
8/2/2013 c9
5AngelfromBeyondBelow
please update soon it's a brilliantly written time travel fic and I love the way Harry is interacting with all the past versions of people and that he has a friend outside the usual, The Marauders,

please update soon it's a brilliantly written time travel fic and I love the way Harry is interacting with all the past versions of people and that he has a friend outside the usual, The Marauders,
6/14/2013 c9
1anthea tronchard step
I enjoy it. please write the story. Maybe others think bad about this story this but i enjoy it. It is not so important what other thinks, it is your story. If somebody write a critic and can find a good point it is a good aleaa

I enjoy it. please write the story. Maybe others think bad about this story this but i enjoy it. It is not so important what other thinks, it is your story. If somebody write a critic and can find a good point it is a good aleaa
10/13/2012 c9 Guest
Uppplooooaaaaddd ! :)
Uppplooooaaaaddd ! :)
9/8/2012 c9
3NitaIce
I think this is well written. However, I would like to point out, in a non-mean and completely helpful way, in some of your sentences your missing words. Like in this chapter, chapter 9, when McGonagall was taking points after Sirius said " It was just a Slytherin," it didn't say how many points. Also, the plot doesn't say why Harry was going back in time. I may have just missed that part though.

I think this is well written. However, I would like to point out, in a non-mean and completely helpful way, in some of your sentences your missing words. Like in this chapter, chapter 9, when McGonagall was taking points after Sirius said " It was just a Slytherin," it didn't say how many points. Also, the plot doesn't say why Harry was going back in time. I may have just missed that part though.
3/3/2012 c2
2WhiteFang001
I was just reading your Authors note and wanted to say...
I read the 7th book in 4 hours - no joke ^^'
I also really liked Cedric and the 4th book... I think you beat me on that one and I read it in 7 hours

I was just reading your Authors note and wanted to say...
I read the 7th book in 4 hours - no joke ^^'
I also really liked Cedric and the 4th book... I think you beat me on that one and I read it in 7 hours