for In The Weeds4/3/2022 c27 Flippysten
Thank you, thank you! I loved it! I so hoped they ended up married. The wedding was beautiful : ) I've missed these two, can't wait for the second epilogue. Hoping they have kids :D
Thank you, thank you! I loved it! I so hoped they ended up married. The wedding was beautiful : ) I've missed these two, can't wait for the second epilogue. Hoping they have kids :D
4/3/2022 c27 mysticfighter111
No, they're even better than I hoped. Thanksgiving in Forks was so full of love and good emotions. Closure from seeing the house gone and the proposal on the playground brought them full circle.
No, they're even better than I hoped. Thanksgiving in Forks was so full of love and good emotions. Closure from seeing the house gone and the proposal on the playground brought them full circle.
4/3/2022 c27 woosh48
Perfect wedding for them! I loved how her old house was gone and how that helped her!
Perfect wedding for them! I loved how her old house was gone and how that helped her!
4/3/2022 c27 tas62
Love the life these two and Alice and Jasper have been able to make for themselves. The proposal was perfect and so was the wedding. Can't wait for Part 2.
Love the life these two and Alice and Jasper have been able to make for themselves. The proposal was perfect and so was the wedding. Can't wait for Part 2.
3/28/2022 c26 OpheliaBedelia
I started reading this on a whim when it was recommended to me by the FF app, and honestly I probably wouldn't have if I'd noticed how long it is, but I'm glad I did. It didn't feel long; it held my interest throughout, and it was very well paced.
Also not much fanfiction makes me cry but this one did. You are good at writing about very flawed characters in a way that makes the reader root for them anyway. I especially liked the quiet but important bond between Jasper and Bella. Nicely done.
I started reading this on a whim when it was recommended to me by the FF app, and honestly I probably wouldn't have if I'd noticed how long it is, but I'm glad I did. It didn't feel long; it held my interest throughout, and it was very well paced.
Also not much fanfiction makes me cry but this one did. You are good at writing about very flawed characters in a way that makes the reader root for them anyway. I especially liked the quiet but important bond between Jasper and Bella. Nicely done.
3/28/2022 c14 OpheliaBedelia
"What happened in my room stays between me, Bella, and Alice, apparently" made me literally LOL.
"What happened in my room stays between me, Bella, and Alice, apparently" made me literally LOL.
3/24/2022 c26 PuzzlePerfect9
Wow. This was a really emotional story, especially the last chapter. I hope you still plan to add the two epilogues.
Wow. This was a really emotional story, especially the last chapter. I hope you still plan to add the two epilogues.
3/17/2022 c26 PreciousJuls
This story had me crying, laughing, pissed at Edward, Charlie, and even Bella at times. But I loved it! I loved them and their growth within themselves but also with each other. Thank you for sharing this story. Can wait to read their epi!
This story had me crying, laughing, pissed at Edward, Charlie, and even Bella at times. But I loved it! I loved them and their growth within themselves but also with each other. Thank you for sharing this story. Can wait to read their epi!
3/11/2022 c1 Ajfflady
I put of reading your story until I saw it was voted in the top ten Twifics , congratulations it is a well deserved win.
Your characters, the plot, setting all of it drew me in quickly. The tragedy they both had to overcome, how friendship was valued and tested. The chemistry your characters had, this was one very bad boy Edward, made for an angsty unlove story, with a HEA. Teen struggle and pitfalls, along with parental shortcomings, fault and emotional and physical neglect made this story uncomfortable to read in places but in the best way. I could not put it down. Excellent storytelling.
I put of reading your story until I saw it was voted in the top ten Twifics , congratulations it is a well deserved win.
Your characters, the plot, setting all of it drew me in quickly. The tragedy they both had to overcome, how friendship was valued and tested. The chemistry your characters had, this was one very bad boy Edward, made for an angsty unlove story, with a HEA. Teen struggle and pitfalls, along with parental shortcomings, fault and emotional and physical neglect made this story uncomfortable to read in places but in the best way. I could not put it down. Excellent storytelling.
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