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9/14/2011 c9 1Abandoned Account1111111111111
I love your story. It is probably my favorite Time Travel fan fiction I've read. It is canon—I know, GASP—and has really good characterizations. I love how Harry isn't all "Goody-goody" or anything. I think it's moving forward at a good pace, too. The plot is not showing too much so far but from what we see it looks great. The beginning has an air of mystery, which really hooked me onto the story with questions like: Why is he there? Why do James and Sirius hate Dennis? Is that Parkison boy Pansy's dad? Did he look really funny? Or just sad? How will this all play out, etc, etc?

So yes, very good. Very good. One thing though. One MAJOR thing you are lacking in. UPDATES. You are killing us, in a good, yet heart-breaking way. You leave us with a cliffhanger, on a pretense that you will return and then you go and leave and never come back! That hurts. That hurts in . . . here. *points to heart*

If you, by any small chance, read your reviews anymore I hope you find somewhere in your heart to update or give an author's note saying that you quit this story. It'd be much obliged. Thanks.

P.S. Sorry for any typos—it's being written on my iPod's messed up keyboard. Stupid iPod.
7/23/2011 c9 11Sezu-Ni
I liked it a lot! It s kinda cute how protective Harry is over Dennis and how Dennis's chose reflects on what Sirius went through. One thing tho, you should start using italics and bolded words to make sure it sticks out, cause it gets kinda confusing sometimes. Other then that, I loved it ^^
7/23/2011 c9 12Jelbertie
This by far is the best time-travelfic I have ever read, and I've read quite a few. Well done on perfecting their personalities, I think it's excellent that Harry, The Marauders and the teachers aren't perfect. The explanation on magical objects is better than I could have done; isn't it a coincidence that it was very similar to how I was going to explain mine time-travel fic? Anyway, congrats on such a good story, I really do like it. The only concern I have are the grammatical errors, but honestly they don't really bother me, I just put that there in case you want anything to improve on.
7/6/2011 c9 mysticmoon1331
love it.
7/3/2011 c9 Flip Flops n Crop Tops
cool update soon
6/21/2011 c9 AmeliaQ
This was really good(;
5/25/2011 c9 8gemiinous
is this...cancelled? thats a pity, it's some really good writing! i really hope you get back to it eventually!
5/20/2011 c9 6Bobo's Donuts
Good story so far but I hope it isn't abandoned ...
4/24/2011 c9 4Bokmal14
This is a very good fanfiction and I am looking forward to reading the next chapter very much.
2/17/2011 c9 1DongBangLuver
OMG. I LOVE THIIIIS! Update soon!

So is this going to be like Harry disaproves of His father? I like those kind of storys... haha. AND i hope this gets realllly angsty because I have been searching for a story that can put me on the edge of my seat! XD This story has been verry good so far though XDDD
2/4/2011 c9 Lolxxx
Updaaaaaaate!
12/1/2010 c7 TyKo
You asked at the ned of this chapter what we would say to people who have lost a family member or loved one. Well, admittedly, I am much different than other people because this is my response.

"I'm sorry for all the things you never got to do with them. However, I am nnot sorry they are gone. The lose of them makes up a part of who you are today. Feel free to miss them, but don't mourn them."

A little heartless, I know, but hey. It helped a friend move on when her daddy died.
11/27/2010 c9 um. hi
now, you haven't updated in years, so i think now would be a good time. i mean really? yo u want to leave the story like that? all suspenseful and suvh?
9/9/2010 c1 2MoonyJude7
I love this story sosososososo much! Siriusly it probably in my top five
8/24/2010 c9 ForgottenTales
I loved this. It was very easy to read and the storyline flowed well. It's a little different from the other time travel fics, where Harry seems to obsess about his parents and the Mauraders constant or downright hates them. I like Dennis, he gives a semblence of normality to the story, and the story doesn't revolve around cannon characters where Harry knows where they'll end up years in the future. He can form an unbiased view. :)

I liked Harry here. He seems content to observe and behaves like a normal student. I hated those fics where Harry actually encourages the mindset that it's ok to bully Slytherins, so this chapter really made my day, unfortunally it is the last chapter as well. D:
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