for The Ladder3/28 c22 
6Blond Lucifer
So the MC can't marry a low born single and smart woman like Lina, who actually loves him, supports him and cares for him. But was actually ready to marry a woman who spread her legs not once but twice to two different men and already sired a bastard and almost gave birth to another bastard just because she is of high born and "intelligent". Make it make sense.
"Our son..."
God, i fucking cringed so hard at that line!
and your reasoning that children are blessing is so weak! would you raise a child that is not your own and marry a woman who almost gave birth to second one of second man's? how would you even trust her, that she would be faithful? How do you know she's hasn't whored herself out? And they were not from her marriages either! Because "apparently" everything is common in Drone! She literally fucked her own best friend's husband!? Is that not enough of a reason to stay away from crazy?
You literally made a dead character in the show before jt even started a fucking piece of shit.
I read the reviews of this on reddit! warning to stay away from this! But i still gave it a chance. man, MC is just a "nice" guy.
6Blond LuciferSo the MC can't marry a low born single and smart woman like Lina, who actually loves him, supports him and cares for him. But was actually ready to marry a woman who spread her legs not once but twice to two different men and already sired a bastard and almost gave birth to another bastard just because she is of high born and "intelligent". Make it make sense.
"Our son..."
God, i fucking cringed so hard at that line!
and your reasoning that children are blessing is so weak! would you raise a child that is not your own and marry a woman who almost gave birth to second one of second man's? how would you even trust her, that she would be faithful? How do you know she's hasn't whored herself out? And they were not from her marriages either! Because "apparently" everything is common in Drone! She literally fucked her own best friend's husband!? Is that not enough of a reason to stay away from crazy?
You literally made a dead character in the show before jt even started a fucking piece of shit.
I read the reviews of this on reddit! warning to stay away from this! But i still gave it a chance. man, MC is just a "nice" guy.
3/28 c1 Blond Lucifer
Why is he so ready to raise a child that is not his own, and marry the mother of said child? while he rejected Lina, his steward? Now if he took that targeryan in and people know that Ashara is the mom... won't people call her whore? won't they look down on him even more? how is he gonna even get others to agree his cause now?
Like I would understand if the MC genuinely has feelings or know her for years personally or he himself is a single father. But here, the MC himself is just a 15 year old ready to marry a woman, who got pregnant by two different people (not married so bastards) and he doesn't know her personally, why is even ready take on more headaches on himself? it just genuinely baffles me!
Why is he so ready to raise a child that is not his own, and marry the mother of said child? while he rejected Lina, his steward? Now if he took that targeryan in and people know that Ashara is the mom... won't people call her whore? won't they look down on him even more? how is he gonna even get others to agree his cause now?
Like I would understand if the MC genuinely has feelings or know her for years personally or he himself is a single father. But here, the MC himself is just a 15 year old ready to marry a woman, who got pregnant by two different people (not married so bastards) and he doesn't know her personally, why is even ready take on more headaches on himself? it just genuinely baffles me!
3/4 c3 Adis
Kinda disappointed that he went with the most boring of all the options and one that he almost already has in the first place
Kinda disappointed that he went with the most boring of all the options and one that he almost already has in the first place
1/16 c40 Guest
Nymeros-Martell should unite with house Baelish via the marriage of doran's daughter and heir to petyr's son and heir. This way Martells separate from the iron throne and create a dynasty, that would rule from red mountains to Rhoyne! And to Petyr it gives Dorne, more control over the stepstones, a good claim to the lands of Rhoyne, and a foothold in Westeros. His wife's house will be his vassal, and not the one of Robert, which is a boon.
Nymeros-Martell should unite with house Baelish via the marriage of doran's daughter and heir to petyr's son and heir. This way Martells separate from the iron throne and create a dynasty, that would rule from red mountains to Rhoyne! And to Petyr it gives Dorne, more control over the stepstones, a good claim to the lands of Rhoyne, and a foothold in Westeros. His wife's house will be his vassal, and not the one of Robert, which is a boon.
1/11 c40 War6088
The only thing I dislike about this story is the fact that it isn't finished. I have been consistently reading fanfiction for the better part of a decade, and I must say that this is one of the best fics I've had the pleasure of reading. This is easily in my top 25, maybe even top 10, and I've read hundreds. Well done. I can't wait to read the rest.
The only thing I dislike about this story is the fact that it isn't finished. I have been consistently reading fanfiction for the better part of a decade, and I must say that this is one of the best fics I've had the pleasure of reading. This is easily in my top 25, maybe even top 10, and I've read hundreds. Well done. I can't wait to read the rest.
1/9 c22 4Ace gaming
While I don't mind him raising the kid, as I agree that is a decent and moral thing to do. I vehemently disagree on making him heir. In the real modern world, it makes complete sense and is correct to treat adopted and biological kids the same (I know I would make no distinction if I ever adopted a kid), In a mediaeval Fantasy world? Yeah, only your biological bloodline should have authority to be kings. As it lends a layer of credibility and validity to the ruler. Plus this one's a Targaryen. How long until their line goes mad again? So raise him, but don't make him heir. Maybe make him a Duke or something?
4Ace gamingWhile I don't mind him raising the kid, as I agree that is a decent and moral thing to do. I vehemently disagree on making him heir. In the real modern world, it makes complete sense and is correct to treat adopted and biological kids the same (I know I would make no distinction if I ever adopted a kid), In a mediaeval Fantasy world? Yeah, only your biological bloodline should have authority to be kings. As it lends a layer of credibility and validity to the ruler. Plus this one's a Targaryen. How long until their line goes mad again? So raise him, but don't make him heir. Maybe make him a Duke or something?
1/9 c1 Ace gaming
Does this guy not like power? Green seeing is weak. Father of Dragons, or the King of Snakes would have been sooo OP. He could win wars by himself. Just let loose a basilisk. Entire armies fall dead. Venom that can kill anything. Coupled with skinchanging, he would be akin to a GOD.
Valyrian steel isn't a large enough benefit to give up on absolute power.
Does this guy not like power? Green seeing is weak. Father of Dragons, or the King of Snakes would have been sooo OP. He could win wars by himself. Just let loose a basilisk. Entire armies fall dead. Venom that can kill anything. Coupled with skinchanging, he would be akin to a GOD.
Valyrian steel isn't a large enough benefit to give up on absolute power.
11/13/2024 c36 Rrtttrefg
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11/2/2024 c40 Agent Frank
I can't believe it took me this long to come back to this story. It was amazing rereading the first twenty chapters and the next twenty that I had unfortunately never had a chance to try. The story has been excellent and I look forward to seeing how you handle the next arc.
I can't believe it took me this long to come back to this story. It was amazing rereading the first twenty chapters and the next twenty that I had unfortunately never had a chance to try. The story has been excellent and I look forward to seeing how you handle the next arc.
9/11/2024 c1 TerminalBatter
Very good, almost excellent really. The only problematic plot hole i found was the rescue of Elia Martell. With prior knowledge there is no way that the mc would have simply delivered her to Dorne without expecting major consequences. At the very least, he would have kept her survival secret and use the rescue of Lyanna as an excuse for the abrupt departure from Kingslanding.
I would have loved it if you delved deeper into the conquest of the Iron Islands. It would have been nice if a new city was erected within the disputed lands to serve as a capital instead of ruling from Myr.
I understand why you stopped updating the fic, conquering Westeros or simply shifting the power structures of the continent would require at least another 100-200k words and that’s without even considering the Night King.
Overall, great performance. A solid 9/10 in my books. Keep up the good work !
Very good, almost excellent really. The only problematic plot hole i found was the rescue of Elia Martell. With prior knowledge there is no way that the mc would have simply delivered her to Dorne without expecting major consequences. At the very least, he would have kept her survival secret and use the rescue of Lyanna as an excuse for the abrupt departure from Kingslanding.
I would have loved it if you delved deeper into the conquest of the Iron Islands. It would have been nice if a new city was erected within the disputed lands to serve as a capital instead of ruling from Myr.
I understand why you stopped updating the fic, conquering Westeros or simply shifting the power structures of the continent would require at least another 100-200k words and that’s without even considering the Night King.
Overall, great performance. A solid 9/10 in my books. Keep up the good work !
9/6/2024 c22 Guest
I don't understand why so many reviewers are angry that he married someone who has a child already. If that made him a cuck, then every stepfather or adoptive parent to have ever existed is also a cuck.
I think these people are just mad that this story is no longer fulfilling their wish fulfillment power fantasies. I, for one, believe stories are more interesting when protagonists have proper hurdles to overcome.
There are things to criticize about this story, but that creative decision isn't one of them. Ignore the incels lmao
I don't understand why so many reviewers are angry that he married someone who has a child already. If that made him a cuck, then every stepfather or adoptive parent to have ever existed is also a cuck.
I think these people are just mad that this story is no longer fulfilling their wish fulfillment power fantasies. I, for one, believe stories are more interesting when protagonists have proper hurdles to overcome.
There are things to criticize about this story, but that creative decision isn't one of them. Ignore the incels lmao
9/3/2024 c40 Guest
I liked it, and just read through the whole thing I don't get why people are hating on it so much. It's a fun story! And I'm sad it didn't get finished
I liked it, and just read through the whole thing I don't get why people are hating on it so much. It's a fun story! And I'm sad it didn't get finished
8/17/2024 c39 fag
Absolute cuckshit. Author is a sanctimonious dumbass who can't understand valid criticism.
Absolute cuckshit. Author is a sanctimonious dumbass who can't understand valid criticism.