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6/6/2021 c15 17Bethxxx0409
Love this chapter
6/5/2021 c14 viva1215
Awesome job
6/5/2021 c14 moviemel
Great chapter as always! Nice touch incorporating "Blinded" into it! Glad Elliot is getting his sight back! The end was so sweet and cute! BTW, I'm glad I'm not the only one who was disappointed in Thursday night's episode. I wanted more EO time! Thank you for your stories! They will get us all through this long summer!
6/5/2021 c14 Guest
Phew. That was so good. Love it. Christmas fluff? Then baby fluff?
6/5/2021 c14 Guest
I’m not crying or anything...just cutting onions. That’s all. Yup. That’s all...
6/4/2021 c14 Guest
nice!
6/4/2021 c14 spacekitten2700
like
6/4/2021 c14 ManderleyLane
Domestic EO makes my heart sing and you write them so tender and loving and romantic. Loved this chapter and all the feelings surrounding Elliot’s injury. This story makes me happy. Thank you for writing it.
6/4/2021 c14 16justanotherbookworm78
I like that you incorporated the events from the episode "Blinded" into this chapter. I'll admit, my anxiety levels were high at several points, wondering if Olivia would go into premature labor. I can't imagine the fear and frustration Elliot felt in regard to his temporary blindness, and I know that he didn't lash out at his family intentionally, but that couldn't have been easy on anyone. It was such a relief when his vision began to return, and what a perfect day for blessing, too - Thanksgiving!
6/4/2021 c14 Guest
I was feeling stressed and I got emotional but the end saved it for me! Can’t wait for baby stabler to get here!
6/4/2021 c14 Guest
Dang this was a good one! I hope some Christmas fluff is next!
Also, I love how you seamlessly weave the time jumps. The way time has moved in these stories is very well done.
6/4/2021 c14 Guest
The accuracy with how the characters are so in tune with the show and how well you tie in the episodes continues to blow me away.
6/4/2021 c14 Guest
Awww. I love how you threw that episode in there. I love how Olivia supported him and stayed strong. And that he apologized. And just like in the show, his sight returned!
6/4/2021 c14 Sara Ellen
Yayyyy! This made my awful Friday so much better! Your writing is phenomenal.
6/4/2021 c14 DallasMarieJensen
Awww I love this story
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