for In The Weeds4/22/2022 c27 dpennell007
Extraordinary - cue the waterworks! That line always guts me. I guess we pretty much know what happens in the future from the previous chapter, but I'll happily read the second part of the epilogue whenever you get to it.
Bella and Alice's friendship was written beautifully, Carlisle and Mr. Brandon were the the fathers everyone could only dream of, and you even made the bad boys becoming responsible citizens somehow believable. Excellent work.
Extraordinary - cue the waterworks! That line always guts me. I guess we pretty much know what happens in the future from the previous chapter, but I'll happily read the second part of the epilogue whenever you get to it.
Bella and Alice's friendship was written beautifully, Carlisle and Mr. Brandon were the the fathers everyone could only dream of, and you even made the bad boys becoming responsible citizens somehow believable. Excellent work.
4/22/2022 c26 dpennell007
Perfect closure for Charlie's character, and even though it made me cry I would never have forgiven him. Of course that speaks more to where I'M from, as most things do..
Perfect closure for Charlie's character, and even though it made me cry I would never have forgiven him. Of course that speaks more to where I'M from, as most things do..
4/19/2022 c27 ClaceLover08
i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i am happy that Bella & Edward are Married & i am happy that Rose & Em are Married & i am happy that Ali & Jazz are Married & I am happy that Everyone has Beautiful Children's
i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i am happy that Bella & Edward are Married & i am happy that Rose & Em are Married & i am happy that Ali & Jazz are Married & I am happy that Everyone has Beautiful Children's
4/13/2022 c26 Guest
Well I’m crying now….
Well I’m crying now….
4/15/2022 c27 tcolyer
Best story ever. Love the journey it takes you on from beginning to end. Please don't stop sharing with us. It was a fresh and new idea from so many other stories.
Best story ever. Love the journey it takes you on from beginning to end. Please don't stop sharing with us. It was a fresh and new idea from so many other stories.
4/15/2022 c25 
2belichka
Wow. Still need to read the epilogues but thank you for this beautiful story. It took be a while to actually finish it because your writing is SO emotion filled that it was difficult to keep going sometimes (a good thing but so difficult sometimes because you made me feel so many things!)
I love that you wanted to write a character that was almost unredeemable- totally felt that with Edward until the last couples chapters. One thing I would have loved is an EPOV earlier on or when they were a bit younger to get a bit more understanding of his character and relationships.
Really fantastic job and looking forward to reading the epilogues !
2belichkaWow. Still need to read the epilogues but thank you for this beautiful story. It took be a while to actually finish it because your writing is SO emotion filled that it was difficult to keep going sometimes (a good thing but so difficult sometimes because you made me feel so many things!)
I love that you wanted to write a character that was almost unredeemable- totally felt that with Edward until the last couples chapters. One thing I would have loved is an EPOV earlier on or when they were a bit younger to get a bit more understanding of his character and relationships.
Really fantastic job and looking forward to reading the epilogues !
4/12/2022 c27 4SavKelly
“Dad, I’ve never thanked you for this extraordinary life,” was always my favorite line in Twilight
4SavKelly“Dad, I’ve never thanked you for this extraordinary life,” was always my favorite line in Twilight
4/9/2022 c27 Jay
Stable couple. Theyve grown so much together. Thank you for this chapter
Stable couple. Theyve grown so much together. Thank you for this chapter