for KonoSuba: Tales of the Red Warrior6/20 c1 worom001
"Thinking it over I finally made my decision. Duel Wielding Skill.
I might as well go all in for damage and end my enemies before they have a chance to react,"
That makes no sense. Its you're going for 'before they have a chance to react' then single handed and a rapier/estoc is the way to go.
"Thinking it over I finally made my decision. Duel Wielding Skill.
I might as well go all in for damage and end my enemies before they have a chance to react,"
That makes no sense. Its you're going for 'before they have a chance to react' then single handed and a rapier/estoc is the way to go.
6/11 c4 shemanta830
Bloody hell mate this is gold
It's rough around the edges but good
Ya might want to work on expressing a chatacters facial expression to add a bit of spunk
Bloody hell mate this is gold
It's rough around the edges but good
Ya might want to work on expressing a chatacters facial expression to add a bit of spunk
5/20 c2 dragon slayer of death 98
i hope the pairing is either wiz or luna, they don't get enough love
i hope the pairing is either wiz or luna, they don't get enough love
5/19 c4 Blaze1992
. . . So it's either the blades of Athena from God of War or Scorpions chain dart as his future weapon?
. . . So it's either the blades of Athena from God of War or Scorpions chain dart as his future weapon?
4/27 c4 Guest
I’m surprised he hasn’t made a move on darkness, Aqua or luna
Darkness is practically begging for some fun
And with blood manipulation he could do a lot of kinky bondage stuff she would enjoy
If he soaked his blood in some rope he could have some easy bondage play
With his teeth he could probably role play as a blood demon come to sate his lust on a holy crusader
Maybe with darkness’ satisfied libido she could get her head in the game and be a strong steadfast tank and not a floppy moaning mess of a horny crusader every time she gets hit
She could probably hit more stuff with 2 shields if she ditches her sword and let Kazuma use it when he fights
I’m surprised he hasn’t made a move on darkness, Aqua or luna
Darkness is practically begging for some fun
And with blood manipulation he could do a lot of kinky bondage stuff she would enjoy
If he soaked his blood in some rope he could have some easy bondage play
With his teeth he could probably role play as a blood demon come to sate his lust on a holy crusader
Maybe with darkness’ satisfied libido she could get her head in the game and be a strong steadfast tank and not a floppy moaning mess of a horny crusader every time she gets hit
She could probably hit more stuff with 2 shields if she ditches her sword and let Kazuma use it when he fights
4/27 c4 Guest
I say he could totally kill toads solo if he played hunts right and actually use pure blood manipulation
He could have made some daggers with hollow handles so he could use blood bullet with some piercing damage
On the frogs
Use some bait meat!
Dig a ditch with a lose tree trunk spike and lure it there!
Kill monsters like a human bro!
Be cunning and ruthless
If he could just kill one he could hide in a ditch and wait for other frogs to eat it so he could kill it while it’s distracted
Use a spear or something for a sure kill
He could farm those bitches!
Plus even with no plan he could probably kill it from inside its mouth or on route to its mouth if he angles a long sword to its brain
I say he could totally kill toads solo if he played hunts right and actually use pure blood manipulation
He could have made some daggers with hollow handles so he could use blood bullet with some piercing damage
On the frogs
Use some bait meat!
Dig a ditch with a lose tree trunk spike and lure it there!
Kill monsters like a human bro!
Be cunning and ruthless
If he could just kill one he could hide in a ditch and wait for other frogs to eat it so he could kill it while it’s distracted
Use a spear or something for a sure kill
He could farm those bitches!
Plus even with no plan he could probably kill it from inside its mouth or on route to its mouth if he angles a long sword to its brain
4/27 c3 Guest
Bro it’s “careful” not “carful”
“Adventurer” not “adventure”
Other than that there were some words that kinda sound the same but had a different meaning used but I think those are fine
It’s just that those 2 words are repeatedly used wrong that gets me annoyed
It’s like its on purpose
Is it?
If it is it’s a weird fixation
Bro it’s “careful” not “carful”
“Adventurer” not “adventure”
Other than that there were some words that kinda sound the same but had a different meaning used but I think those are fine
It’s just that those 2 words are repeatedly used wrong that gets me annoyed
It’s like its on purpose
Is it?
If it is it’s a weird fixation
4/27 c1 Guest
Would be cool if he carried blood bags from animals
Would be cool if he carried blood bags from animals
4/11 c1 
2King Kind
the mc knows about one piece with the light logia that can destroy mountain sized trees with no effort
and makes it so nothing can hurt him but he choses blood manipulation. bad choice but blood is cool too.
2King Kindthe mc knows about one piece with the light logia that can destroy mountain sized trees with no effort
and makes it so nothing can hurt him but he choses blood manipulation. bad choice but blood is cool too.
4/6 c4 Guest
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3/14 c4 Dude
I'm so glad you have finally updated this story and it was well worth the wait. I can't remember if you have mentioned it in the earlier chapters, but are shipping your oc with aqua, cause it seems like it to me? I'm not complaining or I'm against it, I'm for it, I'm just wondering if it's gonna be oc x aqua or oc x harem, either or I'm all for it and you have done and an amazing job on this chapter and story as a whole and I look forward to the next update of this story! Great job dude!
I'm so glad you have finally updated this story and it was well worth the wait. I can't remember if you have mentioned it in the earlier chapters, but are shipping your oc with aqua, cause it seems like it to me? I'm not complaining or I'm against it, I'm for it, I'm just wondering if it's gonna be oc x aqua or oc x harem, either or I'm all for it and you have done and an amazing job on this chapter and story as a whole and I look forward to the next update of this story! Great job dude!