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3/2 c1 SteVie'SGirL
That was so cute!
2/7 c18 20Watership's Nightwish Rat
Sorry for the late review!

Yay! Valerie's been promoted! *blows party horn*
Coba: The promotion's well deserved. And it's been a long time coming!

Nice callback to Batman Begins!

I'm looking forward to So Far Away and the potential additions to the first "Chronicles" set!
1/19 c15 Watership's Nightwish Rat
I honestly like the idea of Max being Batwoman at some point. Or even Helena being Batwoman. Or another Huntress.
1/19 c14 Watership's Nightwish Rat
Grace and Stevie: Prepare for trouble!
Warren and August: And make it double!

Sorry, I couldn't resist the Pokemon reference. XD

Aww, it's so nice to see Bruce happy and hopeful! Nothing's going to get in the way of that again, right?
*Crickets*
...Riiiight?
1/4 c12 32RyokoMist
IT'S ALL THE WORLD AND CHARACTER BUILDING FOR ME!

I'm doing a lot of caps lock because you got me doing a lot of hollering...DEAL WITH IT! YOU WANTED MY REVIEWS THIS IS HOW YOU GET EM!
1/4 c10 RyokoMist
...I never thought you could make me jealous of Chelsea but you did...NOW I KEEP SEEING HAYATE AND CHELSEA AND MICHELLE AND OH GAWD THIS IS YOU GETTING REVENGE FOR ME HINTING AT TERRY/MAX/CHELSEA, ISN'T IT?! YOU-! *flips table*
1/4 c9 RyokoMist
New OC?

NEW OC! AND SHE KNOWS BRUCE WAS BATMAN! I LIKE HER RIGHT NOW! DON'T CHANGE THAT! (or do. what can I say? I like a baddie)
1/4 c8 RyokoMist
Imma punch Terry and Basem in their faces!

...Then tie em to the bed as punishment...then we'll have a real sparring match...I'M NOT APOLOGIZING!
12/29/2021 c11 20Watership's Nightwish Rat
It's nice to see someone from Helena's past! They seem to get along really well. I love how the others are placing bets on how long it'll be before Helena and Lincoln get together. And how they conceded that Max and Hayate win. Haha!
12/29/2021 c10 Watership's Nightwish Rat
WNR: *notices the title of the chapter* Oh no...
Coba: Oh no...
Meisha and Iris: Oh no!
Kool-Aid Man: OH YEAH!
WNR and Coba glare at him as the rats chase him.

I don't remember if I said this before, but I find it really cool that Chelsea is in the know about the superheroes and is practically part of the family now. Chelsea and Michelle's interactions had me rolling!
10/29/2021 c9 Watership's Nightwish Rat
Welcome to the team, Tiana! I'm curious to learn more about her like we had your other OCs so far. By the way: Is she named after the main character of The Princess and the Frog?
10/29/2021 c8 Watership's Nightwish Rat
I have gotta say this- -I flipping LOVE Mitch and Isabela! Glad to see Michelle has family that actually give a darn about her. And ooh boy, Terry and Basem set themselves up for that! Though... I wouldn't put it past Bruce to record the incident and send it to Max and Sally, then they make an edit of Basem's "Don't hold back!" and Terry's "Please, hit us as hard as you can!" set to porno music to torture the guys with. Or that's just my mind being corrupted by all of the sexual references being made throughout this series. *shrugs*
10/29/2021 c7 Watership's Nightwish Rat
Goodbye Blaze and helloooooooooo Ember! The suit sounds like an awesome one, too! And yep, Michelle, I'm with you on the pants vs skirt thing. Never really liked wearing skirts.
10/29/2021 c6 Watership's Nightwish Rat
Sorry for the late review! Kept getting sidetracked.

Yay! Bruce is giving Max and Sally more access to helping the group! And Sally's willing to turn on everyone to do it! It's a win-win! :P Ooh, I hope Helena joins the life as the new Huntress or something. As long as she doesn't die. That would be a huge bummer.
10/12/2021 c7 32RyokoMist
THIS IS TOO CUTE, UGH! *punches ceiling*
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