for Born for Battle4/4 c11 Terracotta Tortilla
This is interesting. The story is good so far, just kind of weird at times. The way you write can tell us a lot about your thought process, like with Mei and Naruko. You lingered on the tits for a while, even after you said Naruko was basically high school age
This is interesting. The story is good so far, just kind of weird at times. The way you write can tell us a lot about your thought process, like with Mei and Naruko. You lingered on the tits for a while, even after you said Naruko was basically high school age
4/4 c10 Terracotta Tortilla
Kind of weird that this slaver of an MC is going to be treated like a hero soon, but I guess it makes sense. Weebs enjoy the slaver fantasy, 2 of the most popular Isekais at the moment have to do with an MC having slaves and there's another popular anime where the MC is just straight up a rapist.. so this checks out I guess.
Kind of weird that this slaver of an MC is going to be treated like a hero soon, but I guess it makes sense. Weebs enjoy the slaver fantasy, 2 of the most popular Isekais at the moment have to do with an MC having slaves and there's another popular anime where the MC is just straight up a rapist.. so this checks out I guess.
4/4 c9 Terracotta Tortilla
Yeah...this is definitely a fantasy you've had before. Kind of gross for a 20 year old. Hope no one trusts you with their drinks at parties if you're in college.
Yeah...this is definitely a fantasy you've had before. Kind of gross for a 20 year old. Hope no one trusts you with their drinks at parties if you're in college.
4/4 c4 Terracotta Tortilla
We doing that dumb thing that Naruto fanfics enjoy doing? The whole "My name is Sasuke, I love having things handed to me. Even though the manga completely proves this wrong" thing? Ugh, if this was a harem I'd say it hit all the tropes for stories written by a virgin author living out their fantasies through story, since you genderbent both Naruto and Haku too. It's not a harem though, so maybe you're different
We doing that dumb thing that Naruto fanfics enjoy doing? The whole "My name is Sasuke, I love having things handed to me. Even though the manga completely proves this wrong" thing? Ugh, if this was a harem I'd say it hit all the tropes for stories written by a virgin author living out their fantasies through story, since you genderbent both Naruto and Haku too. It's not a harem though, so maybe you're different
4/4 c2 Terracotta Tortilla
The MC is a self important idiot. "How dare Inari think I'm a bad guy?! I'll let this go, but only once!" How oblivious can you be?
The MC is a self important idiot. "How dare Inari think I'm a bad guy?! I'll let this go, but only once!" How oblivious can you be?
3/28 c10 KureijiRyuu
Thanks for the chapter, but I have to say it's really weird to see the MC being all cool and joining the "good guys" right after slaughtering kids and heroes.
Thanks for the chapter, but I have to say it's really weird to see the MC being all cool and joining the "good guys" right after slaughtering kids and heroes.
3/28 c9 KureijiRyuu
I honestly thought this arch was crap, the MC so far acted like an anti hero or even a hero, but suddenly we have him being a villain of the worst kind! This came completely out of nowhere
I honestly thought this arch was crap, the MC so far acted like an anti hero or even a hero, but suddenly we have him being a villain of the worst kind! This came completely out of nowhere
3/28 c6 KureijiRyuu
There are Kagebushin users in other villages, this is actually a very common and well-known Jutsu, it was probably only on the parchment of forbidden jutsus due to the high chakra requirement (or plot). A Genin or Chunin can end up killing themselves if they mess up with this jutsu, since in addition to costing a lot of Chakra, it divides the user's chakra between the clones.
Normal ninjas can only make a maximum of 5 clones, so naruto is basically the only one capable of using kagebushin for training purposes.
There are Kagebushin users in other villages, this is actually a very common and well-known Jutsu, it was probably only on the parchment of forbidden jutsus due to the high chakra requirement (or plot). A Genin or Chunin can end up killing themselves if they mess up with this jutsu, since in addition to costing a lot of Chakra, it divides the user's chakra between the clones.
Normal ninjas can only make a maximum of 5 clones, so naruto is basically the only one capable of using kagebushin for training purposes.
3/28 c4 Worker626
This man strolled up and started using someone else's bathroom. Supervillain status achieved.
This man strolled up and started using someone else's bathroom. Supervillain status achieved.