for The 2nd Try: Short Stories7/2/2021 c10 
18YourBlandestNightmare
Hahahaawww! I love Aki's wishes! So cute. The one about "not having so many baths" made me laugh.
18YourBlandestNightmareHahahaawww! I love Aki's wishes! So cute. The one about "not having so many baths" made me laugh.
7/1/2021 c10 347Traitor of All Traitors
Nice update. Aki is one of the most impressive child characters here.
347Traitor of All TraitorsNice update. Aki is one of the most impressive child characters here.
6/26/2021 c9 9Panther2G
Getting the kid into bed and playing with imagination... familiar, and the happiest end for the two who fought so hard. :)
9Panther2GGetting the kid into bed and playing with imagination... familiar, and the happiest end for the two who fought so hard. :)
6/22/2021 c3 Panther2G
"I love X food!"
"Ok, I made you some."
"Now I don't want it!"
also very familiar. Dang it, kids...
"I love X food!"
"Ok, I made you some."
"Now I don't want it!"
also very familiar. Dang it, kids...
5/28/2021 c9 18YourBlandestNightmare
So cute! I loved it, Pirate Aki is one of the most precious things I can imagine. She really gets into the character. And it's great how Shinji and Asuka play along.
18YourBlandestNightmareSo cute! I loved it, Pirate Aki is one of the most precious things I can imagine. She really gets into the character. And it's great how Shinji and Asuka play along.
5/28/2021 c9 11Calborghete
Cool, very cute and fun, your stories are always a huge pleasure ... Asuka naughty, huh, if she doesn't take the right care, soon Aki would have a srsrsrsr little sister.
11CalborgheteCool, very cute and fun, your stories are always a huge pleasure ... Asuka naughty, huh, if she doesn't take the right care, soon Aki would have a srsrsrsr little sister.
5/16/2021 c8 347Traitor of All Traitors
I found it somewhat problematic for either Shinji or Asuka to tell a story like that.
347Traitor of All TraitorsI found it somewhat problematic for either Shinji or Asuka to tell a story like that.
5/12/2021 c7 Iraki01
my heart feels warm reading each of these chapters, definitely Aki is the best OOC character that existed in Evangelion
my heart feels warm reading each of these chapters, definitely Aki is the best OOC character that existed in Evangelion