsatisfying reconciliation scene ever. Like c'mon man... I would've thought all that time he spent with Qrow would have him be a better person... He had enough time to heal and yet he's still acting like he's been hurt yesterday.
"Emotion are high" what kinda bullcrap is that? When people train, they get to learn discipline. Jaune has had enough time to control his emotions. He had no character development at all...
I don't know what else to say...
4/18 c45 Silver
esto se está poniendo cada vez mejor
esto se está poniendo cada vez mejor
4/18 c45 Omega
Gran capítulo me muero por el siguiente
Gran capítulo me muero por el siguiente
4/17 c45 Sabert00thsa
So Jaune definitely isn't dead from the building but he is a dead man walking between Ruby, Mint, and Nora... So R.I.P. the shining knight on that. Also I wonder how this will effect the White Fang recruitment now that Jaune is gonna be a little bit of a legend from this.
So Jaune definitely isn't dead from the building but he is a dead man walking between Ruby, Mint, and Nora... So R.I.P. the shining knight on that. Also I wonder how this will effect the White Fang recruitment now that Jaune is gonna be a little bit of a legend from this.
4/16 c45 2Alejandro.arc
THE KING IS BACK!
Meh, don’t sweat it dude, honestly it be hypocritical from my part to blame you about procrastinating because of a game XD.
As for the episode, the steaks are rising, Im either looking forward to a sudden power up due to the circumstances, or Jaune survives but Ozpin tries to keep it on a need to know basis.
And MAN! This, this right here is why I love Jaune in this story, compared to other jaune cenctered fic’s, he isn’t overpowered, perfect, or a Gary Stu, he’s flawed, he’s the most human I’ve ever seen him, and that makes it that more exciting whenever he’s in situation’s such as this. Sure, he’s strong, but he isn’t invincible nor as experienced, we see him struggle, show fear, stumble and fall, but through it all he just keeps going forward. It’s inspiring, he embodies determination and the human will to it’s finest.
Im SO looking forward to the next episode!
2Alejandro.arcTHE KING IS BACK!
Meh, don’t sweat it dude, honestly it be hypocritical from my part to blame you about procrastinating because of a game XD.
As for the episode, the steaks are rising, Im either looking forward to a sudden power up due to the circumstances, or Jaune survives but Ozpin tries to keep it on a need to know basis.
And MAN! This, this right here is why I love Jaune in this story, compared to other jaune cenctered fic’s, he isn’t overpowered, perfect, or a Gary Stu, he’s flawed, he’s the most human I’ve ever seen him, and that makes it that more exciting whenever he’s in situation’s such as this. Sure, he’s strong, but he isn’t invincible nor as experienced, we see him struggle, show fear, stumble and fall, but through it all he just keeps going forward. It’s inspiring, he embodies determination and the human will to it’s finest.
Im SO looking forward to the next episode!
4/16 c45 39camilo navas
What a chapter. This isn't going to end well for Jaune, both because of any damage he might sustain and because of the massive scolding that will follow from everyone.
39camilo navasWhat a chapter. This isn't going to end well for Jaune, both because of any damage he might sustain and because of the massive scolding that will follow from everyone.