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5/10/2021 c1 moviemel
Great start to the sequel! Poor Kathleen! I teared up when she ran away. I can't even imagine your own mother not wanting you. It's gut wrenching. Not a Kathy fan anyway, but it this story I really hate her. How do you just leave your kids? Can't wait for the proposal. Going to be so sweet!
5/10/2021 c1 mcamy84
This is going to be another great story! I can't wait to read more! I love how Olivia has bonded with the children so much and how she will do and say anything to protect them. Kathy is so mean, how can she do that to her own children! I can't wait to read more!
5/9/2021 c1 16justanotherbookworm78
Loved this, and it's a great start on what will be a new chapter in Elliot and Oliva's lives. I'll admit, my heart was in my throat when Kathy reappeared, and I wasn't sure what was going to happen next. I don't know how a woman can be so callous toward her own children, but sadly I know that happens all too often in the real world. The scene with Olivia chasing after Kathleen and getting hit by the cab was a real heart-stopper, and I'm so glad she wasn't more seriously hurt. I had tears in my eyes when Olivia admitted to Elliot that she was ready for the next step in their lives.
5/9/2021 c1 viva1215
Great job
5/9/2021 c1 Guest
Her saving the kiddos was perfection. She is their Momma plain and simple! Now to make it official!
5/9/2021 c1 Ninjagirl43
Wonderful story. I can't wait to read more.
5/8/2021 c1 89renegadewriter10
I love this so far! I hope she gets to adopt the kiddos as her own as some point. I love any fics where takes the kids on as her own unfortunately this is only like the 2nd fic I’ve seen that’s like that I can’t wait for more
5/8/2021 c1 spacekitten2700
like read more
5/8/2021 c1 Guest
I love that Elliot asked Cragen for permission. I can’t wait to see what he has planned. I would like to think that is the last we will see if Kathy buy I doubt it.
5/8/2021 c1 Guest
This was so good! I was worried for a bit that Kathy was going to stick around. Poor Liv with her bone chip! But I can’t wait for the proposal. Hoping that’s in the next chapter.
5/8/2021 c1 Guest
Sooo here for this sequel! Update asap girl!
5/8/2021 c1 17Bethxxx0409
Love it and can’t wait for the next update. The reactions when the girls saw Kathy were just perfect
5/8/2021 c1 dawseyfan51
Loveeeeee itttt
5/8/2021 c1 ManderleyLane
You have made my Mothers Day weekend by posting this! (Just don’t tell my kidlets I said that!)

Love this song, love your stories, love your writing!

Domestic EO makes my heart smile. The kitchen scene played perfectly in my head while I read it. I will say it again, I love how you write seamlessly without it coming across as stage directions. The bedroom scene when Liv told Elliot she was called in by Cragen is yet another example of that. It makes it easy for the reader to see the scene with your words.

OH! Just when I think it couldn’t get any better... the Elliot and Cragen convo did me in! So so so brill.

WHAT THE HELL!? Not Kathy! The horror!

And then you made it all right in the end. Of course you did!
5/8/2021 c1 Sacramone12
I LOVE IT! Can’t wait for more
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