for Remnants of a Gold Gear (Rewrite)5/9 c1 Guest
Where are raven and the other characters?
Where are raven and the other characters?
3/26 c54 Guest
When will you make the next chapter?
When will you make the next chapter?
2/6 c54 Guest
Please don't abandoned this fanfiction it was getting good
Please don't abandoned this fanfiction it was getting good
11/16/2024 c54 Guest
Honestly, Yang and Coco's behavior in this story is starting to tire and irritate me more and more. To the point that I hope for their imminent death or capture by the Locust, but they could also get to know the famous "hospitality" of these underground creatures. Who knows, maybe a stay in the mines of the new Nexus would finally help them come to their senses and get rid of this annoying arrogance.
Honestly, Yang and Coco's behavior in this story is starting to tire and irritate me more and more. To the point that I hope for their imminent death or capture by the Locust, but they could also get to know the famous "hospitality" of these underground creatures. Who knows, maybe a stay in the mines of the new Nexus would finally help them come to their senses and get rid of this annoying arrogance.
10/29/2024 c54 
13IX404
Someone send the Security Officer from the Marathon franchise to bust these two out. He'd make short work of the Locust.
Either way, nicely done, man. Looking forwards to seeing more come out.
13IX404Someone send the Security Officer from the Marathon franchise to bust these two out. He'd make short work of the Locust.
Either way, nicely done, man. Looking forwards to seeing more come out.
10/26/2024 c54 miguelminjares15.2004
Hello, when are you going to update the story of the wolves that walk alone?
Hello, when are you going to update the story of the wolves that walk alone?
10/26/2024 c54 8Napster153
Damn, gnarliest chapter to date. Praying to God it's not Jaune who gets the Tai treatment.
Also, that last scene, I think I see where this might be going.
8Napster153Damn, gnarliest chapter to date. Praying to God it's not Jaune who gets the Tai treatment.
Also, that last scene, I think I see where this might be going.
10/5/2024 c53 Karzamatic
i’m praying you to drop another chapter at some point because this story is extremely good
i’m praying you to drop another chapter at some point because this story is extremely good
9/20/2024 c53 Guest
Is there a chance during their time in captivity with the Locust that Walker and Jaune will meet members of Salem's inner circle who will shed some light on what is happening to the Grimm witch.
Is there a chance during their time in captivity with the Locust that Walker and Jaune will meet members of Salem's inner circle who will shed some light on what is happening to the Grimm witch.
9/16/2024 c53 DOOMRAIDER
Something that could be interesting is Walker and Jaune getting footage of the Hell that they are in and what the Locust put people through. Yes it could make people even more afraid of them but it will no doubt get more people to join the war effort since they will see the results if the Locust win. With the Grimm they will just get killed and let’s be honest hear Salem is pathetic in terms of actually terrifying somebody that has seen the true depths of malice. I can name 2 white skin black and red eye villains that make Salems atrocities seem like a walk in the park. The Batman Who Laughs (DC) and Miyabi (Higanjima) these guys don’t just use chemicals or blood to make monsters (Groblins or Demons) similar to Salem with that Hound creature which while bad doesn’t begin to compare to what those two do to people. Both of them are very intelligent and were capable through understanding their enemies to predict future actions to such an extent that it surprised their enemies and made taking action against them harder since there was always the worry that what they were doing was playing right into their opponent hand. This is something Scorn is learning and likewise with his comment about making monsters there is a good bet that there will be people that our guys will care about that got captured by the Locust or someone innocent like a child that will be threatened to be killed if Jaune or Walker don’t do something horrible.
Something that could be interesting is Walker and Jaune getting footage of the Hell that they are in and what the Locust put people through. Yes it could make people even more afraid of them but it will no doubt get more people to join the war effort since they will see the results if the Locust win. With the Grimm they will just get killed and let’s be honest hear Salem is pathetic in terms of actually terrifying somebody that has seen the true depths of malice. I can name 2 white skin black and red eye villains that make Salems atrocities seem like a walk in the park. The Batman Who Laughs (DC) and Miyabi (Higanjima) these guys don’t just use chemicals or blood to make monsters (Groblins or Demons) similar to Salem with that Hound creature which while bad doesn’t begin to compare to what those two do to people. Both of them are very intelligent and were capable through understanding their enemies to predict future actions to such an extent that it surprised their enemies and made taking action against them harder since there was always the worry that what they were doing was playing right into their opponent hand. This is something Scorn is learning and likewise with his comment about making monsters there is a good bet that there will be people that our guys will care about that got captured by the Locust or someone innocent like a child that will be threatened to be killed if Jaune or Walker don’t do something horrible.
9/16/2024 c53 The Disquieting One
shame, it is a deal-breaker, yet not severe enough to expose Ozpin's manipulation to the public.
still, its been a few days since Walker & Jaune got kidnapped, so things could happened in their absence...
shame, it is a deal-breaker, yet not severe enough to expose Ozpin's manipulation to the public.
still, its been a few days since Walker & Jaune got kidnapped, so things could happened in their absence...