
7/10/2022 c18
344Traitor of All Traitors
That last scene felt like a combination of Independence Day and second to last episode of Final Space where Gary and Quinn tied their knot.

That last scene felt like a combination of Independence Day and second to last episode of Final Space where Gary and Quinn tied their knot.
7/9/2022 c18
11Calborghete
Phew... I thought our favorite couple was going to get caught hahaha... good story.

Phew... I thought our favorite couple was going to get caught hahaha... good story.
7/9/2022 c18 Miguel Alamino
It's good to finally see some time for the two of them since Aki was born. I was really expecting Asuka to say something like "yes, you missed, those two" when she poured the oil to her breasts. But a very fun chapter, would be nice to see something in that line for the Aki Chan Shorts.
It's good to finally see some time for the two of them since Aki was born. I was really expecting Asuka to say something like "yes, you missed, those two" when she poured the oil to her breasts. But a very fun chapter, would be nice to see something in that line for the Aki Chan Shorts.
7/9/2022 c18
18YourBlandestNightmare
Poor Asuka just learned that gardening isn't as easy as movies make it look sometimes. Hard work, you end up with pain in your back, legs and arms. Good thing she has her baka to take such good care of her :)
And baka does a very good job, very good indeed.
Now *she* is going to to a good job on him, wink wink

Poor Asuka just learned that gardening isn't as easy as movies make it look sometimes. Hard work, you end up with pain in your back, legs and arms. Good thing she has her baka to take such good care of her :)
And baka does a very good job, very good indeed.
Now *she* is going to to a good job on him, wink wink
7/9/2022 c18 Attila1987
"Huh?…Is it an earthquake again?"... was that a Spy X Family reference? XD
I find it hilarious how most of your stories ends up in Shinji and Asuka getting some "action" or trying to get some action!
"Huh?…Is it an earthquake again?"... was that a Spy X Family reference? XD
I find it hilarious how most of your stories ends up in Shinji and Asuka getting some "action" or trying to get some action!
6/22/2022 c17
9Panther2G
Makes me wonder where the heck Aki got the cold in the first place. It's not like there's a lot of other people to catch it from!
Oh, not that important. The cuteness of Aki being sick is worth a handwave. :)

Makes me wonder where the heck Aki got the cold in the first place. It's not like there's a lot of other people to catch it from!
Oh, not that important. The cuteness of Aki being sick is worth a handwave. :)
5/27/2022 c17
11Calborghete
Hahahahah... poor Aki, cold is never an easy thing, NEVER DO THAT TO AKI!

Hahahahah... poor Aki, cold is never an easy thing, NEVER DO THAT TO AKI!
5/27/2022 c17
344Traitor of All Traitors
Reading this just made me think of the first episode of the second OVA of Aki Sora, all the way to the ending of the episode.

Reading this just made me think of the first episode of the second OVA of Aki Sora, all the way to the ending of the episode.
5/5/2022 c16
6CalvinFujii
Though highly unlikely to be made, I have an idea for an adventure for the Ikari family in post-Third Impact Earth:
While exploring the world they now live in, Shinji, Asuka, and their daughter Aki encounter the remaining wildlife in post-Third Impact Earth, including but not limited to lions, baboons, condors, okapis, warthogs, flying snakes, and even leeches feeding on a carcass (all seven animal species resembling how they appeared in Will Smith’s After Earth).

Though highly unlikely to be made, I have an idea for an adventure for the Ikari family in post-Third Impact Earth:
While exploring the world they now live in, Shinji, Asuka, and their daughter Aki encounter the remaining wildlife in post-Third Impact Earth, including but not limited to lions, baboons, condors, okapis, warthogs, flying snakes, and even leeches feeding on a carcass (all seven animal species resembling how they appeared in Will Smith’s After Earth).
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4/9/2022 c16
24Romulo Nidoking BR
Loved this chapter from the early draft and outline.
My favorite parts were when both Shinji and Asuka feared that Aki would start to go into their own sad pasts. I think it highlighted every parent fear and the fact that Aki IS the child of Shinji and Asuka, having a little bit of both their best features, but potential to also go into darker paths.
And Shinji's solution was awesome. Asuka better thank him properly :).
Thanks for writing

Loved this chapter from the early draft and outline.
My favorite parts were when both Shinji and Asuka feared that Aki would start to go into their own sad pasts. I think it highlighted every parent fear and the fact that Aki IS the child of Shinji and Asuka, having a little bit of both their best features, but potential to also go into darker paths.
And Shinji's solution was awesome. Asuka better thank him properly :).
Thanks for writing
4/9/2022 c16
344Traitor of All Traitors
Is this post-2nd Try or during 2nd Try when they're in the future?

Is this post-2nd Try or during 2nd Try when they're in the future?
4/8/2022 c16
18YourBlandestNightmare
So sweet :) Shinji's a good dad to his little Aki. I imagine her on his shoulders, and it's adorable.

So sweet :) Shinji's a good dad to his little Aki. I imagine her on his shoulders, and it's adorable.