for I Choose You5/25/2021 c9 Ninjagirl43
I was worried there for a minute. I love this story. Can't wait to read more.
I was worried there for a minute. I love this story. Can't wait to read more.
5/25/2021 c8 GBP6313
YOU’RE AMAZING! This is 1000x better than I could have ever imagined! I thought Kate was going to try and say they slept together after Kathy left. But to say they slept together AND had a baby?! I love it! You’re wild but that’s such a beautiful plot and I’m here for every second of it!
YOU’RE AMAZING! This is 1000x better than I could have ever imagined! I thought Kate was going to try and say they slept together after Kathy left. But to say they slept together AND had a baby?! I love it! You’re wild but that’s such a beautiful plot and I’m here for every second of it!
5/25/2021 c9 Guest
Thank you for the uber fast update! Still stressed but I can definitely see it’s going to be okay. If she is refusing a DNA test...that kid ain’t Elliot’s! Go get your man Liv!
Thank you for the uber fast update! Still stressed but I can definitely see it’s going to be okay. If she is refusing a DNA test...that kid ain’t Elliot’s! Go get your man Liv!
5/25/2021 c9 
1WriterKC
Wow Kate is a piece of work. I’m glad Olivia was able to see through the cracks. I hope they can get Kate to drop her claim and force her to have a DNA test done to prove Shane isn’t Elliot’s
1WriterKCWow Kate is a piece of work. I’m glad Olivia was able to see through the cracks. I hope they can get Kate to drop her claim and force her to have a DNA test done to prove Shane isn’t Elliot’s
5/24/2021 c8 Guest
No thanks.
No thanks.
5/24/2021 c8 Guest
tell me she’s lying?
tell me she’s lying?
5/24/2021 c8 moviemel
WTF? I know it can't be rainbows and butterflies, but this? I feel sick! No way did Elliot sleep with her. She has to be a psycho! He was so distraught when Kathy left but I can't believe he would do something so stupid. It's out of character. This is cruel! Please don't make him the father of that kid. We are suffering enough right now watching TV Elliot make out with Angela, we don't need fanfic Elliot to be that stupid! My heart can't take it! I need an Elliot explanation and or a paternity test ASAP! And if he is the father, I want Fin to kick the living crap out of him! My heart is broken...please fix this...
WTF? I know it can't be rainbows and butterflies, but this? I feel sick! No way did Elliot sleep with her. She has to be a psycho! He was so distraught when Kathy left but I can't believe he would do something so stupid. It's out of character. This is cruel! Please don't make him the father of that kid. We are suffering enough right now watching TV Elliot make out with Angela, we don't need fanfic Elliot to be that stupid! My heart can't take it! I need an Elliot explanation and or a paternity test ASAP! And if he is the father, I want Fin to kick the living crap out of him! My heart is broken...please fix this...
5/24/2021 c8 ManderleyLane
WHAT THE HELL?! Seriously, WHAT THE HELL?!
I am doing my best not to believe a fecking word that is coming out of Kate’s mouth, because I know you wouldn’t do this to us. Right? RIGHT?!
I have not recovered, but I have to say the following...
Before that Kate BS, I like how balance you wrote this. My heart aches for both Elliot and Olivia as the months pass without getting pregnant.
“Olivia, don’t belittle our relationship. It’s not just sex.” Yes! Thank you, Elliot.
WHAT THE HELL?! Seriously, WHAT THE HELL?!
I am doing my best not to believe a fecking word that is coming out of Kate’s mouth, because I know you wouldn’t do this to us. Right? RIGHT?!
I have not recovered, but I have to say the following...
Before that Kate BS, I like how balance you wrote this. My heart aches for both Elliot and Olivia as the months pass without getting pregnant.
“Olivia, don’t belittle our relationship. It’s not just sex.” Yes! Thank you, Elliot.
5/24/2021 c8 lucy2021
Omg please update soon... too much of a cliff hanger! But as always, amazing writing.
Omg please update soon... too much of a cliff hanger! But as always, amazing writing.
5/24/2021 c8 Guest
Is it weird that I love this and actually would like to see this be true and see where you go with it? Something different for a change because I love this story so much and could so much opportunity for this.
Is it weird that I love this and actually would like to see this be true and see where you go with it? Something different for a change because I love this story so much and could so much opportunity for this.
5/24/2021 c8 Guest
omg pls update asap
omg pls update asap
5/24/2021 c8 Guest
This can’t be his baby. It just can’t. There is no way. Olivia would never forgive that. Ever. Even if it was before her. I think Kate had to be lying. She wants Elliot and I bet she tried to seduce him or go after him and he turned her down. So she’s jealous and decides to go after his wife.
This can’t be his baby. It just can’t. There is no way. Olivia would never forgive that. Ever. Even if it was before her. I think Kate had to be lying. She wants Elliot and I bet she tried to seduce him or go after him and he turned her down. So she’s jealous and decides to go after his wife.
5/24/2021 c8 7becky207
I swear that psycho Kate better be lying or manipulating!
Please don’t let that go past the next chapter my poor heart can’t take it!
7becky207I swear that psycho Kate better be lying or manipulating!
Please don’t let that go past the next chapter my poor heart can’t take it!
5/24/2021 c8 16justanotherbookworm78
Well, I can't say I wasn't warned...but this chapter definitely had some twists and turns. My heart goes out to Olivia, with her wanting to have a baby. I hope this will only be a small hiccup in their relationship, and things will get back on track soon. I thought the interactions with the kids was sweet, especially getting the twins ready for kindergarten. As for Kate, and I don't trust the woman in the slightest. Anxious to see how things play out.
16justanotherbookworm78Well, I can't say I wasn't warned...but this chapter definitely had some twists and turns. My heart goes out to Olivia, with her wanting to have a baby. I hope this will only be a small hiccup in their relationship, and things will get back on track soon. I thought the interactions with the kids was sweet, especially getting the twins ready for kindergarten. As for Kate, and I don't trust the woman in the slightest. Anxious to see how things play out.