for On the Wings of Fire5/10 c1 Gracen1b8
Checked out a site called Storio (storioai dot com), and I’m impressed. It basically gamifies your story—like Twine, but easier. Felt like a nice tool for anyone doing interactive fiction.
Checked out a site called Storio (storioai dot com), and I’m impressed. It basically gamifies your story—like Twine, but easier. Felt like a nice tool for anyone doing interactive fiction.
2/6 c11 
2SAJones
To be quite honest, burning away the corruption might not be the worst thing. Anyhow, loved this story, read it a while ago but came back to re-read. Can't believe I didn't review when I Favourited/Followed the story two or three years ago. I hope you carry on writing, for it is never too late to pick up a story again.
I think it would be interesting if the Skin-Changers that Yula saved, in particular that Rowena wolf-woman, were to develop something of a great respect for Yula - Rowena did offer herself up as a servant, after all. Though Yula may have declined Rowena's offer, I think that Yula's denial would be more likely to breed respect than diminish it. Perhaps a few Skin-Changer friends could even live in Moria with her and her Elf? Yula did "claim ownership of these people" in her mind, so perhaps she will be their protector from now on. It would be interesting to see if the Skin-Changer population in/around the Misty Mountains grows notably between now and TH/LOTR - perhaps several clans/tribes/etc of Yula-respecting Skin-Changers might make her something of a local power, lol. The Great Yula, Queen of the Misty Mountains, Breaker of Chains, Patron of Skin-Changers and Eater of Orcs! Okay, I got carried away there, but it was an amusing thought, lol.
2SAJonesTo be quite honest, burning away the corruption might not be the worst thing. Anyhow, loved this story, read it a while ago but came back to re-read. Can't believe I didn't review when I Favourited/Followed the story two or three years ago. I hope you carry on writing, for it is never too late to pick up a story again.
I think it would be interesting if the Skin-Changers that Yula saved, in particular that Rowena wolf-woman, were to develop something of a great respect for Yula - Rowena did offer herself up as a servant, after all. Though Yula may have declined Rowena's offer, I think that Yula's denial would be more likely to breed respect than diminish it. Perhaps a few Skin-Changer friends could even live in Moria with her and her Elf? Yula did "claim ownership of these people" in her mind, so perhaps she will be their protector from now on. It would be interesting to see if the Skin-Changer population in/around the Misty Mountains grows notably between now and TH/LOTR - perhaps several clans/tribes/etc of Yula-respecting Skin-Changers might make her something of a local power, lol. The Great Yula, Queen of the Misty Mountains, Breaker of Chains, Patron of Skin-Changers and Eater of Orcs! Okay, I got carried away there, but it was an amusing thought, lol.
2/3 c7 xLothirielx
CHOOSE NOW HOW YOU WILL DIE that line goes so hard, she is certainly of the draconian lineage
CHOOSE NOW HOW YOU WILL DIE that line goes so hard, she is certainly of the draconian lineage
8/1/2024 c11 Alexis
J ais relue cette histoire elle est toujours passionnante mais j ais mieux compris surtout le passage que les deux âmes de nos amoureux commence à fusionner je suis extrêmement impatiente de voir comment leur lien se développe.
Je sait pas si c est de la romance ou de la bromance mais je sait que cette relation promet d être épique et incroyable.
J attends avec impatience la suite votre fidèle fan.
J ais relue cette histoire elle est toujours passionnante mais j ais mieux compris surtout le passage que les deux âmes de nos amoureux commence à fusionner je suis extrêmement impatiente de voir comment leur lien se développe.
Je sait pas si c est de la romance ou de la bromance mais je sait que cette relation promet d être épique et incroyable.
J attends avec impatience la suite votre fidèle fan.
7/31/2024 c11 Alexis
C est une histoire fascinante et époustouflante vraiment vous avez réussi à décrire un dragon sans être contrôlé par l l'obscurité et en gardant ses instincts je suis extrêmement impatiente pour la suite.
J aime beaucoup les relations et interaction entre les personnages.
La bromance entre un elf et dragon m intrigante complètement je me demande si il peuvent fusionner leur âme car je sais que les elf sont capables de connecter leur âme avec leur partenaire romantique mais es ce que cela pourrait quand marcher avec d autre type d amour avec la même intensité ?
J attends la suite avec une grande impatiente , je suis aussi très curieux de voir les conséquences de ses battements d d'ailes dragonnique.
C est une histoire fascinante et époustouflante vraiment vous avez réussi à décrire un dragon sans être contrôlé par l l'obscurité et en gardant ses instincts je suis extrêmement impatiente pour la suite.
J aime beaucoup les relations et interaction entre les personnages.
La bromance entre un elf et dragon m intrigante complètement je me demande si il peuvent fusionner leur âme car je sais que les elf sont capables de connecter leur âme avec leur partenaire romantique mais es ce que cela pourrait quand marcher avec d autre type d amour avec la même intensité ?
J attends la suite avec une grande impatiente , je suis aussi très curieux de voir les conséquences de ses battements d d'ailes dragonnique.
1/7/2024 c11 Guest
I think she did a good thing, forest fires are great at clearing the underbush and revitalizing the land. Clearing way for new life to thrive! Some plants require a recent forest fire to grow as well, hopefully the seeds will survive, if not then people can scatter seeds or let the forest naturally spread back
I think she did a good thing, forest fires are great at clearing the underbush and revitalizing the land. Clearing way for new life to thrive! Some plants require a recent forest fire to grow as well, hopefully the seeds will survive, if not then people can scatter seeds or let the forest naturally spread back
12/21/2023 c11 Cats are my World
As an aroace person i really love Morrovalûr and Ídhaiamrûn relationship. It feels very queerplatonic. I adore how you haven't made Morrovalûr able to shapeshift. Shapeshifting dragon fanfic tends to lack the dragon being in dragon form and so I am very pleased to find a fanfic where the dragon is always a dragon.
Is this story on AO3?
As an aroace person i really love Morrovalûr and Ídhaiamrûn relationship. It feels very queerplatonic. I adore how you haven't made Morrovalûr able to shapeshift. Shapeshifting dragon fanfic tends to lack the dragon being in dragon form and so I am very pleased to find a fanfic where the dragon is always a dragon.
Is this story on AO3?
7/10/2023 c11 TheLionessOfBritany
immensely fascinated with where this is going. Can't wait for more!
immensely fascinated with where this is going. Can't wait for more!
6/7/2023 c11 FlyingBoxtroll
I really like this one, keep up the good work!
I really like this one, keep up the good work!