
4/24 c1 avilasamantha
As I was reading I couldn’t help but see the world unfolding so vividly in my mind the emotions, the atmosphere, the rhythm of each moment. Your story is rich with visual potential, and I’d love to help bring that to life. Whether it’s an intense, action-packed sequence or a quiet, emotional beat, your work deserves to be experienced in a way that captures its full depth and energy./
As I was reading I couldn’t help but see the world unfolding so vividly in my mind the emotions, the atmosphere, the rhythm of each moment. Your story is rich with visual potential, and I’d love to help bring that to life. Whether it’s an intense, action-packed sequence or a quiet, emotional beat, your work deserves to be experienced in a way that captures its full depth and energy./
6/24/2024 c3 Maximumcarnaval
agh! the pain! the sorrow! the agony! ...of finding and reading a fanfiction so specific and so well tailored to your imagination, to the point of you thinking of the possibility that it was ripped straight out of your brain,
only to find the last time it was updated was years ago...
dear author, please, if you have not abandoned this opus of yours yet, grace us with more chapters.
agh! the pain! the sorrow! the agony! ...of finding and reading a fanfiction so specific and so well tailored to your imagination, to the point of you thinking of the possibility that it was ripped straight out of your brain,
only to find the last time it was updated was years ago...
dear author, please, if you have not abandoned this opus of yours yet, grace us with more chapters.
1/5/2024 c3 Lily the best
This is really good I hope there will be other chapters because the concept is really good
Poor ken though he did everything to make his marriage work touka didn’t love him but she still is worried about him
I don’t understand touka’s feelings I hope she will realize she is in love with him but took the time to admit it
But Eto and Ken’s relationship will grow and he would have to choose between them
I have no idea of how Eto got here but the center is like a prison because the people that live there can’t come and go as their like but they still have a little freedom it is perfect for Eto until she reaches a stable mental health but I think her and ken will have a strong bond like one supports another when he need
I hope you won’t abandon this fanfic
I know this is a very long comment but these are my theories but they’re only 3 chapters so you still can elaborate an intrigue and a structure for the story and I think it will be amazing
Good luck for righting
A fan
This is really good I hope there will be other chapters because the concept is really good
Poor ken though he did everything to make his marriage work touka didn’t love him but she still is worried about him
I don’t understand touka’s feelings I hope she will realize she is in love with him but took the time to admit it
But Eto and Ken’s relationship will grow and he would have to choose between them
I have no idea of how Eto got here but the center is like a prison because the people that live there can’t come and go as their like but they still have a little freedom it is perfect for Eto until she reaches a stable mental health but I think her and ken will have a strong bond like one supports another when he need
I hope you won’t abandon this fanfic
I know this is a very long comment but these are my theories but they’re only 3 chapters so you still can elaborate an intrigue and a structure for the story and I think it will be amazing
Good luck for righting
A fan
2/20/2023 c3 Guest
Hope you continue one day
Hope you continue one day
4/18/2022 c3 Guest
Poor Eto! Losing her head must have been unpleasant! Maybe that trauma is the reason why she’s like this? I few bad for her. At least now she has Kaneki visiting her. It must have been awful for her when nobody rescued her when she needed help. I wish that Kaneki could make up for it. It should be time for him to write a story so she can be the reader for once. That would be pretty cool. I hope you can update this for the one year anniversary! Even if this gets only updated once a year, it’s better than no updates at all. Either that or you write a new story. Maybe an alternate universe story where Kaneki became friends with Eto during his childhood. One where she was out hunting and Kaneki accidentally stumbles upon her but instead of killing him she becomes curious with the book that he’s carrying and he eventually shows her the wonderful world of literature. Then that little introduction leads to her becoming an author. They stay best friends until Kaneki’s mom dies and he’s taken in by his aunt making him unable to see Eto or say goodbye to her. Eto becomes saddened by what she thinks is Kaneki abandoning her and her works become darker by the book. Kaneki doesn’t see Eto again until years later when Ayato is bringing him to the Aogiri tree’s hideout in the 11th ward. There Eto recognizes him and takes him under her wing when Tatara tells Ayato to get rid of him. Soon they rekindle their relationship starting off with Kaneki explaining the events of why he disappeared from Eto’s life for so long and vice versa.
Poor Eto! Losing her head must have been unpleasant! Maybe that trauma is the reason why she’s like this? I few bad for her. At least now she has Kaneki visiting her. It must have been awful for her when nobody rescued her when she needed help. I wish that Kaneki could make up for it. It should be time for him to write a story so she can be the reader for once. That would be pretty cool. I hope you can update this for the one year anniversary! Even if this gets only updated once a year, it’s better than no updates at all. Either that or you write a new story. Maybe an alternate universe story where Kaneki became friends with Eto during his childhood. One where she was out hunting and Kaneki accidentally stumbles upon her but instead of killing him she becomes curious with the book that he’s carrying and he eventually shows her the wonderful world of literature. Then that little introduction leads to her becoming an author. They stay best friends until Kaneki’s mom dies and he’s taken in by his aunt making him unable to see Eto or say goodbye to her. Eto becomes saddened by what she thinks is Kaneki abandoning her and her works become darker by the book. Kaneki doesn’t see Eto again until years later when Ayato is bringing him to the Aogiri tree’s hideout in the 11th ward. There Eto recognizes him and takes him under her wing when Tatara tells Ayato to get rid of him. Soon they rekindle their relationship starting off with Kaneki explaining the events of why he disappeared from Eto’s life for so long and vice versa.
12/5/2021 c1
33adelalovesmadara
Just for the divorce I'm in! I mean, I get the feeling that both Kaneki and Touka aren't in love with each other... I mean, they hardly knew each other and their chemistry is just adequate but not enough!

Just for the divorce I'm in! I mean, I get the feeling that both Kaneki and Touka aren't in love with each other... I mean, they hardly knew each other and their chemistry is just adequate but not enough!
9/12/2021 c3 bruhhhh
It's been a while since you updated, come on I want to read the next chapter.
It's been a while since you updated, come on I want to read the next chapter.