for Slay The Hierarchy6/19/2021 c4 Donbasos
Now this is an interesting story. Gonna follow and favourite it to see where it goes.
I for one do not mind longer chapters but you need the time to write them. So do what is best for you. Spelling, grammer and flow is good. So far it is also pleasant to read through, with that I mean that I now when someone is talking and whom is talking. Sometimes that gets lost. TLDR: Keep truckin, you doin good
Now this is an interesting story. Gonna follow and favourite it to see where it goes.
I for one do not mind longer chapters but you need the time to write them. So do what is best for you. Spelling, grammer and flow is good. So far it is also pleasant to read through, with that I mean that I now when someone is talking and whom is talking. Sometimes that gets lost. TLDR: Keep truckin, you doin good
6/19/2021 c4 
12Doom King of Latveria
At last, you finally make our baddass hell-Walker meet with his best buddy, VEGA! Seriously, him and that super A.I. is like greatest duo in video game after Master Chief and Cortana
12Doom King of LatveriaAt last, you finally make our baddass hell-Walker meet with his best buddy, VEGA! Seriously, him and that super A.I. is like greatest duo in video game after Master Chief and Cortana
6/18/2021 c4 Dontus -not Donut- Powerus
The Slayer can speak. It's fine for you to make him speak at times, fam.
The Slayer can speak. It's fine for you to make him speak at times, fam.
6/18/2021 c4 6Starhammer
I'm gonna be honest, I did not expect VEGA, but I sure as hell ain't complaining. That was a nice reveal, you handled it pretty well and it didn't feel out of place at all. Good job!
6StarhammerI'm gonna be honest, I did not expect VEGA, but I sure as hell ain't complaining. That was a nice reveal, you handled it pretty well and it didn't feel out of place at all. Good job!
6/11/2021 c3 Guest
Ok. This is tremendous. What a concept! I’ve never even heard of anything of this sort and it am bizarrely delighted by it. Very much looking forward to the continuation of this remarkable imagination.
Ok. This is tremendous. What a concept! I’ve never even heard of anything of this sort and it am bizarrely delighted by it. Very much looking forward to the continuation of this remarkable imagination.
6/7/2021 c3 Dontus -not Donut- Powerus
Ok, fine I guess.
Now that I think about it, this is literally the perfect setting for DoomGuy to go in DnD.
Killing 500 dragons would be a fun time to kill time at least.
Also "normal". Normal as in a 1 year old or 2 is already able walking a "Normal baby".
I think the reason why the Praetor suit is "hell forged": made from the Iron found in demon blood and could only be molded in hellish temperatures. :v
Ok, fine I guess.
Now that I think about it, this is literally the perfect setting for DoomGuy to go in DnD.
Killing 500 dragons would be a fun time to kill time at least.
Also "normal". Normal as in a 1 year old or 2 is already able walking a "Normal baby".
I think the reason why the Praetor suit is "hell forged": made from the Iron found in demon blood and could only be molded in hellish temperatures. :v
5/23/2021 c2 Fushes
Pretty sure Slayer would call the other Gods a rip off. Considering he did meet the real GOD.
Pretty sure Slayer would call the other Gods a rip off. Considering he did meet the real GOD.
4/22/2021 c2 COELACANTH
Well… after what dear old Count Blazkowicz has set his mind to, this won’t end well for the Doom Slayer. Exactly which world did you base upon this new reality that the Doom Slayer finds himself in, as an infant? Or was it a creation of your own making, taking inspiration from all the others?
Well… after what dear old Count Blazkowicz has set his mind to, this won’t end well for the Doom Slayer. Exactly which world did you base upon this new reality that the Doom Slayer finds himself in, as an infant? Or was it a creation of your own making, taking inspiration from all the others?
4/22/2021 c1 COELACANTH
Hmm… first chapter in, and I’m definitely curious — first I’ve ever read on the Doom Slayer being reincarnated like in those 'ISEKAI'.
Some contradictions with the background information, the lore and the 'technicalities' I would be disagreeing with but we can work on those over time…
The question is whether you are willing to take into consideration the established lore (from the Codex) in both "Doom" (2016) and "Doom Eternal" — good example would be "Welcome Home, Great Slayer" By: Sir Yeetus Deletus (id: 13625288).
Hmm… first chapter in, and I’m definitely curious — first I’ve ever read on the Doom Slayer being reincarnated like in those 'ISEKAI'.
Some contradictions with the background information, the lore and the 'technicalities' I would be disagreeing with but we can work on those over time…
The question is whether you are willing to take into consideration the established lore (from the Codex) in both "Doom" (2016) and "Doom Eternal" — good example would be "Welcome Home, Great Slayer" By: Sir Yeetus Deletus (id: 13625288).
4/23/2021 c2 Dontus -not Donut- Powerus
Dude, I think you should change the single quotation marks into double quotation marks.
Simply put, quotation marks are used to set off material that is quoted. And, you can quote me on this, I think it’s safe to say that there isn’t a fiction book of any genre that doesn’t have dialogue. Characters need to speak, right?
Quotation marks are those double apostrophes that swing both ways—left and right (“ opening; ” closing). They always travel in pairs and are placed at the beginning and the end of dialogue.
-From w ww . google amp /s / www . firstediting proper-use-of-quotation-marks-in-fiction-writing / amp /
Because Single quotation marks are mostly used for a character's thoughts. And this:
Single quotation marks are used to indicate quotations inside of other quotations. “Jessie said, ‘Goodbye,'” Ben said. This is Ben talking, so his words go in quotation marks. But because we’re quoting Ben quoting someone else, Jessie, we use single quotation marks to indicate the quote within the quote.
-from this site: ww w. sungazette life/ lifestyle-news/ 2020/07/a-word-please-how-to-use-single-double-quotation-marks/# :~ :text Single % 20quotation % 20marks % 20are % 20used % 20to % 20indicate % 20quotations % 20inside % 20of,the % 20quote % 20within % 20the % 20quote.
Please with all due respect, this is by no means a way to belittle your writing. Simply to help you polish your skills in writing your story.
Dude, I think you should change the single quotation marks into double quotation marks.
Simply put, quotation marks are used to set off material that is quoted. And, you can quote me on this, I think it’s safe to say that there isn’t a fiction book of any genre that doesn’t have dialogue. Characters need to speak, right?
Quotation marks are those double apostrophes that swing both ways—left and right (“ opening; ” closing). They always travel in pairs and are placed at the beginning and the end of dialogue.
-From w ww . google amp /s / www . firstediting proper-use-of-quotation-marks-in-fiction-writing / amp /
Because Single quotation marks are mostly used for a character's thoughts. And this:
Single quotation marks are used to indicate quotations inside of other quotations. “Jessie said, ‘Goodbye,'” Ben said. This is Ben talking, so his words go in quotation marks. But because we’re quoting Ben quoting someone else, Jessie, we use single quotation marks to indicate the quote within the quote.
-from this site: ww w. sungazette life/ lifestyle-news/ 2020/07/a-word-please-how-to-use-single-double-quotation-marks/# :~ :text Single % 20quotation % 20marks % 20are % 20used % 20to % 20indicate % 20quotations % 20inside % 20of,the % 20quote % 20within % 20the % 20quote.
Please with all due respect, this is by no means a way to belittle your writing. Simply to help you polish your skills in writing your story.
4/23/2021 c1 Dontus -not Donut- Powerus
I don't know about the Slayer's armor recycling his waist. Since he does not need to eat or sleep. The Praetor Suit is more of an energy to ammo converter.
As the Director for Doom, Hugo Martin himself confirmed that he is a Primevil. A God. He looks like the Dark Lord because that's what Primevils are all supposed to look like. Yes, he already is a super human well before the Divinity machine. Well before he got enhanced.
Search "Why is the Doomslayer and Davoth look alike?" It's a video from midnight, but I assure you, he has the clip of Hugo telling us that the Slayer is already a God.
He was already a Divine being. Although with weak power. The Divinity Machine only gave him more power because it's a big surge of energy given to him. If a normal Mortal were to be given by Godly power and not a Primevil, they'll die on the spot.
It's the sole reason why Samur Mayker can't just do it to a random Sentinel Knight because he just reversed the polarity and made the Slayer "The Slayer".
I'll follow and favorite as I will read this story's progress with interest.
I don't know about the Slayer's armor recycling his waist. Since he does not need to eat or sleep. The Praetor Suit is more of an energy to ammo converter.
As the Director for Doom, Hugo Martin himself confirmed that he is a Primevil. A God. He looks like the Dark Lord because that's what Primevils are all supposed to look like. Yes, he already is a super human well before the Divinity machine. Well before he got enhanced.
Search "Why is the Doomslayer and Davoth look alike?" It's a video from midnight, but I assure you, he has the clip of Hugo telling us that the Slayer is already a God.
He was already a Divine being. Although with weak power. The Divinity Machine only gave him more power because it's a big surge of energy given to him. If a normal Mortal were to be given by Godly power and not a Primevil, they'll die on the spot.
It's the sole reason why Samur Mayker can't just do it to a random Sentinel Knight because he just reversed the polarity and made the Slayer "The Slayer".
I'll follow and favorite as I will read this story's progress with interest.