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1/29 c10 Debbie Hicks
11. Chapter 11. hebn b ikttedbn was Turned rippd the b olthn by alien ratlesnsaskes to hrt my siksterrt rioppimng thed Best friens/ rest of bst friendsx/ young ones thredn Thrree/ Bit cllaire At two good who made you trend Were sentenced then to death tgore hesds gedt her both /army hid pain there us raped/ tore bygone the aortas veins. ripped good ours there screaming tore heads brought there ripping in pieces viciously triggering our/ their Immortality. Alice found both sisters/ them/young ones tame by anomie blood pain the surrendered for their crimes groan my head hurts myself began having planetary abilities conjured it a Brooch intoning it screaming out to the havens about me Holding my sword so her/ them gasp not this time so myself so us/ me with him we fight them clasping a sword was Immortal not today your reign of power is over there is only one! TRILL INFNIITY POWER! MAKE-UP! BETAZED INFINITY POWER! MAKE-UP! suddenly to late then she is yelling higher to heaven by fiercely glowing then too late glowing hotter screaming out using her intergalactic powers but shining too late it happened causing a chain reaction blown up MIRI Infinity POWER! MAKE-UP! hand and nails shattering from the depth of the cosmos who viciously began burning like a nuclear reactor Now! hen shin you SCOUT/KNIGHT POWER! INFINITY MAKE-UP! fiercely then suddenly emerging from our last lives Yelling suddenly too late and more viciously exploding noise like a nuclear bomb began roaring a most glorious so them Yelling out transforming into superheroes/knight nuked then Cullens/Witnessed/ both vanished good guards this time died there. blown up Vampires vanished freely viciously ripping freely good beheaded officially then us began to speak then was clad in a sailor suit boots sailor collar choker earrings a most radiant but shining Golden tiara with a grey gem oh no skirt brisling in the wind her back ribbon flying myself was not human Hair of hers flying held the Mutation Glaive so coldly but emotionless made her introduction speech from the ashes of nuclear war I am the mistress of mutation Guardian of viruses/ illness lady of disease SAILOR MIRI! she is a sailor guardian so them no way oh your poor kitty her name is Luna this is Artemis and Diana Yike's gasp oh my god we been killed. but became Immortal by now. From the depth of life and change guardian of rebirth mistress of past memories of lives lived before SAILOR TRILL! had returned! gasp so them oh no they can't die/age. Yikes you were a Trill yes guys look down on yourselves gasp my memories were fuzzy remembering you team gasp they did it. we were reincarnations of aliens on Earth went a slapping oh Kami-Sama you 2 idiots gasp Hoo boy Aunt! a kid oh how sweet, good lord man almighty oh my god who is she sign gorgeous Libra Cancer gracious sis oh no Oy girl food anyone BURP! Excuse me please then too late oh man no thanks ate only one she is on a diet gasp they caused it is triggering their Last lives. oh no he sighted him Infinity Sailor Venus who is he so sexy is he very tall dark is he more than attractive she was flirting gulp he paled of Paul's Muscles went white as a sheet. Excuse me he was six feet five meters tall he was young was out from the Vulcan Science Academy Oy girl stand back team/knights.
12/28/2021 c5 Guest
Don't really like Miri in this chapter.. slapping Jacob, multiple times, really isn't cool. Even if he's a werewolf and probably didn't even feel it.

I'm really not into any of the two relationships right now. Edward is super controlling and just.. Yikes. and Miri is just fine with it?
And Miri is treating Jacob pretty shit. He was her boyfriend, she told him she was only doing it bc he's Alices brother and all that suddenly she's back together with Edward and loves him so much..

At this point point almost want Jacob's imprint to be someone else because honestly, he deserves better than what Miri is doing to him.
12/27/2021 c4 12Uchiha-no-Hime
can I say how much I liked that Jacob kissed Miri?
It is obvious that Miri loves him, but she also loves Edward. And I don't think I love one more than the other, and that makes everything so wonderful ! and at the same time tragic.
Edward is going to be absolutely jealous when he finds out and I can't wait for that !

I keep insisting an EdwardxMarixJacob
because I think I would cry all day if Miri let one go.
I hope there are several scenes of Jealous Edward hahahaha Jealous Edward is one of my favorites

I hope you update soon
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
5/6/2021 c2 Guest
I'm really sad bc I'm really not feeling this.

Being in a "relationship" with someone that controls and manipulates you is literally an abusive relationship.

Love triangle or not, this thing with Edward is so incredibly uncomfortable to read.
4/19/2021 c1 9sonderful
Qoheleth, it means "The Wounded Survive War" It's listed in my bio.
4/14/2021 c1 unknown2351830163
Reading a good story like this one, I suggest you join Novel Star's writing competition on April.
4/12/2021 c1 192Qoheleth
Dear sonderful:

Out of curiosity, is the title a quotation I'm too ignorant to recognize? Because I honestly can't guess what the implicit major verb is supposed to be.

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

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