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4/6/2021 c1 1Gravit18
Hi! I like it already! Can't wait what you are going to do and how the actions of your character will affect the story? Will he tell George? Will he help Harry? Is Dumbledoor a good, neutral or bad guy?
Anywaygood work and keep going!

You have only a few writing errors. Don't know if you care about them but I still like your writing style!
4/5/2021 c1 5a guy1013
trey. getting tonk cause she. deserve way better then lupin
4/4/2021 c1 SpecialK23
I think there have been some works with an SI weasly but be careful of the power creep. I highly doubt that most wizards become op in their teens. Your character will probably have to be more smart, than powerful. It took decades for voldemort to gain power. You have no concept of magic being a reincarnation. Family tomes and stuff is just hand waving and is a weak way to deal with the lack of power. You’ll probably only start becoming powerful in hogwarts with room of requirement. You probably will be able to get tomes but they may not be written in English or maybe code. I doubt people write decades of research down in easy vernacular. I wonder how you’ll proceed.

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