for Slay The Hierarchy
68/4/2021 c9 Donbasos
Oh boy oh boy oh boy oh boy, what a short chapter with a cliffhanger. Once again looking forward to the next one already! Still loving this alternative universe take on the Doom franchise.
Oh boy oh boy oh boy oh boy, what a short chapter with a cliffhanger. Once again looking forward to the next one already! Still loving this alternative universe take on the Doom franchise.
7/27/2021 c8 Starhammer
Our old boy the Slayer has eliminated the gargoyle and in a very Slayeresque manner, also Daisy.
Our old boy the Slayer has eliminated the gargoyle and in a very Slayeresque manner, also Daisy.
7/18/2021 c7 VLF
Cliffhangers suck
Cliffhangers suck
7/18/2021 c7 Dontus -not Donut- Powerus
Good short chapter if I say so myself. Also I'm guessing that this 'Daisy' is his bunny turned hooman. :v you also got me from that cliffhanger. I thought that there's moar.
Anyway, here's what I think will happen in future chapters.
The Doomslayer lifted the big column of the palace, surprising everyone with his strength, as his arm tore through stone and lifting it effortlessly as he finds a hand scanner.
Placing his free hand, it turned on with a beep and scanned his hand.
"Welcome Praetor Slayer."
It says after it scanned him, baffling everyone as to hear the whole building speak, the priest fared no better. "BY GOD'S NAME! HE'S THE CHOSEN RULER!"
The Slayer never minded the awed looks and loud gasps with the body of her mother falling to the floor from shock. "Your Tower of Doom awaits you m'lord." It continued as a sudden burst of light came to 5 kilometers away from him in the forest of the damned, highlighting the tower itself.
"Seraphim Samur Mayker awaits your conquest against the dark realm O Praetor. Kar En Tuk!" It says before the light of the screen fades.
The Slayer looks at the column. Throwing it to the left of him, over estimating his power from sheer happiness that it flew out like a rocket.
Meanwhile... In the other kingdom that was waging war with them...
The King is eating his fill, laughing like a mad man as his son stabbs him at the heart. "You're no better than me, fool. This is our kingdom's tradition. Your bloodied coronation. Everyone, even your friends lied to you, I paid them a large sum to do this. It sharpens the skill of the next in line. And makes sure that you are up to the task. Congratulations, new king!"
The newly crowned king gasps as he looked back and saw them all cheering. Cheering for his victory. Looking at them all with regret as he knowingly killed innocents just so he can continue this mad tradition.
"I want to die..."
And die he did, for a familiar column busted in the roof, crushing him and his dead father, breaking the foundation and in turn, sinking the castle, killing most of this kingdom's elite army.
Good short chapter if I say so myself. Also I'm guessing that this 'Daisy' is his bunny turned hooman. :v you also got me from that cliffhanger. I thought that there's moar.
Anyway, here's what I think will happen in future chapters.
The Doomslayer lifted the big column of the palace, surprising everyone with his strength, as his arm tore through stone and lifting it effortlessly as he finds a hand scanner.
Placing his free hand, it turned on with a beep and scanned his hand.
"Welcome Praetor Slayer."
It says after it scanned him, baffling everyone as to hear the whole building speak, the priest fared no better. "BY GOD'S NAME! HE'S THE CHOSEN RULER!"
The Slayer never minded the awed looks and loud gasps with the body of her mother falling to the floor from shock. "Your Tower of Doom awaits you m'lord." It continued as a sudden burst of light came to 5 kilometers away from him in the forest of the damned, highlighting the tower itself.
"Seraphim Samur Mayker awaits your conquest against the dark realm O Praetor. Kar En Tuk!" It says before the light of the screen fades.
The Slayer looks at the column. Throwing it to the left of him, over estimating his power from sheer happiness that it flew out like a rocket.
Meanwhile... In the other kingdom that was waging war with them...
The King is eating his fill, laughing like a mad man as his son stabbs him at the heart. "You're no better than me, fool. This is our kingdom's tradition. Your bloodied coronation. Everyone, even your friends lied to you, I paid them a large sum to do this. It sharpens the skill of the next in line. And makes sure that you are up to the task. Congratulations, new king!"
The newly crowned king gasps as he looked back and saw them all cheering. Cheering for his victory. Looking at them all with regret as he knowingly killed innocents just so he can continue this mad tradition.
"I want to die..."
And die he did, for a familiar column busted in the roof, crushing him and his dead father, breaking the foundation and in turn, sinking the castle, killing most of this kingdom's elite army.
7/18/2021 c7 Donbasos
A tad short but a good one. Quite the distraction indeed but understandable if they were digging for a year. Looking forward to the next one!
A tad short but a good one. Quite the distraction indeed but understandable if they were digging for a year. Looking forward to the next one!
7/12/2021 c6 Guest
Noice
Noice
7/9/2021 c6 Starhammer
FUCKING HELL that was funny, Jesus you are a fucking smart ass. This made me laugh way too fucking much.
FUCKING HELL that was funny, Jesus you are a fucking smart ass. This made me laugh way too fucking much.
7/8/2021 c6 Donbasos
Nice, short chapter.
But boy oh boy could I use more of this story. One of only 2 or 3 ongoing Doom fanfics worth reading currently. No real feedback for you, spelling grammar etc. is on point. Flow of it all is good ass well.
Nice, short chapter.
But boy oh boy could I use more of this story. One of only 2 or 3 ongoing Doom fanfics worth reading currently. No real feedback for you, spelling grammar etc. is on point. Flow of it all is good ass well.
7/5/2021 c1 Guest
Why did you even think this would be a good idea like so many other interesting ideas you could do and you do this!
Why did you even think this would be a good idea like so many other interesting ideas you could do and you do this!
7/1/2021 c5 Starhammer
Well, things or looking up for our dear old Slayer, he has a family, he has a high chance of retrieving his shit again, and VEGA, my boy is here in all of his gentlemanly and intelligent ways, nice to have the duo back in force, though Slayer should start getting along with his family a bit more now that he's stuck here, but at least he has Vega. Though I am wondering if he's going to be put into a situation where he'll have to marry someone, that is how noble hierarchies work after all, though considering this is called "Slay the Hierarchy" I can guess that he'd rather a hardworking peasant girl over a spoiled noble girl.
Well, things or looking up for our dear old Slayer, he has a family, he has a high chance of retrieving his shit again, and VEGA, my boy is here in all of his gentlemanly and intelligent ways, nice to have the duo back in force, though Slayer should start getting along with his family a bit more now that he's stuck here, but at least he has Vega. Though I am wondering if he's going to be put into a situation where he'll have to marry someone, that is how noble hierarchies work after all, though considering this is called "Slay the Hierarchy" I can guess that he'd rather a hardworking peasant girl over a spoiled noble girl.