for Lost Artworks (OLD VERSION)10/31/2021 c5 
58ShadowPillow
Fair enough. I did think this version was excellently written, with a lot of good writing techniques and flow – but I did really like the spark the persona elements added in the old version. So I'll hop to v2 to see what's up over there!
58ShadowPillowFair enough. I did think this version was excellently written, with a lot of good writing techniques and flow – but I did really like the spark the persona elements added in the old version. So I'll hop to v2 to see what's up over there!
6/20/2021 c4 ShadowPillow
Good chapter. Nagi... shouldn't have lied but I understand the temptation for it. I hope he could apologize later, and that Daisuke will be okay.
Good chapter. Nagi... shouldn't have lied but I understand the temptation for it. I hope he could apologize later, and that Daisuke will be okay.
5/17/2021 c3 reaperblaze
The story just wants me to keep reading it over and over and over can’t wait for more chapters please keep up the excellent writing
The story just wants me to keep reading it over and over and over can’t wait for more chapters please keep up the excellent writing
5/12/2021 c2 ShadowPillow
This was really good. How do I say this? The writing feels rich and the story feels full, like there's a core in it that we are slowly discovering. It feels good.
Keep up the good work. I like how it's narrowing down into Nagi's past life too. There's this element of something interesting here. About the next chapter... well, whether it's something crazy or an augmented canon I'm looking forward to it.
This was really good. How do I say this? The writing feels rich and the story feels full, like there's a core in it that we are slowly discovering. It feels good.
Keep up the good work. I like how it's narrowing down into Nagi's past life too. There's this element of something interesting here. About the next chapter... well, whether it's something crazy or an augmented canon I'm looking forward to it.
5/12/2021 c1 ShadowPillow
Ah, you should make a note on the original story that you started posting this story now. If I hadn't been following you as an author, I would have missed this.
I sense that your writing is very carefully constructed here. The way things were told was smooth and lead up from one thing to another very well. I do feel that taking this outer perspective lost a little of Nagi's "inner voice", as this was instead very logical and step-by-step. Interactions, dialogue, and sequence of events is very natural though. I can tell that you're putting a lot of effort into it. I'll let you know more what I think come next chapter, but overall I am very happy with the continuation and like seeing what's more on the DN Angel end with Nagi. Nagi is still really cool in his chillness, earnest intent, and rarer dry humor. Though I still remember that famous line, "I'm sleeping between two boys... and they're both me." It's not canon in this version, but I will still smile in glee every time I remember that.
Keep up the good work.
Ah, you should make a note on the original story that you started posting this story now. If I hadn't been following you as an author, I would have missed this.
I sense that your writing is very carefully constructed here. The way things were told was smooth and lead up from one thing to another very well. I do feel that taking this outer perspective lost a little of Nagi's "inner voice", as this was instead very logical and step-by-step. Interactions, dialogue, and sequence of events is very natural though. I can tell that you're putting a lot of effort into it. I'll let you know more what I think come next chapter, but overall I am very happy with the continuation and like seeing what's more on the DN Angel end with Nagi. Nagi is still really cool in his chillness, earnest intent, and rarer dry humor. Though I still remember that famous line, "I'm sleeping between two boys... and they're both me." It's not canon in this version, but I will still smile in glee every time I remember that.
Keep up the good work.