for The Ladder8/17/2024 c39 fag
Absolute cuckshit. Author is a sanctimonious dumbass who can't understand valid criticism.
Absolute cuckshit. Author is a sanctimonious dumbass who can't understand valid criticism.
8/13/2024 c1 mockury
Petyr had just turned 15 in cannon when he challeneged Brandon, not 12. Other than that, looks to be off to an excellent start.
Petyr had just turned 15 in cannon when he challeneged Brandon, not 12. Other than that, looks to be off to an excellent start.
8/9/2024 c1 Guest
Bro u migth not have read gamer fics but it matters not there is no two fics that have the same system just dont focus on the numbers and skills to much you will be ok cus reading bunch of skills get real boring real fast and numbers become very hard to track and if you will add % and or multipliers it will become very time consuming i know a auhtor who had to start keeping track of it all on a spread sheet so i would not recomend going too deep into the numbers
Bro u migth not have read gamer fics but it matters not there is no two fics that have the same system just dont focus on the numbers and skills to much you will be ok cus reading bunch of skills get real boring real fast and numbers become very hard to track and if you will add % and or multipliers it will become very time consuming i know a auhtor who had to start keeping track of it all on a spread sheet so i would not recomend going too deep into the numbers
7/21/2024 c22 Guest
Author... you are an idiot if you don't understand why people drop your story after this chapter.
The reason why so many people are mad is that this is MC's second life. He should strive to enjoy it. For it to be fulfilling. Taking a woman as a wife who you KNOW loves another man? Even if that man is dead? Just because she is pretty?
Ugh. That's very bad writing.
Making her son your heir? So... what about MC's future children? You know... those that will actually have his blood?
It's just shaping up to be a major disappointment.
There is more to it. Love life is a MAJOR part of life. Your MC chose a woman he barely knows to be his partner in life. It's just disappointing in general. That kind of approach. He is setting himself up for a failure and unhappy life. The ONLY reason that won't happen is that the author will force his plot.
Author... you are an idiot if you don't understand why people drop your story after this chapter.
The reason why so many people are mad is that this is MC's second life. He should strive to enjoy it. For it to be fulfilling. Taking a woman as a wife who you KNOW loves another man? Even if that man is dead? Just because she is pretty?
Ugh. That's very bad writing.
Making her son your heir? So... what about MC's future children? You know... those that will actually have his blood?
It's just shaping up to be a major disappointment.
There is more to it. Love life is a MAJOR part of life. Your MC chose a woman he barely knows to be his partner in life. It's just disappointing in general. That kind of approach. He is setting himself up for a failure and unhappy life. The ONLY reason that won't happen is that the author will force his plot.
7/21/2024 c21 Guest
The Ben character is just bothersome to read about. It's like reading about this side character that REALLY didn't need to be included in the story but the stubborn author is REALLY trying to give him an important role. It's obnoxious.
The Ben character is just bothersome to read about. It's like reading about this side character that REALLY didn't need to be included in the story but the stubborn author is REALLY trying to give him an important role. It's obnoxious.
7/21/2024 c20 Guest
Ah, yeah. This is the chapter when the MC decides to become a cuck. I can see it and why people are mad.
Ah, yeah. This is the chapter when the MC decides to become a cuck. I can see it and why people are mad.
7/21/2024 c10 Guest
The story is just bad. The MC has all the advantages but the situations he is putting himself in and the way he is utilizing his advantages? It's retarded. It makes the story really bad.
The story is just bad. The MC has all the advantages but the situations he is putting himself in and the way he is utilizing his advantages? It's retarded. It makes the story really bad.
7/21/2024 c9 Guest
The MC is doing another stupid shit. Why am I not surprised?
The MC is doing another stupid shit. Why am I not surprised?
7/21/2024 c8 Guest
Yeaaaah... way to fuck it all up.
Yeaaaah... way to fuck it all up.
7/9/2024 c2 GodAxe
Father of Dragons or Skinchanger would be awesome. Dragons are terrifyingly strong, and without plot contrivances, he only thing that can consistently kill a dragon is other dragons.
Father of Dragons or Skinchanger would be awesome. Dragons are terrifyingly strong, and without plot contrivances, he only thing that can consistently kill a dragon is other dragons.
6/19/2024 c11 Orionclay
why not make Lina one of his wives if he intends to be a King it wouldn't be weird for him to have a harem (No more than 5 or 7 please!) and besides he doesn't follow the seven if he's a green seer and in the old god religion there's nothing against polygamy
why not make Lina one of his wives if he intends to be a King it wouldn't be weird for him to have a harem (No more than 5 or 7 please!) and besides he doesn't follow the seven if he's a green seer and in the old god religion there's nothing against polygamy
6/20/2024 c22 Antianti12
I'm glad I looked at the comments and went to this chapter I won't be reading anymore with him raising someone else's son cringe.
I'm glad I looked at the comments and went to this chapter I won't be reading anymore with him raising someone else's son cringe.
6/11/2024 c5 Please read me
You missed a rare opportunity to Use a horse whistle. like In legend of Zelda, I forgot which game, but I remember link using the whistle, you could even call your own horse epona. You can even Deck yourself out as link and practice his moves including jumping off back flipping and landing from your horse firing your bow and arrow from your horse, Using multiple weapons you can swap out from your inventory on your horse You can even partially armor link's outfit Like in the flashbacks from breath of the wild, Get yourself an ocarina and play the legend of zelda music, paint on your hand the triforce of courage just To screw With people. You can even become mute. The only things you say is "haya, ha, oh, hey"! You can even use magic to summon The Little ferry helper Glowy thingy that says "Hey!, Listen!, look!, watch out!
You missed a rare opportunity to Use a horse whistle. like In legend of Zelda, I forgot which game, but I remember link using the whistle, you could even call your own horse epona. You can even Deck yourself out as link and practice his moves including jumping off back flipping and landing from your horse firing your bow and arrow from your horse, Using multiple weapons you can swap out from your inventory on your horse You can even partially armor link's outfit Like in the flashbacks from breath of the wild, Get yourself an ocarina and play the legend of zelda music, paint on your hand the triforce of courage just To screw With people. You can even become mute. The only things you say is "haya, ha, oh, hey"! You can even use magic to summon The Little ferry helper Glowy thingy that says "Hey!, Listen!, look!, watch out!
6/11/2024 c5 Please read me
You missed a rare opportunity to Use a horse whistle. like In legend of Zelda, I forgot which game, but I remember link using the whistle, you could even call your own horse epona. You can even Deck yourself out as link and practice his moves including jumping off back flipping and landing from your horse firing your bow and arrow from your horse, Using multiple weapons you can swap out from your inventory on your horse You can even partially armor link's outfit Like in the flashbacks from breath of the wild, Get yourself an ocarina and play the legend of zelda music, paint on your hand the triforce of courage just To screw With people. You can even become mute. The only things you say is "haya, ha, oh, hey"! You can even use magic to summon The Little ferry helper Glowy thingy that says "Hey!, Listen!, look!, watch out!"
You missed a rare opportunity to Use a horse whistle. like In legend of Zelda, I forgot which game, but I remember link using the whistle, you could even call your own horse epona. You can even Deck yourself out as link and practice his moves including jumping off back flipping and landing from your horse firing your bow and arrow from your horse, Using multiple weapons you can swap out from your inventory on your horse You can even partially armor link's outfit Like in the flashbacks from breath of the wild, Get yourself an ocarina and play the legend of zelda music, paint on your hand the triforce of courage just To screw With people. You can even become mute. The only things you say is "haya, ha, oh, hey"! You can even use magic to summon The Little ferry helper Glowy thingy that says "Hey!, Listen!, look!, watch out!"