for Whispers of a Raven8h c12 aries12345251
i didn't think there would already a lot of confrontation with dumbles order and the death muncher im pretty sure their 1st encounter just happens at the last chapter and now its already a lot, right its the cursed timeskipper just like the romance part were the timeskipper do its magic
i didn't think there would already a lot of confrontation with dumbles order and the death muncher im pretty sure their 1st encounter just happens at the last chapter and now its already a lot, right its the cursed timeskipper just like the romance part were the timeskipper do its magic
8h c12 aries12345251
and its start with another useless mobs pov, seriously why would anyone care if amelia is not speaking with edgar
and its start with another useless mobs pov, seriously why would anyone care if amelia is not speaking with edgar
8h c11 aries12345251
20% of the chapter is harry's pov and the rest is the useless mobs pov
and is this another timeskipped romance like what you did with your other fic with harry and minerva? the romance and courtship happens in a timeskip
20% of the chapter is harry's pov and the rest is the useless mobs pov
and is this another timeskipped romance like what you did with your other fic with harry and minerva? the romance and courtship happens in a timeskip
8h c11 aries12345251
20% of the chapter is harry's pov and the rest is the useless mobs pov
and is this another timeskipped romance like what you did with your other fic with harry and minerva? the romance and courtship happens in a timeskip
20% of the chapter is harry's pov and the rest is the useless mobs pov
and is this another timeskipped romance like what you did with your other fic with harry and minerva? the romance and courtship happens in a timeskip
10h c10 aries12345251
wow for this chapter to be almost full of others useless pov, half of the chapter is already from others useless pov then 1/8th of the remaining chapter is for harry and the rest is again for anothers useless pov
wow for this chapter to be almost full of others useless pov, half of the chapter is already from others useless pov then 1/8th of the remaining chapter is for harry and the rest is again for anothers useless pov
12h c7 aries12345251
wow this chapter was much better than the other chapter so far, others pov is tolerable since its only a few paragraphs
i just hope most of the chapters is like this
wow this chapter was much better than the other chapter so far, others pov is tolerable since its only a few paragraphs
i just hope most of the chapters is like this
12h c6 aries12345251
yup 20% of this chapter is only on harry's pov and most of it is from others useless pov even charlus useless pov of looking in the book of family lineage is even included
yup 20% of this chapter is only on harry's pov and most of it is from others useless pov even charlus useless pov of looking in the book of family lineage is even included
12h c6 aries12345251
wow the opening is already from others useless pov instead of the mc.
i think it will only need 5 chapters to finished this if you erase all others useless pov
i wonder how many words i can read before i skipped again because of others useless pov
wow the opening is already from others useless pov instead of the mc.
i think it will only need 5 chapters to finished this if you erase all others useless pov
i wonder how many words i can read before i skipped again because of others useless pov
12h c5 aries12345251
seriously half of the chapter is useless pov of others with a useless flashback, and you said this one is better than the others? i think narcissa is the true mc of this ff and harry js the male lead with how much screen time narcissa has compared to harry
seriously half of the chapter is useless pov of others with a useless flashback, and you said this one is better than the others? i think narcissa is the true mc of this ff and harry js the male lead with how much screen time narcissa has compared to harry
12h c5 aries12345251
yup i see myself reading this faster by i anticipated since i skipled most others useless pov,
yup i see myself reading this faster by i anticipated since i skipled most others useless pov,
13h c4 aries12345251
yup i have seen the problem with this ff, the prolonged pov of others that wasn't even interesting
yup i have seen the problem with this ff, the prolonged pov of others that wasn't even interesting