for Born to Darkness, Ascend to Light5/27/2024 c14 
1aitor.rosell.torralba
It was an amazing read, really liked how you made Ichigo use a combo of quincy and hollow techniques
1aitor.rosell.torralbaIt was an amazing read, really liked how you made Ichigo use a combo of quincy and hollow techniques
4/16/2024 c10 El linguana
I really liked how Yhwach cared about his children in this fanfic I hope you write this fanfic again
I really liked how Yhwach cared about his children in this fanfic I hope you write this fanfic again
4/15/2024 c1 El linguana
I really liked this fanfic I loved Ichigo's interaction with the Sternritter but I think he should have more interaction with the male Sternritter and Bambietta and also when you come back to write the story please revive the quilge I need to see more of his interactions with Ichigo as friends
I really liked this fanfic I loved Ichigo's interaction with the Sternritter but I think he should have more interaction with the male Sternritter and Bambietta and also when you come back to write the story please revive the quilge I need to see more of his interactions with Ichigo as friends
3/19/2024 c12 BoredAsUsual34
welp reread the story again since it is still my favorite bleach fanfic so far
welp reread the story again since it is still my favorite bleach fanfic so far
2/13/2024 c14 SigerdDRyu
Is this story died?
Is this story died?
10/31/2023 c6 Guest
I don't really like the way how the romance went. Ichigo went from a prude to well.. I'm just gonna ignore it I guess.
I don't really like the way how the romance went. Ichigo went from a prude to well.. I'm just gonna ignore it I guess.
10/22/2023 c4 Xavier Stewart
I honestly love this chapter. I don’t think you went too far with Meninas hitting on Ichigo. I think you wrote and portrayed it well in my book. I’m not going to lie, I really like the direction you went with having Giselle be the one to recruit Ichigo and have a bit of buildup of how he thinks of her and her schrift, and most of all he wasn’t afraid or disgusted with Giselle at all and accepts her for who she is. Also you’re right about Meninas not having much screen time in the manga which was a shame cause I happen to like Meninas and wanted to see more of her.
Anywho, moving on to the next chapter.
I honestly love this chapter. I don’t think you went too far with Meninas hitting on Ichigo. I think you wrote and portrayed it well in my book. I’m not going to lie, I really like the direction you went with having Giselle be the one to recruit Ichigo and have a bit of buildup of how he thinks of her and her schrift, and most of all he wasn’t afraid or disgusted with Giselle at all and accepts her for who she is. Also you’re right about Meninas not having much screen time in the manga which was a shame cause I happen to like Meninas and wanted to see more of her.
Anywho, moving on to the next chapter.
10/23/2023 c8 TommyMS
I thought Ichigo is no longer naive? why he still reject the idea of killing his enemy?
I thought Ichigo is no longer naive? why he still reject the idea of killing his enemy?
10/4/2023 c1 anonymous
Brief points of clarification on the trans stuff. Not trying to needlessly criticize too much here, so much as give constructive criticism that will help you avoid offending trans people in the future:
There isn’t actually an incongruence between her appearance and gender, because she is a women and looks feminine. She might have “male genitals” in canon, but we don’t even see those so there isn’t really any appearance to gender incongruence. Mostly a technical point, but it is important.
“Transgenders” isn’t actually a word… It’s kind of like instead of saying “black people” some people use language like “the blacks” which… isn’t the best word choice.
While you can choose not to include trans stuff in your stories, explaining the reason as “because you’re straight” isn’t exactly great… The reason is trans people can get surgeries and whatnot to the point they are effectively “biological women” in everything but a handful of internal factors that don’t really matter except in a few medical procedures. While canon Giselle has not gone through gender affirmation surgery, you could easily retcon that. Which means your justification doesn’t really explain anything unless you’re also saying you don’t think trans women are actually women, which… well that does get into transphobic territory.
Though to be clear, not saying you need to write trans characters or have a relationship with them, just that you shouldn’t try to justify not doing those with a sexual orientation or genital preference. Instead, “I’m not comfortable writing a trans character” works well enough.
Brief points of clarification on the trans stuff. Not trying to needlessly criticize too much here, so much as give constructive criticism that will help you avoid offending trans people in the future:
There isn’t actually an incongruence between her appearance and gender, because she is a women and looks feminine. She might have “male genitals” in canon, but we don’t even see those so there isn’t really any appearance to gender incongruence. Mostly a technical point, but it is important.
“Transgenders” isn’t actually a word… It’s kind of like instead of saying “black people” some people use language like “the blacks” which… isn’t the best word choice.
While you can choose not to include trans stuff in your stories, explaining the reason as “because you’re straight” isn’t exactly great… The reason is trans people can get surgeries and whatnot to the point they are effectively “biological women” in everything but a handful of internal factors that don’t really matter except in a few medical procedures. While canon Giselle has not gone through gender affirmation surgery, you could easily retcon that. Which means your justification doesn’t really explain anything unless you’re also saying you don’t think trans women are actually women, which… well that does get into transphobic territory.
Though to be clear, not saying you need to write trans characters or have a relationship with them, just that you shouldn’t try to justify not doing those with a sexual orientation or genital preference. Instead, “I’m not comfortable writing a trans character” works well enough.
10/1/2023 c14 TheChaoticDragon
Good luck, author!
Good luck, author!