
6/12/2023 c23
18YourBlandestNightmare
AAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW SO CUTE!
I loved the callbacks to previous episodes. Aki hiding in the closet and then sulking in the bath was super adorable, but the ending was the best part. Thank you so much for writing this, it made my night :D

AAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW SO CUTE!
I loved the callbacks to previous episodes. Aki hiding in the closet and then sulking in the bath was super adorable, but the ending was the best part. Thank you so much for writing this, it made my night :D
6/10/2023 c23
11Calborghete
That was cute, will our little Aki accept the baths? I hope so, an excellent chapter friend.

That was cute, will our little Aki accept the baths? I hope so, an excellent chapter friend.
4/26/2023 c17 CardinalHam42
Tried to do a bit of research on rhinoviruses and how likely it would be for Aki to catch it from anything post-third impact and I hit a dead end when looking up carrier species (Google interprets my request as one for information on the three strains). I did, however, find that they can't survive for more than a week on inanimate/inorganic substances.
Tried to do a bit of research on rhinoviruses and how likely it would be for Aki to catch it from anything post-third impact and I hit a dead end when looking up carrier species (Google interprets my request as one for information on the three strains). I did, however, find that they can't survive for more than a week on inanimate/inorganic substances.
4/25/2023 c16 CardinalHam42
The title brings to mind the now-long-since-destroyed Evanglions themselves (and especially their iconic eye-catching shoulder pylons), but the actual story ends with Aki sitting on her papa's shoulders. I like it a lot.
The title brings to mind the now-long-since-destroyed Evanglions themselves (and especially their iconic eye-catching shoulder pylons), but the actual story ends with Aki sitting on her papa's shoulders. I like it a lot.
3/27/2023 c22 ECT87
I absolutely love this story and its companion. It's amazing that it is a fanfiction of a fanfiction, yet it understands the characters so well. Sure, the appeal of Evangelion is being subtle and to be read between the lines, but there is some satisfaction seeing things being explicitly described and named.
I absolutely love this story and its companion. It's amazing that it is a fanfiction of a fanfiction, yet it understands the characters so well. Sure, the appeal of Evangelion is being subtle and to be read between the lines, but there is some satisfaction seeing things being explicitly described and named.
2/12/2023 c22
2KingXanaduu
B123, this is beyond flattering, and perhaps the first time something that I had a hand in and incorporated into a fanfic. I am...both tearing-up and speechless, thank you so much. You've made me one of the happiest fans of Eva.
Of course, a huge shout out to CC for bringing the idea to life. She did most of the grunt work, while I was just the idea guy. Still, that was a scene I think Asuka and Shinji needed the most. Them being in love, but also teasing each other to show that their banter isn't gone, but better.
And your incorporation not only into your story, but also the world of 2nd Try is just...I've come full circle now.
Your additional scene with Shinji and Asuka talking about why being a puppy fits him so much, and I like how he's initially apprehensive of the label of him being a "puppy", cause knowing Shinji, he'd view that synonymous with his weakness during the original timeline. But thank goodness Asuka reminded him of the qualities of a puppy that make them (and him) so lovable.
Thank you again so much for this shout-out to CC and I for this fic. I look forward to seeing another hilarious addition to the next chapter!

B123, this is beyond flattering, and perhaps the first time something that I had a hand in and incorporated into a fanfic. I am...both tearing-up and speechless, thank you so much. You've made me one of the happiest fans of Eva.
Of course, a huge shout out to CC for bringing the idea to life. She did most of the grunt work, while I was just the idea guy. Still, that was a scene I think Asuka and Shinji needed the most. Them being in love, but also teasing each other to show that their banter isn't gone, but better.
And your incorporation not only into your story, but also the world of 2nd Try is just...I've come full circle now.
Your additional scene with Shinji and Asuka talking about why being a puppy fits him so much, and I like how he's initially apprehensive of the label of him being a "puppy", cause knowing Shinji, he'd view that synonymous with his weakness during the original timeline. But thank goodness Asuka reminded him of the qualities of a puppy that make them (and him) so lovable.
Thank you again so much for this shout-out to CC and I for this fic. I look forward to seeing another hilarious addition to the next chapter!
1/30/2023 c22 Miguel Gomes Ala
Does this grown up Aki were Yui?
Does this grown up Aki were Yui?
1/28/2023 c22 Attila1987
Did these two idiots forgot to put their clothes back on when they heard Aki's footsteps?! XD
Do you have a link to that artwork you're talking about?
Did these two idiots forgot to put their clothes back on when they heard Aki's footsteps?! XD
Do you have a link to that artwork you're talking about?
1/28/2023 c22
11Calborghete
Hahahaha... Shinji and Asuka are lucky they never gave Aki a sister hahahahahaha

Hahahaha... Shinji and Asuka are lucky they never gave Aki a sister hahahahahaha
1/28/2023 c22
18YourBlandestNightmare
Aaaawwwww, they are so cute together. Thanks for using one of CC's best pieces as inspiration, great choice. I too thank KingXanaduu for the commission :)
But ooooooh, did they get caught at the end xD I loved it.

Aaaawwwww, they are so cute together. Thanks for using one of CC's best pieces as inspiration, great choice. I too thank KingXanaduu for the commission :)
But ooooooh, did they get caught at the end xD I loved it.