for The 2nd Try: Short Stories9/19/2024 c1 ZoyeZest
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I hope you're doing amazing I have recently read The 2nd Try: Short Stories, and it changed my perceptions. I have learnt that depth of your characters and the vividness of the world you have painted here has serious potential for a visual comic. Being an independent digital artist, it means that I focus on turning stories, like the one you told, into eye-popping illustrations, and I can easily imagine how the characters’ emotions and specific scenes would look like on the page.
Through out my years of using comics in teaching, I’ve assisted numerous authors to illustrate their written material into comics which usually involved ensuring that the goal of the particular story to be taught does not disappear in the process of developing the actual comic. It is still badly designed and has grammar issues, but if you want I can explain you how to turn this into a comic. I can write more details about the pricing and the workflow, please, let’s work together and make your dream come true.
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Heyyyy!
I hope you're doing amazing I have recently read The 2nd Try: Short Stories, and it changed my perceptions. I have learnt that depth of your characters and the vividness of the world you have painted here has serious potential for a visual comic. Being an independent digital artist, it means that I focus on turning stories, like the one you told, into eye-popping illustrations, and I can easily imagine how the characters’ emotions and specific scenes would look like on the page.
Through out my years of using comics in teaching, I’ve assisted numerous authors to illustrate their written material into comics which usually involved ensuring that the goal of the particular story to be taught does not disappear in the process of developing the actual comic. It is still badly designed and has grammar issues, but if you want I can explain you how to turn this into a comic. I can write more details about the pricing and the workflow, please, let’s work together and make your dream come true.
Best regards,
Baran
Discord : baran59354
9/19/2024 c27 
344Traitor of All Traitors
I gotta look for those stories.
This just makes me think that Asuka is similar to Edward Elric from FMA; she’s sensitive about her height.
344Traitor of All TraitorsI gotta look for those stories.
This just makes me think that Asuka is similar to Edward Elric from FMA; she’s sensitive about her height.
9/19/2024 c27 18YourBlandestNightmare
Aaaaawwwwwww cute :D I love the joke with the carrot, and I too believe Asuka was responsible, heheheheh
18YourBlandestNightmareAaaaawwwwwww cute :D I love the joke with the carrot, and I too believe Asuka was responsible, heheheheh
4/1/2024 c26 YourBlandestNightmare
LOL the bit at the end with Aki and the chocolate eggs made me laugh out loud xD It was so funny!
I also love the detail that Aki runs away as soon as Shinji mentions the bath, and how he never remembers to not give her a heads up.
Great chapter, it was hilarious and cute. Thanks for writing, and Happy Easter to you too!
LOL the bit at the end with Aki and the chocolate eggs made me laugh out loud xD It was so funny!
I also love the detail that Aki runs away as soon as Shinji mentions the bath, and how he never remembers to not give her a heads up.
Great chapter, it was hilarious and cute. Thanks for writing, and Happy Easter to you too!
3/31/2024 c26 2Captain Bardiel
A Call Back or Call Forward to the rabbits in the pet store where Aki and her parents visited.
2Captain BardielA Call Back or Call Forward to the rabbits in the pet store where Aki and her parents visited.
3/29/2024 c26 Starfire99
Oh wow, I got such a good laugh out of the "poop out the chocolate eggs" comment. That made my weekend. Kudos, my friend!
Oh wow, I got such a good laugh out of the "poop out the chocolate eggs" comment. That made my weekend. Kudos, my friend!
2/2/2024 c25 James Birdsong
Good stories. Hooray.
Good stories. Hooray.
1/31/2024 c25 344Traitor of All Traitors
Reminds me a little of the days when the big wheel was the fastest thing to me, riding down a hill and going fast.
344Traitor of All TraitorsReminds me a little of the days when the big wheel was the fastest thing to me, riding down a hill and going fast.
1/31/2024 c25 18YourBlandestNightmare
Damn, Aki is a tricycle prodigy! xD
This was very cute and funny. I love that she kept pedalling even in her sleep xD Thank you for the chapter
18YourBlandestNightmareDamn, Aki is a tricycle prodigy! xD
This was very cute and funny. I love that she kept pedalling even in her sleep xD Thank you for the chapter
11/13/2023 c24 11Calborghete
I still believe that Asuka is more perverted than Shinji, all these ideas came from her. But Ah! how cute Aki is! A beautiful chapter, my friend.
11CalborgheteI still believe that Asuka is more perverted than Shinji, all these ideas came from her. But Ah! how cute Aki is! A beautiful chapter, my friend.
11/12/2023 c24 18YourBlandestNightmare
Aaaawwwww, Aki welcoming Shinji home was so adorable :)
I really liked their banter, it was very funny to read. It was also nice that Asuka realized that she had dealt a low blow and was ready to apologize... but damn, I wasn't expecting Shinji would go in the offensive! xD
Thanks for writing.
18YourBlandestNightmareAaaawwwww, Aki welcoming Shinji home was so adorable :)
I really liked their banter, it was very funny to read. It was also nice that Asuka realized that she had dealt a low blow and was ready to apologize... but damn, I wasn't expecting Shinji would go in the offensive! xD
Thanks for writing.
11/12/2023 c24 IBEME
Love the chapter. Very heartwarming and and bit saucy near the end there lol
Love the chapter. Very heartwarming and and bit saucy near the end there lol