
7/17/2021 c9
1RabbitPaws17
Loved it all, thank you so much for blessing us with your amazing work and I hope to see more fantastic stories from you in the future

Loved it all, thank you so much for blessing us with your amazing work and I hope to see more fantastic stories from you in the future
7/9/2021 c9 Maria
Excellent story... loved it.
Excellent story... loved it.
6/27/2021 c9
28knirbenrots
My, I loved reading this story! Will check if there’s anything more to read! Thanks.

My, I loved reading this story! Will check if there’s anything more to read! Thanks.
6/27/2021 c4 knirbenrots
Oh crap... they're made! How come, I wonder? And are they talking about Kensi or about Callen?
Oh crap... they're made! How come, I wonder? And are they talking about Kensi or about Callen?
6/27/2021 c2 knirbenrots
How come I never noticed your story? I just found it and like what you're doing!
How come I never noticed your story? I just found it and like what you're doing!
6/21/2021 c9
1altarp2408
Very nicely done, because Kensi would have kicked his butt for any reason EXCEPT that one. And over the fact she caught him out a bit.

Very nicely done, because Kensi would have kicked his butt for any reason EXCEPT that one. And over the fact she caught him out a bit.
6/21/2021 c9 trscrny
This is such a good story-well written, great plot and sub plots, and, of course, starred Callen! Loved the scene with Callen explaining to Kensi how he knew about the pregnancy. And loved how their relationship came through with no hint of romance-just caring. Very well done. Hope you have some other plot bunnies ready to make an appearance! Thank you for sharing your talents!
Stay safe,
Teresa
This is such a good story-well written, great plot and sub plots, and, of course, starred Callen! Loved the scene with Callen explaining to Kensi how he knew about the pregnancy. And loved how their relationship came through with no hint of romance-just caring. Very well done. Hope you have some other plot bunnies ready to make an appearance! Thank you for sharing your talents!
Stay safe,
Teresa
6/14/2021 c8
6ssl71
Great chapter! Glad the ordeal at the bank is over and Callen is safe. I think Kensi will be more relieved Callen is alive after being taken as a hostage than be upset by him sharing her and Deeks’ news. Will be interesting to see how Callen guessed she was pregnant. Looking forward to seeing what happens in Chapter 9.

Great chapter! Glad the ordeal at the bank is over and Callen is safe. I think Kensi will be more relieved Callen is alive after being taken as a hostage than be upset by him sharing her and Deeks’ news. Will be interesting to see how Callen guessed she was pregnant. Looking forward to seeing what happens in Chapter 9.
6/14/2021 c8
1altarp2408
Very Well done. But I still am thinking about Kensi's reaction to getting what she might consider "special treatment".

Very Well done. But I still am thinking about Kensi's reaction to getting what she might consider "special treatment".
6/14/2021 c8 trscrny
Loved it so much. As I'm reading it, I'm thinking "oh, I'll have to say how much I liked this part, then I'd keep reading and think, no, this is the part that stands out", and so on. All in all, the entire chapter is A plus, plus.(sorry, it's the retired teacher in me! LOL!) You really put the reader right into the actions. From the point of them getting into the car and then Callens' escape I was thoroughly engaged. And thanks for taking my little correction in the manner it was intended. I see no point in being rude and don't understand people who do so. You authors put a lot of time, care, and effort into your work and I appreciate it very much. Although I'm looking forward to the next chapter, I'll be sad to see the story end. But, I'll just have to go back to the beginning and enjoy reading the whole story in its entirety. Probably more than once!Thanks for posting the new chapter!
Stay safe,
Teresa
Loved it so much. As I'm reading it, I'm thinking "oh, I'll have to say how much I liked this part, then I'd keep reading and think, no, this is the part that stands out", and so on. All in all, the entire chapter is A plus, plus.(sorry, it's the retired teacher in me! LOL!) You really put the reader right into the actions. From the point of them getting into the car and then Callens' escape I was thoroughly engaged. And thanks for taking my little correction in the manner it was intended. I see no point in being rude and don't understand people who do so. You authors put a lot of time, care, and effort into your work and I appreciate it very much. Although I'm looking forward to the next chapter, I'll be sad to see the story end. But, I'll just have to go back to the beginning and enjoy reading the whole story in its entirety. Probably more than once!Thanks for posting the new chapter!
Stay safe,
Teresa
6/12/2021 c1
13Dramamama5
Interesting start... could do without the F word in there... Never heard Callen use that before... anyway, I'm curious to see where this is going.

Interesting start... could do without the F word in there... Never heard Callen use that before... anyway, I'm curious to see where this is going.
6/11/2021 c7 Lestat74
OMG! OMG! It is 5:30 in the morning and I couldn’t stop from reading your story! I can’t wait to see what is coming next! Please update soon! You are a great writer! Good job!
OMG! OMG! It is 5:30 in the morning and I couldn’t stop from reading your story! I can’t wait to see what is coming next! Please update soon! You are a great writer! Good job!