for Rebellion3/24/2023 c1 
120wintergreen825
I loved the little glimpses of Andromeda's growing rejection of her parents' bigoted beliefs. It starts out so small and then just snowballed as time went on and her world expanded beyond her familial home. And it affected everything like a spreading puddle of water. A giggle here that probably wouldn't have meant anything just grew and grew until it was all exploding poppers at the wedding. le sigh. I just love it all so much.
120wintergreen825I loved the little glimpses of Andromeda's growing rejection of her parents' bigoted beliefs. It starts out so small and then just snowballed as time went on and her world expanded beyond her familial home. And it affected everything like a spreading puddle of water. A giggle here that probably wouldn't have meant anything just grew and grew until it was all exploding poppers at the wedding. le sigh. I just love it all so much.
3/24/2023 c1 51brokenbottleaurora
I really enjoyed your characterization of Andromeda here. I think the idea of a quiet rebellion - doing what she wants and quietly changing her beliefs rather than openly defying her family - makes a lot of sense for her. I really like your OCs, too, especially Eli. And that proposal from Ted was the sweetest! I loved how nervous he was and how it was tempered by his hopefulness and determination. Well done!
51brokenbottleauroraI really enjoyed your characterization of Andromeda here. I think the idea of a quiet rebellion - doing what she wants and quietly changing her beliefs rather than openly defying her family - makes a lot of sense for her. I really like your OCs, too, especially Eli. And that proposal from Ted was the sweetest! I loved how nervous he was and how it was tempered by his hopefulness and determination. Well done!
4/20/2021 c1 unknown2351830163
Reading a good story like this one, I suggest you join Novel Star's writing competition on April.
Reading a good story like this one, I suggest you join Novel Star's writing competition on April.