
4/5/2021 c1 Andi
This was perfect
This was perfect
4/5/2021 c1 Heartieeee
This was great and so encouraging after last night's episode! Would you consider writing a Part 2?
This was great and so encouraging after last night's episode! Would you consider writing a Part 2?
4/4/2021 c1
2Mamabethany
I really am enjoying all of your one shots... they are just what I need! You do so well to describe the full inner thoughts of each character and I do think you are nailing each character so well. I do agree that Nathan, such a protector, would not have wanted to leave Elizabeth out there all night, and also I do very much loved the insights from Florence. However, one question that cropped up for me more than once (not just for your story but also for others’ stories) ... does Allie stay home alone when Nathan doesn’t come home at night? Who is caring for little Jack and is Elizabeth wondering how he’s doing?
Still LOVE the story, just those questions nagged at me a bit, being the parent that I am!

I really am enjoying all of your one shots... they are just what I need! You do so well to describe the full inner thoughts of each character and I do think you are nailing each character so well. I do agree that Nathan, such a protector, would not have wanted to leave Elizabeth out there all night, and also I do very much loved the insights from Florence. However, one question that cropped up for me more than once (not just for your story but also for others’ stories) ... does Allie stay home alone when Nathan doesn’t come home at night? Who is caring for little Jack and is Elizabeth wondering how he’s doing?
Still LOVE the story, just those questions nagged at me a bit, being the parent that I am!
4/4/2021 c1 Jacki Foster
A great one-shot! Thanks to Florence for reminding Elizabeth that any of us can lose our loved ones at any time! Elizabeth does need to be reminded of that. I am so glad that Ned has recovered and Ned and Florence will get their happiness! Great story!
A great one-shot! Thanks to Florence for reminding Elizabeth that any of us can lose our loved ones at any time! Elizabeth does need to be reminded of that. I am so glad that Ned has recovered and Ned and Florence will get their happiness! Great story!
4/4/2021 c1 Guest
Wonderful take.
Wonderful take.
4/4/2021 c1
27Dakota Kid
I haven't seen episode 7 yet but really liked this story! Now my hope is that Elizabeth can open herself to Nathan!

I haven't seen episode 7 yet but really liked this story! Now my hope is that Elizabeth can open herself to Nathan!
4/4/2021 c1 Guest
I loved this! Thank you!
I loved this! Thank you!
4/4/2021 c1 Guest
I loved this How about making into a story
I loved this How about making into a story
4/4/2021 c1 SaSeLi777
I loved it!
Bravo, Nathan for doing the right thing... even if it opens you up to more rejection.
Yay, Florence for opening up Elizabeth’s eyes a little!
Wonderful Carson... for being such an intuitive doctor and friend!
I loved it!
Bravo, Nathan for doing the right thing... even if it opens you up to more rejection.
Yay, Florence for opening up Elizabeth’s eyes a little!
Wonderful Carson... for being such an intuitive doctor and friend!