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11/2 c40 Agent Frank
I can't believe it took me this long to come back to this story. It was amazing rereading the first twenty chapters and the next twenty that I had unfortunately never had a chance to try. The story has been excellent and I look forward to seeing how you handle the next arc.
I can't believe it took me this long to come back to this story. It was amazing rereading the first twenty chapters and the next twenty that I had unfortunately never had a chance to try. The story has been excellent and I look forward to seeing how you handle the next arc.
9/11 c1 TerminalBatter
Very good, almost excellent really. The only problematic plot hole i found was the rescue of Elia Martell. With prior knowledge there is no way that the mc would have simply delivered her to Dorne without expecting major consequences. At the very least, he would have kept her survival secret and use the rescue of Lyanna as an excuse for the abrupt departure from Kingslanding.
I would have loved it if you delved deeper into the conquest of the Iron Islands. It would have been nice if a new city was erected within the disputed lands to serve as a capital instead of ruling from Myr.
I understand why you stopped updating the fic, conquering Westeros or simply shifting the power structures of the continent would require at least another 100-200k words and that’s without even considering the Night King.
Overall, great performance. A solid 9/10 in my books. Keep up the good work !
Very good, almost excellent really. The only problematic plot hole i found was the rescue of Elia Martell. With prior knowledge there is no way that the mc would have simply delivered her to Dorne without expecting major consequences. At the very least, he would have kept her survival secret and use the rescue of Lyanna as an excuse for the abrupt departure from Kingslanding.
I would have loved it if you delved deeper into the conquest of the Iron Islands. It would have been nice if a new city was erected within the disputed lands to serve as a capital instead of ruling from Myr.
I understand why you stopped updating the fic, conquering Westeros or simply shifting the power structures of the continent would require at least another 100-200k words and that’s without even considering the Night King.
Overall, great performance. A solid 9/10 in my books. Keep up the good work !
9/6 c22 Guest
I don't understand why so many reviewers are angry that he married someone who has a child already. If that made him a cuck, then every stepfather or adoptive parent to have ever existed is also a cuck.
I think these people are just mad that this story is no longer fulfilling their wish fulfillment power fantasies. I, for one, believe stories are more interesting when protagonists have proper hurdles to overcome.
There are things to criticize about this story, but that creative decision isn't one of them. Ignore the incels lmao
I don't understand why so many reviewers are angry that he married someone who has a child already. If that made him a cuck, then every stepfather or adoptive parent to have ever existed is also a cuck.
I think these people are just mad that this story is no longer fulfilling their wish fulfillment power fantasies. I, for one, believe stories are more interesting when protagonists have proper hurdles to overcome.
There are things to criticize about this story, but that creative decision isn't one of them. Ignore the incels lmao
9/3 c40 Guest
I liked it, and just read through the whole thing I don't get why people are hating on it so much. It's a fun story! And I'm sad it didn't get finished
I liked it, and just read through the whole thing I don't get why people are hating on it so much. It's a fun story! And I'm sad it didn't get finished
8/17 c39 fag
Absolute cuckshit. Author is a sanctimonious dumbass who can't understand valid criticism.
Absolute cuckshit. Author is a sanctimonious dumbass who can't understand valid criticism.
8/13 c1 mockury
Petyr had just turned 15 in cannon when he challeneged Brandon, not 12. Other than that, looks to be off to an excellent start.
Petyr had just turned 15 in cannon when he challeneged Brandon, not 12. Other than that, looks to be off to an excellent start.
8/9 c1 Guest
Bro u migth not have read gamer fics but it matters not there is no two fics that have the same system just dont focus on the numbers and skills to much you will be ok cus reading bunch of skills get real boring real fast and numbers become very hard to track and if you will add % and or multipliers it will become very time consuming i know a auhtor who had to start keeping track of it all on a spread sheet so i would not recomend going too deep into the numbers
Bro u migth not have read gamer fics but it matters not there is no two fics that have the same system just dont focus on the numbers and skills to much you will be ok cus reading bunch of skills get real boring real fast and numbers become very hard to track and if you will add % and or multipliers it will become very time consuming i know a auhtor who had to start keeping track of it all on a spread sheet so i would not recomend going too deep into the numbers
7/21 c22 Guest
Author... you are an idiot if you don't understand why people drop your story after this chapter.
The reason why so many people are mad is that this is MC's second life. He should strive to enjoy it. For it to be fulfilling. Taking a woman as a wife who you KNOW loves another man? Even if that man is dead? Just because she is pretty?
Ugh. That's very bad writing.
Making her son your heir? So... what about MC's future children? You know... those that will actually have his blood?
It's just shaping up to be a major disappointment.
There is more to it. Love life is a MAJOR part of life. Your MC chose a woman he barely knows to be his partner in life. It's just disappointing in general. That kind of approach. He is setting himself up for a failure and unhappy life. The ONLY reason that won't happen is that the author will force his plot.
Author... you are an idiot if you don't understand why people drop your story after this chapter.
The reason why so many people are mad is that this is MC's second life. He should strive to enjoy it. For it to be fulfilling. Taking a woman as a wife who you KNOW loves another man? Even if that man is dead? Just because she is pretty?
Ugh. That's very bad writing.
Making her son your heir? So... what about MC's future children? You know... those that will actually have his blood?
It's just shaping up to be a major disappointment.
There is more to it. Love life is a MAJOR part of life. Your MC chose a woman he barely knows to be his partner in life. It's just disappointing in general. That kind of approach. He is setting himself up for a failure and unhappy life. The ONLY reason that won't happen is that the author will force his plot.
7/21 c21 Guest
The Ben character is just bothersome to read about. It's like reading about this side character that REALLY didn't need to be included in the story but the stubborn author is REALLY trying to give him an important role. It's obnoxious.
The Ben character is just bothersome to read about. It's like reading about this side character that REALLY didn't need to be included in the story but the stubborn author is REALLY trying to give him an important role. It's obnoxious.
7/21 c20 Guest
Ah, yeah. This is the chapter when the MC decides to become a cuck. I can see it and why people are mad.
Ah, yeah. This is the chapter when the MC decides to become a cuck. I can see it and why people are mad.
7/21 c10 Guest
The story is just bad. The MC has all the advantages but the situations he is putting himself in and the way he is utilizing his advantages? It's retarded. It makes the story really bad.
The story is just bad. The MC has all the advantages but the situations he is putting himself in and the way he is utilizing his advantages? It's retarded. It makes the story really bad.
7/21 c9 Guest
The MC is doing another stupid shit. Why am I not surprised?
The MC is doing another stupid shit. Why am I not surprised?