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6/15 c33 princesa-eliza
I can't believe it, I can't believe it ! The ending hurt a bit but it was fair. I loved the story. The diary, OMG the diary was what gave me the most sentimentality, it was beautiful. I liked your writing and I also liked your fidelity to the characters and the script. It makes me sad that the story had to end but I understand. I can't wait to read your new stories.
6/3 c33 1kaliepantz1999
wow... what an amazing ending to an amazing book! can’t wait to see what you write next
6/2 c33 ivvana
Hello JoolsCools! I really liked how you decided to wrap it up. I think it serves justice to both characters, at the same time reflecting the events in the show. I've read this story not just once and, now - looking back at it, it still remains one of my top favs ever read around here. The idea is amazing, but the AU part is much more beautiful and intense. You are very creative and a really great writer - it's so great how you put down your vision of Keenler. If you want to resume the undercover idea, I think that would be great. Just one small piece of advice: don't let the events of the show drag you down. Ignore it, go with your instincts/
6/2 c33 Alizzar232
I'm really sad that this story has to end, but I totally understand your reasoning behind it. I love how you tried to stick with the original script as much as possible. And I totally get how that kind of restrained you from taking this more into AU. You left them in a place we can relate to and it still leaves you an opportunity to continue. Thank you so much for all your work here! I'm still following your other stories and I can't wait for more. You're a great writer and I appreciate your regular updating, your brilliant ideas and your commitment!
6/2 c33 10L3Writing
great ending to this story. wonderful wrap up and love both the journal and her call.
6/2 c33 kyriakosxar10
wasn't ready for the end
6/2 c33 1Amos-76
Oh so sad! Beautifully written. Loved the ending! Thank you for sharing.
6/2 c33 guest
there is no way this is the end...how is life supposed to just go on i swear to god there better be a sequel i literally cant
6/2 c32 David12leca
well i came on to this chapter tonight with happy thoughts, silly me had my happy joyful feelings and heart ripped out through my bloody teeth and then stabbed for extra measure.
well done on this chapter i did feel the disconnect only slightly in the very last bit "And, after she shot Tom" that section just for a bit if i hadnt of rewatched it recently i would of had no clue.
6/1 c32 1kaliepantz1999
lovely chapter! can’t wait for the next one
6/1 c32 txrisha
I cant believe Liz did this...Literally broke my heart
6/1 c32 dicapriosbae
i hate how liz is kinda playing with him rn
5/29 c31 lucy
i love your story so much xxx waiting for the next chapter!
5/27 c31 David12leca
that is a perfect anology at the end i love it.
5/26 c31 kaliepantz1999
great chapter, such beautiful writing!
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