for Born to Darkness, Ascend to Light4/28/2021 c2 
52SkyKicker10101
This is incredibly awesome! And so well written!
But I do have a question, will Ichigo be given a letter from Yawach and if so, what letter and what power
52SkyKicker10101This is incredibly awesome! And so well written!
But I do have a question, will Ichigo be given a letter from Yawach and if so, what letter and what power
4/28/2021 c2 JayU19
Damn, a new chapter this quick and of that quality. Really upping the benchmark for others. Also, honestly speaking I think his manji from tensa really would've worked nice as a cross, I understand that it looks rather suspicious with the German theme the Germans actually took a bastardised copy of it so in context the original copied in terms of significance; but hey that's up to you decide. Anyway, excellent chapter and nice plot so far, all I got to is keep up the great work.
Damn, a new chapter this quick and of that quality. Really upping the benchmark for others. Also, honestly speaking I think his manji from tensa really would've worked nice as a cross, I understand that it looks rather suspicious with the German theme the Germans actually took a bastardised copy of it so in context the original copied in terms of significance; but hey that's up to you decide. Anyway, excellent chapter and nice plot so far, all I got to is keep up the great work.
4/27/2021 c1 ValidinOpress
Good story so far, I really enjoy the fact Ichigo actually has an understandable background for joining the quincy. Interested to see how things progress with a "good Ywach." I don't think I have ever left a review directly asking the author to not do something, but please don't make this a harem fic. Literally everywhere you look on this site there is a harem, especially in the manga/anime genre. I look at every story like it's a puzzle. Only the author has an idea of what the final picture will be, and it's up to them to decide how the pieces are laid in. It is genuinely disheartening when I see a writer add in the harem piece because more often than not it doesn't fit. In turn all this does is scew the layout and when it's all said and done the final image has a web of cracks. Again, I don't think it's my place to push you towards my views. Freedom of expression is where you get to see an author's quirks shine and that is the essence of this site. Just make sure you don't add a piece to the fic it doesn't contribute to that final image, otherwise you'll find yourself stuck later on trying to cobble everything together. Don't just think about what you can do with the story, but what can the story do for you.
Good story so far, I really enjoy the fact Ichigo actually has an understandable background for joining the quincy. Interested to see how things progress with a "good Ywach." I don't think I have ever left a review directly asking the author to not do something, but please don't make this a harem fic. Literally everywhere you look on this site there is a harem, especially in the manga/anime genre. I look at every story like it's a puzzle. Only the author has an idea of what the final picture will be, and it's up to them to decide how the pieces are laid in. It is genuinely disheartening when I see a writer add in the harem piece because more often than not it doesn't fit. In turn all this does is scew the layout and when it's all said and done the final image has a web of cracks. Again, I don't think it's my place to push you towards my views. Freedom of expression is where you get to see an author's quirks shine and that is the essence of this site. Just make sure you don't add a piece to the fic it doesn't contribute to that final image, otherwise you'll find yourself stuck later on trying to cobble everything together. Don't just think about what you can do with the story, but what can the story do for you.
4/27/2021 c1 1Sibakys
I really enjoyed the start of this story. It’s hard to believe this is your first fic, you’re writing is perfectly on par with a lot of the other great writers I’ve seen here. I’m genuinely excited to continue this. Also, I wouldn’t worry too much about that original AN that was apparently rude. It truly doesn’t make any sense. It doesn’t provide anything to further the story and seems more like fan service than anything to try and connect more with people. Giselle being female makes perfect sense. Giselle being male makes no sense, and is quite literally a useless piece of information. That aside, I was wondering if you had a design you’d like to model Ichigo after considering he will be a Quincy with a Shrift rather than a Shinigami with a Zanpakuto. Cheers!
1SibakysI really enjoyed the start of this story. It’s hard to believe this is your first fic, you’re writing is perfectly on par with a lot of the other great writers I’ve seen here. I’m genuinely excited to continue this. Also, I wouldn’t worry too much about that original AN that was apparently rude. It truly doesn’t make any sense. It doesn’t provide anything to further the story and seems more like fan service than anything to try and connect more with people. Giselle being female makes perfect sense. Giselle being male makes no sense, and is quite literally a useless piece of information. That aside, I was wondering if you had a design you’d like to model Ichigo after considering he will be a Quincy with a Shrift rather than a Shinigami with a Zanpakuto. Cheers!
4/25/2021 c1 narutoman12
yeah uh dont give up on this, I am on the dame same wave length, make this the fame best story you will ever kreate. so with that said I am looking forward to you next chapter.
yeah uh dont give up on this, I am on the dame same wave length, make this the fame best story you will ever kreate. so with that said I am looking forward to you next chapter.
4/24/2021 c1 Emman214
love it so far really interesting concept and since your making ichigo more woke i feel like he wouldn't mind being with giselle if he goes on a more instinct/ dark mentality
love it so far really interesting concept and since your making ichigo more woke i feel like he wouldn't mind being with giselle if he goes on a more instinct/ dark mentality
4/24/2021 c1 boredOfMathJustWannaEscape
This is amazing. Compared to other fics the writing is top notch
This is amazing. Compared to other fics the writing is top notch
4/24/2021 c1 JayU19
Man said lack of writing skills, yeah no you ain't fooling anyone with that well written start.
Man said lack of writing skills, yeah no you ain't fooling anyone with that well written start.
4/24/2021 c1 52SkyKicker10101
This is perhaps one of the best bleach made Quincy stories ive read! I sincerely hope you continue the story
52SkyKicker10101This is perhaps one of the best bleach made Quincy stories ive read! I sincerely hope you continue the story